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SharkoonMan

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I noticed at a few points it randomly shifts to referring to the MC & GF as "Ethan & Olivia", which aren't even the default names. What's up with that?
Damn i completly forgot to change them at the end, i just use them as filled names, because $gf and $ name looks weird for me when writing
 

SharkoonMan

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A suggestion for SharkoonMan

I know it's more work to change things, but from a dev standpoint I would strongly suggest NOT making unique passages for the same room/area for new days - some bugs are related to the way these are linked.

HTML:
<!--
Instead of having different blocks for different days like this:
-->
<tw-passagedata pid="n1" name="LivingRoom4">

<tw-passagedata pid="n2" name="LivingRoom6">
<!--
You should route everything through the same block,
checking for conditions then sending to new blocks; i.e.
-->
<tw-passagedata pid="n3" name="LivingRoomMain">

<<if $day eq 4>>
    <<link "Do Gardening">>
        <<include GardenMeetLuke>>
    <</link>>
<<elseif $day eq 6>>
    <<link "Do Gardening">>
        <<include GardenMeetSuntan>>
    <</link>>
<</if>>
 
</tw-passagedata>
Note this is kinda pseudocode, I omitted some of the stuff twine puts in but you get the idea...

Problem is now everytime you move to a new location or have a new day you need to create a new passage, and make sure all other events link to that new passage as well, very laborious.
Thanks again for taking your time and trying to help me <3 I will look into it and try to implement what u have written, but im still limited in what im able to "code".
The Problem is that for me, the game works "perfectly" I dont have the problem people mention here, so its kinda hard for me implement what people want Its kinda hard for me to look at the side of the player who doesnt know what i know or doesnt play it as i intendet it to be. But thats my fault and I will try to improve my thinking in the future.
Many people also mentioned the Ui, but I dont really have an idea what to do with it, because for me its fine, but that doesnt matter if the player doesnt like it. So I have to probably add a whole new one, but like u mentioned its a lot of work to add stuff for me because i do every passage "new". So its kind of a bummer for me to add a new Ui hahah
I also thought the new slightly changed Ui would improve it, but doesnt seem like that. Well I think thats the life of a Developer, thinking its good and then seeing how its not working hahah
Damn now im ranting a lot here, kinda embarrasing. Well to finish my nonsence here, I really appreciate your help and your nice encourraging words, I know the game is far from being perfect, but it really makes me happy to see people invested in it <3
 

Brandu33

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I had a quick look at it yesterday, I did not really play it or read it, but clicked and clicked to advance and see how thing were...
You improved some stuffs, the game has some quality, but the UI is still not very easy to use.
Some of the icons are outside of the box.
They're translucent and thus not easy to see.

The pool loop is no more, which is good, but if one is dumb enough (in real life whom would click on that link?!) to open the mysterious link and to talk to the dude, and ask for a brainwash (one again, whom would do that ?!), one can not close it and go back to the game... At one point the only way to get out of the internet was to click on : go to sleep, so MC basically woke up, turned is computer on and went back to sleep...
Since you can do whatever you want in whichever order, the description can be a bit messy.

If you want the players to have a turtle and to care for it, make it part of your story. You know: "if there's a gun in the first act, you must use it in the third one", make them let it wander in the garden, or play with it, then it could lead to dialogues with the neighbours, or they could use it to "transport" messages on its back, which could lead to a turtle web spy. ;)

Last thing: it looks like you're going for a cheat them all, and a sub MC (once again I did not read all the text, so I might have missed some choices), if so be straightforward about it, then you'll find people whom enjoy that, and avoid disappointing others.
 

abhorash84

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While trying to use joiplay on android to play latest version when you access the computer you get stuck, the return button is inaccessible under the chrome link icon and after the first event to watch the fetish content it looks like "goto sleep" is inaccessible under the gta link icon.
 

SharkoonMan

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I thought SharkoonMan was going to change that this version.
I would like to keep the cheating part with the moving, but im giving the player the option for your gf to stay faithful or not after the accident she has with Logan. I like the thought of them both making a "mistake" but then open up more and talk abou their feelings. Because the story up until now was a emotional rollercoaster for both of them and the final is the mistake they both make. Its like a finish to a chapter in their life ( does that make sense haha). But I added the option on Patreon to decide if your gf stays faithful or not after that. So you can decide again what u like. But right now theres only the faithful one. Nd with faithful i mean is that she doesnt do it behind his back and they talk what they like :D
 

SharkoonMan

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Oct 21, 2018
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I had a quick look at it yesterday, I did not really play it or read it, but clicked and clicked to advance and see how thing were...
You improved some stuffs, the game has some quality, but the UI is still not very easy to use.
Some of the icons are outside of the box.
They're translucent and thus not easy to see.

The pool loop is no more, which is good, but if one is dumb enough (in real life whom would click on that link?!) to open the mysterious link and to talk to the dude, and ask for a brainwash (one again, whom would do that ?!), one can not close it and go back to the game... At one point the only way to get out of the internet was to click on : go to sleep, so MC basically woke up, turned is computer on and went back to sleep...
Since you can do whatever you want in whichever order, the description can be a bit messy.

