[VN] [Ren'Py] [Abandoned] Marvin Journey [v1.0] [Grostek's Dev]

Grostek

New Member
Oct 19, 2017
10
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#1
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Overiew:

A Visual Novel that tells the story of Marvin and his faithful squire.
Updated: 13.06.2018
Developer/Publisher: grosteksdev
Censorship: None
OS: Windows/Linux
Language: English
Version:1.0
Genre:
VN,Romantic, Blowjob, Cowgirl, Fantasy

How to Install:
extract the files in the chosen directory

Downloads:
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APK:
This port is not released by developer, download at your own risk.
Screenshots:

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Sep 6, 2017
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#4
Is it me or lately we have been seeing this "art style" a lot? Like everyone is jumping on the patreon-bucks wagon...

Anyway, if this help increase the quantity of porn games, i'm cool with it.
I mean, this might encourage other developers (or the same) to create better games, even if the amount of bad ones raises too, but who cares as long as the erotic games market expands.
 

Grostek

New Member
Oct 19, 2017
10
9
#13
Hello everyone, I've been waiting for more hard criticism, especially about art, I'm a big fan of H-games and last week I was excited to try to make my own, it's the first time I program something out of college, worse than most games here but everyone has to start from somewhere, thanks to all positive and negative reviews, I hope to improve my art, codes and texts (I'm not even a native English speaker) to do better in the future.

Note: Just to make it clear I was a little embarrassed to make a patreon for a simple and amateur game, I have no intention of making money with this game, I just made it to meet all [REQ] rules.
 

Infamy

Well-Known Member
Sep 25, 2016
2,145
1,048
#14
Hello everyone, I've been waiting for more hard criticism, especially about art, I'm a big fan of H-games and last week I was excited to try to make my own, it's the first time I program something out of college, worse than most games here but everyone has to start from somewhere, thanks to all positive and negative reviews, I hope to improve my art, codes and texts (I'm not even a native English speaker) to do better in the future.

Note: Just to make it clear I was a little embarrassed to make a patreon for a simple and amateur game, I have no intention of making money with this game, I just made it to meet all [REQ] rules.
Honestly dude if you are looking to make a game with passion no one faults you for that just gotta make the case you are gonna try and make up with gameplay for your lacking art you will be all right just do you and show that you are passionate about the games you make the rest will follow.
 
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Apr 22, 2018
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#15
@Grostek - dude you have our respect for trying (i think that this is place that all new authors are welcome), but, as far as the execution of your ideas goes ... not so much. And I know that i'm not in position to criticize (i do not have successful game behind my back) but please ... your visual arts ... you have to do something. :)
 

Pattitto00

Well-Known Member
May 20, 2018
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#17
Maybe a minimum quality before starting to share your work...triying is one phase of succes, but maybe improve would be better
 
Jun 16, 2017
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#19
>thankyoufornotaboryingme.jpg
anon if you can't hire an artist or don't have skills to make art yourself just make text only game
it's game play that's important content is really an addon
i mean look at corruption of champions
 
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Delmach

Active Member
Oct 3, 2017
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#20
Already better than I am able. And you know what, at least it is indeed original art. Thats already something the vast majority does not have. Pushing sliders does not make you an artist.

Improving art surely takes time, but I played text only games that are so superior in writing/characters/worldbuilding, that I could not even care less about no art at all. What im saying is, try to make the other things interesting, let your game shine in at least one category. And someday you could put all together for the greatest dish ever. Or not, who knows.
 

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