VN Ren'Py Origin Story [Development Thread]

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Damien112

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Wow, saw this on motseer's banner and It had me curious enough to read through the entire thread. Gotta say this looks really phenomenal superpowers and metahumans are right in my strike zone so that alone got me hooked, then I saw the gorgeous-looking models and it was pretty much a sealed deal.
Ngl, I'm usually a massive skeptic when it comes to upcoming games and novels since there are so many disappointments but you have actually managed to turn me into a fan. I'm really looking forward to the release and I just might join the Patreon for this after I get my pay next week as a show of support, if nothing else I'm gonna rep the banner for this game with pride.
 

motseer

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Wow, saw this on motseer's banner and It had me curious enough to read through the entire thread. Gotta say this looks really phenomenal superpowers and metahumans are right in my strike zone so that alone got me hooked, then I saw the gorgeous-looking models and it was pretty much a sealed deal.
Ngl, I'm usually a massive skeptic when it comes to upcoming games and novels since there are so many disappointments but you have actually managed to turn me into a fan. I'm really looking forward to the release and I just might join the Patreon for this after I get my pay next week as a show of support, if nothing else I'm gonna rep the banner for this game with pride.
Hey! Welcome aboard! Ya know it's like Arlo Guthrie says on his album "Alice's Restaurant Massacree":

"You know, if one person, just one person, does it, they may think he's
Really sick and they won't take him

And if two people do it, in harmony, they may think they're both faggots and
They won't take either of them

And if three people do it! Can you imagine three people walkin' in, singin'
A bar of "Alice's Restaurant" and walkin' out? They may think it's an
Organization!

And can you imagine fifty people a day? I said FIFTY people a day
Walkin' in, singin' a bar of "Alice's Restaurant" and walkin' out? Friends
They may think it's a Movement, and that's what it is THE Alices's
Restaurant anti-massacre movement! And all you gotta do to join is to

Sing it the next time it comes around on the guitar"

Soooooo... we're just the start m8... here's to the movement!

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Edit: Damn! I almost forgot. Here's lookin' atcha, Bombmaster!

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Wow, saw this on motseer's banner and It had me curious enough to read through the entire thread. Gotta say this looks really phenomenal superpowers and metahumans are right in my strike zone so that alone got me hooked, then I saw the gorgeous-looking models and it was pretty much a sealed deal.
Ngl, I'm usually a massive skeptic when it comes to upcoming games and novels since there are so many disappointments but you have actually managed to turn me into a fan. I'm really looking forward to the release and I just might join the Patreon for this after I get my pay next week as a show of support, if nothing else I'm gonna rep the banner for this game with pride.
Thanks man! I'm glad you like the look of it and I hope it doesn't disappoint!

I am basically an amateur at Daz and Ren'py and pretty much everything else involved in releasing this, so I hope people can look past my newbie flaws and just enjoy the story.

The Character bios mention that Evelyn is still a virgin, but don't say if Riley is. I'd like to know whether she is or not because sloppy second sisters don't interest me.
Riley has a few years on MC so yes it is implied she is no longer a virgin. Content with her will be optional though (and honestly a long time in the future).
 
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johnmnf692

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Thanks man! I'm glad you like the look of it and I hope it doesn't disappoint!

I am basically an amateur at Daz and Ren'py and pretty much everything else involved in releasing this, so I hope people can look past my newbie flaws and just enjoy the story.



Riley has a few years on MC so yes it is implied she is no longer a virgin. Content with her will be optional though (and honestly a long time in the future).
Good luck, Im out
 

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since you plan on having ntr I would advise to put that in the tags.

will save both you and most players like myself a lot of trouble since you wont have to deal with people who get "gotcha" moments and players who dont want ntr in their games can screen this tag off.


wish you all the best

I will see myself out.
 

Jacquesdor

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since you plan on having ntr I would advise to put that in the tags.

will save both you and most players like myself a lot of trouble since you wont have to deal with people who get "gotcha" moments and players who dont want ntr in their games can screen this tag off.


wish you all the best

I will see myself out.
It's a fair point. I've been editing that first post every now and then but the thing I forgot to edit was the tags since I decided there may be some optional NTR (key word being "may").

Thanks anyway!
 
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motseer

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It's a fair point. I've been editing that first post every now and then but the thing I forgot to edit was the tags since I decided there may be some optional NTR (key word being "may").

Thanks anyway!
Yeah, I'm on board either way. I've read your development posts and I think I get that any NTR would be minimal, lite and optional. I will say this: as someone who takes on "kink-shaming, pornocrat wordbenders" on a regular basis, NTR may be more trouble than it's worth. Even when it is just inferred and not seen, it always stirs up shit. If you don't have it, there will be those that press for it - the best I can say about those folks is that it's easy to get their posts deleted by a mod. If you do have it, there will be those that argue what a great story it would be without it and constantly lobby to have you take it out. Those folks tend to be a little more circumspect with wording so it's harder to keep it out of the thread. Either way it will create controversy and noise that you don't need.

But, like I always say, it's your story; tell it how you like it. If it's good you will gain a following.
 
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Jacquesdor

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Yeah, I'm on board either way. I've read your development posts and I think I get that any NTR would be minimal, lite and optional. I will say this: as someone who takes on "kink-shaming, pronocrat wordbenders" on a regular basis, I would still say it may be more trouble than it's worth. NTR, even when it is just inferred and not seen, always stirs up shit. If you don't have it, there will be those that press for it - the best I can say about those folks is that it's easy to get their posts deleted by a mod. If you do have it, there will be those that argue what a great story it would be without it and constantly lobby to have you take it out. Those folks tend to be a little more circumspect with wording so it's harder to keep it out of the thread. Either way it will create controversy and noise that you don't need.

But, like I always say, it's your story; tell it how you like it. If it's good you will gain a following.
Honestly, what I originally had included isn't NTR. It's more voyeurism, watching characters who may or may not be future LIs while they're doing stuff, and extremely minimal amounts of it - like maybe 4 or 5 renders total. But then I started seeing stories from other devs getting the anti-NTR squad on them for even less than that, so I figured I'd have to label it as NTR for transparency's sake and make it optional... and if I'm going to do that I might as well include more. But none of that is set in stone yet.
 
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Honestly, what I originally had included isn't NTR. It's more voyeurism, watching characters who may or may not be future LIs while they're doing stuff, and extremely minimal amounts of it - like maybe 4 or 5 renders total. But then I started seeing stories from other devs getting the anti-NTR squad on them for even less than that, so I figured I'd have to label it as NTR for transparency's sake and make it optional... and if I'm going to do that I might as well include more. But none of that is set in stone yet.
Yeah, I knew that but you can see the reaction just from the mention of NTR. Either way. Best if you decide one way or the other before you publish. Jus' Sayin' :cool:
 
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