If you want the players to have a turtle and to care for it, make it part of your story. You know: "if there's a gun in the first act, you must use it in the third one", make them let it wander in the garden, or play with it, then it could lead to dialogues with the neighbours, or they could use it to "transport" messages on its back, which could lead to a turtle web spy. ;)

Last thing: it looks like you're going for a cheat them all, and a sub MC (once again I did not read all the text, so I might have missed some choices), if so be straightforward about it, then you'll find people whom enjoy that, and avoid disappointing others.
OKay I will test it on some mroe Browsers next Update, Chrome was working fine for me with the Ui haha

Yea i dont realyl have a time system and it would be to much work to add one in the earlier chapters, if i add one i would only do it in the newer Updates.

Yes thanks for the tip, I will try to implement the Turtle bette in he future :D

Mhh i dont really have a 100% plan where I want to go, normally I just write a rough mindmap for a scene that is happening, but im not planing a lot in the future ( maybe thats where the mistakes come from cough cough )
What I can say is that I want the gf on the cuckold route to do stuff with other man but I will let the player decide if shes cheating or not. But I will probably keep the player more submissive
 

SharkoonMan

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Is there gonna be a swinging route where you don't have to cheat while helping your friend move? Cause if you go in with 0 horny, it still gives you no choice.
The moving route will have a cheating scene because i want to for character development and as a final for the "precucking route" but after that you can decide what happenes, if she cheats or does it with you :D
 
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SharkoonMan

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Don't bother downloading if you aren't here for the cuck route. The female slave route is non-existent and ends the morning of day 2.
Im sorry i have written a lot for the cuck route until now, but I will try to continue the other route too
 

SharkoonMan

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View attachment 3271584
So I am not saying this UI is bad

But this UI is bad


Those transparent pictures are horrible

Big fat letters that say

Shower
Computer
Pet
Outside

aren't always a bad idea


Then you have the two options above them who for some reason aren't transparent pictures



"Check yourself" doesn't even need to be an option.
Just put the information of the current MC above stats.
Perhaps add a picture for that MC so it becomes easily identifyable as to who it currently is.

Name
Picture
Stats

Or
Picture
Name
Stats
Yea u are probably right haha The Problem is or was that I thought I fixed it by making the backgroung more blurred, but it seems like I was wrong Its kinda hard for me to get a feel what the player likes, for me I thought the Ui looked great tbh hahah but I got alot of "hate" for it, so I will probably change it, but its a lot of work because right now I have no idea how and to what i want to change it. Its also a lot of work because every day is a unique passage. But I will try my best
 

DarkDaemonX

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I would like to keep the cheating part with the moving, but im giving the player the option for your gf to stay faithful or not after the accident she has with Logan. I like the thought of them both making a "mistake" but then open up more and talk abou their feelings. Because the story up until now was a emotional rollercoaster for both of them and the final is the mistake they both make. Its like a finish to a chapter in their life ( does that make sense haha). But I added the option on Patreon to decide if your gf stays faithful or not after that. So you can decide again what u like. But right now theres only the faithful one. Nd with faithful i mean is that she doesnt do it behind his back and they talk what they like :D
Did you at least change the scene so it fits with their personalities, because when you added it it felt like different characters taking control over them.
 
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Im sorry i have written a lot for the cuck route until now, but I will try to continue the other route too
As a serious question: are you licensing the RL pr0n pictures you're using, or just scraping them? i.e. some have various levels of masking, some are pulled from (much much) larger sets but without faces showing.

As a head's up, if you're doing this via scraping & making it HTML, I've some bad news for you.

Specifically, you're running on a US platform ( ) and new Laws about "Revenge Porn" also cover a few of your images.

Which, given how the Laws are written, translates to "You're Legally Liable" and also "You're fucked". Please don't be this dumb in public.

TL;DR

There's a really good reason PornHub removed like 60% of it's entire DB and using scraped images from before that purge, whelp. At the very least, don't be on Patreon, where you *are* legally accessible, since you've given them your fucking bank details to get subs.
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny

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As a serious question: are you licensing the RL pr0n pictures you're using, or just scraping them? i.e. some have various levels of masking, some are pulled from (much much) larger sets but without faces showing.

As a head's up, if you're doing this via scraping & making it HTML, I've some bad news for you.

Specifically, you're running on a US platform ( ) and new Laws about "Revenge Porn" also cover a few of your images.

Which, given how the Laws are written, translates to "You're Legally Liable" and also "You're fucked". Please don't be this dumb in public.

TL;DR

There's a really good reason PornHub removed like 60% of it's entire DB and using scraped images from before that purge, whelp. At the very least, don't be on Patreon, where you *are* legally accessible, since you've given them your fucking bank details to get subs.
huh? Most of the images in his game look like they come from mainstream porn.... while in a worst-case scenario that would open him up to liability from those companies, I really don't think that's likely. What's more likely is some holier-than-art-thou patreon admin comes across his page and makes an example of non-licensed images -which is still a low chance.

I say this just having seen the number of avn devs operating on patreon with far more flagrant material in their games; nearly none encountering any pushback.
 

Pr0GamerJohnny

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Seriously what the fuck is with NTR games forcing the MC to get his dick wet his ass needs to be in a cage and humiliated not fucking anybody fucking is only reserved for the love interest to get dicked down by other bigger and better dicks.
you're describing ntr games not sharing games. The new tags are badly needed.
 

xslutz

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The moving route will have a cheating scene because i want to for character development and as a final for the "precucking route" but after that you can decide what happenes, if she cheats or does it with you :D
I like the cuck route, but I despise actual cheating so I don't want that to be the avenue for progressing in the cuck route personally. If you see that as the proper path for your character development though, then it is what it is. I definitely think the cuck route should have an option where you don't cheat on your gf to get there though.
 
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