VN Ren'Py No Expectation [Ch.2] [Mr Georgie]

[hirikumo]

A nice, sweet game. It was also longer than I expected it to be as well. Even though I didn't dislike "Hearts under the Red Sky", this game was a definite upgrade. When this game is finished, I look forward to reviewing it and sending some bucks your way, Dev.

 

[HueyFreeman32]

any chance with the aunt?

 

[Moviebuff3000]

Hopefully we can bang the BF's mom. That would be the main reason for me to download this.

 

[onknight]

This is very well written. My compliments to the author I'm looking forward to the rest of the book
Here's my opinion so far although we had a great time with the female leader the first chapter. I'm thinking something special is going to happen with that stripper. if she gets a job as writer at the same company he works for . I think the distance is going to be too much for the other relationship. He'll end up with the stripper cause Long distance never works.

 

[Blue5591]

Pleasantly surprised. The initial conflict was dealt with in a way to show inner growth of the protagonist, while introducing another character to lessen the burden. The chemistry was there and nothing felt forced. It also ended at a point where I'm actually interested to see what's next. Dialogue felt awkward at points, but it wasn't too distracting.

 

[JenMistress]

So, gave this game a chance.

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Thank you for this game, and looking forward for more.

 

[THE KILLER 13]

no incest, no harem, no ntr, just weak tags, in short: weak game

 

[onknight]

no incest, no harem, no ntr, just weak tags, in short: weak game

A game doesn't need those things to be good just a decent plot and this has the start of a really good plot
Give the author a chance to get going before you say it's awful
I for one I'm not in the incest Harem games are fine but they don't necessarily need to be in this one

I think he's off to a fine start I'm sorry you disagree

 

[THE KILLER 13]

A game doesn't need those things to be good just a decent plot and this has the start of a really good plot
Give the author a chance to get going before you say it's awful
I for one I'm not in the incest Harem games are fine but they don't necessarily need to be in this one

I think he's off to a fine start I'm sorry you disagree

I wish him to move forward and be successful but I won't change my opinion. Even though the plot and gameplay are cool, these fetishes (tags) don't turn me on, but that's okay, everyone has their own opinion

 

[ArhraCole]

So, gave this game a chance.

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Thank you for this game, and looking forward for more.

Yeah I had a very similar reaction to the end of the story for this chapter of the game, and other than a few phrasing issues and one or two instances of the wrong character talking during a scene (one point in the shower comes to mind) this was a very very good first chapter and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story develops.

 

[Uxeki44]

no incest, no harem, no ntr, just weak tags, in short: weak game

no incest, no harem, no ntr, just weak tags, in short: weak game
Are you sure about that?

 

[snow123789456]

i like the game thus far,

 

[Mr Georgie]

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[Mr Georgie]

Quite promising start, though still not much content. I wish a good luck for developer and not to forget sounds during animated scenes

It's hard to find good-quality sounds. Most of them are awkward or just weird. I'm sorry if it's a turndown for you, but If I do this, I'll do it with the best quality I can.

Thanks for the good wishes, I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

 

[Mr Georgie]

Yeah I had a very similar reaction to the end of the story for this chapter of the game, and other than a few phrasing issues and one or two instances of the wrong character talking during a scene (one point in the shower comes to mind) this was a very very good first chapter and I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story develops.

Glad to read you enjoyed it! I'll check the instances you mention.

 

[TheDick69+]

As I'm a very emotional guy (HSP for they that now), this was a real rollercoaster with my feelings. But in a good way, both the happy parts and sad parts made me feel a lot.

I just love the humor also, just my kind of humor.

Waiting for unstallment 2 then!

 

[Mr Georgie]

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[hirikumo]

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Wishing you and your wife all the best, Mr. Georgie. Hope she makes a full and speedy recovery.

 

[Mr Georgie]

Wishing you and your wife all the best, Mr. Georgie. Hope she makes a full and speedy recovery.

Thank you so much, hirikumo!