VN Ren'Py Nomadic Journey [Ch. 1] [Disguised Dino]

[DisguisedDino]

Men this redhead character is one the most georgeus characters i seen in this site, it really makes me want to play the game, even when i exclusively play incest games View attachment 2739075

Here, a little gift for you! Glad you liked

 

[darlic]

This one looks interesting, but I need the planned genre to get a clear idea of where this is going

 

[Pitrik]

Looks interesting but before playing It i wait the planned tags

 

[Prokopije]

Hello. Is this game going to be mandatory fuckfest or is it possible to choose one girl and stick with her through entire gameplay?

 

[don't censor it]

what will be the future tags? (if they have).
will there be incest, harem, ntr?

 

[jdw6]

Noted

Pref: Put that in the setup area, not on 1st run -- or at least pre-populate the text box. Starting a VN and having to name the characters is a HUGE annoyance.

(These are books. You don't open up The Three Musketeers and expect the ability to rename Dartanian. Why people do for VNs is... to each their own, thus put it in Settings.)

 

[incest lover m/s]

What are the planned tags?
Will there be incest?

 

[Pmaria]

Pros : the Models, cg's and mostly the redhead

Cons: Everything else, story, approach and since the MC will go from country to country no more from the redhead after a while

Probably better as short, standalone games if not a total rebuild

 

[Aristos]

The black girl from the banner looks gorgeous, but those tan lines seem out of place for me. That skin is as white as the other girls'

 

[punisher2099]

DisguisedDino That planned tag list final? No harem planned? solo routes only? And no ntr/sharing planned?

 

[Pablim1]

I don't really plan games on 0.1, but man this looks promissing. Mr. dev, I also don't like to mess with game creation, but please thow a bone for the harem connoisseurs out there

 

[kingcobra68]

great start look forward to seeing more

 

[consumptionist]

terrible first impression for lack of a spell checker. i would think that was key for a first release for any new dev.
art is ok.
plot seems mediocre. no signs in this of being beyond that. it is just not being worked.
writing is.. well you can fap to it. a spell check may have got it a little beyond that but it's not looking like the N will play much of a role.

sorry but this is all the feedback i honestly have. it just felt rushed and unplanned.
good luck either way dev.

 

[goulet1995]

Hi there! If I put some out of ordinary fetish it will be avoidable. Soon I will add all the planned tags for the game, this release didn't have any choice because it was an introduction to the characters, but I intend to make the game more complex in the future. I want to tell a story that is in my mind, but letting the player decide what he wants to see in the game.

will the lesbian scene you said you have planned be avoidable lesbian in male mc games is a huge turnoff for me

 

[Anarchy2000]

The simple fact that instead of an 18-year-old mc wanting to have sex with his mother and sisters, we have a big old mc chasing young girls, that's enough for me not to try kkkk

 

[DisguisedDino]

terrible first impression for lack of a spell checker. i would think that was key for a first release for any new dev.
art is ok.
plot seems mediocre. no signs in this of being beyond that. it is just not being worked.
writing is.. well you can fap to it. a spell check may have got it a little beyond that but it's not looking like the N will play much of a role.

sorry but this is all the feedback i honestly have. it just felt rushed and unplanned.
good luck either way dev.

Thank you very much for the feedback! English is not my first language, and I am sorry for the mistakes. I know this first release is far from being perfect, and I understand the feeling of a rushed release. I have a job that take most of my time and I decided to make this game in my free time to do something different from the boring things I do everyday. I will do my best to improve every aspect of the game, and honestly, I just want to have some fun making these. Thanks again for the comment, I really do apreciate

 

[DisguisedDino]

DisguisedDino That planned tag list final? No harem planned? solo routes only? And no ntr/sharing planned?

Hi
It is not the final tags, I will add some more later that I forgot, sorry this weekend was hard for me, I had a lot of things in my mind.

 

[DisguisedDino]

Hello. Is this game going to be mandatory fuckfest or is it possible to choose one girl and stick with her through entire gameplay?

Hello
I will add the choices for the next releases, you will be able to choose who you want to have a relation with, I'm writing down all the feedback to implement

 

[DisguisedDino]

The black girl from the banner looks gorgeous, but those tan lines seem out of place for me. That skin is as white as the other girls'

Sorry I will fix it hahaha

 

[DisguisedDino]

Pros : the Models, cg's and mostly the redhead

Cons: Everything else, story, approach and since the MC will go from country to country no more from the redhead after a while

Probably better as short, standalone games if not a total rebuild

Thanks for the feedback! Well, actually, she will appear a lot, she is my favorite. I have some things in mind to make her
recurring