VN Ren'Py Abandoned Marvin Journey [v1.0] [Grostek's Dev]

[gramaton]

devs hope for easy money, cuz everybody on dis site is fkn perverts, right? we'll happily give all the fkn money for even horrible drawn asses and pussies... cuz, u know, im fapping all the fkn time on childish cartoons ffs

 

[Mondoblasto]

Hello everyone, I've been waiting for more hard criticism, especially about art, I'm a big fan of H-games and last week I was excited to try to make my own, it's the first time I program something out of college, worse than most games here but everyone has to start from somewhere, thanks to all positive and negative reviews, I hope to improve my art, codes and texts (I'm not even a native English speaker) to do better in the future.

Note: Just to make it clear I was a little embarrassed to make a patreon for a simple and amateur game, I have no intention of making money with this game, I just made it to meet all [REQ] rules.

Don't know where this game may go (or not go), but one thing I'll say is to keep working and doing your art. Doesn't really matter why you do it, just do it for art. Art for your expressions, art for your emotions, whatever strikes your fancy. Everyone does and has to start somewhere.

Even pro artists, like for example cartoonists, will have their style change over a long period of time. If you look at Peanuts, Garfield, or Foxtrot, what they started with is not the same as their later work.

 

[ViktorReznov]

well, im still saying, we need a MS paint tag, and more now.

 

[Doublefrost]

The art is definitely terrible, but it'll be interesting to see if this manages to get a decent storyline and actual game completed, art aside. I mean, you can always just change the art later or redo it.

 

[Deleted member 635942]

I hear what you saying, just... i feel with anything in life, moderation. Too much and it becomes saturated.
Look at mainstream porn, the same moans that all the girls make, same shitty poses and those fucking weird mouth poses whilst being fucked.. just disgusting. Amateur porn and incest is now the fan favorite it seems.
So i hope that too many devs do not spoil Indy game development in the future with too many badly made games.

Is it me or lately we have been seeing this "art style" a lot? Like everyone is jumping on the patreon-bucks wagon...

Anyway, if this help increase the quantity of porn games, i'm cool with it.
I mean, this might encourage other developers (or the same) to create better games, even if the amount of bad ones raises too, but who cares as long as the erotic games market expands.

 

[Arius Zauber]

This game blinds better than sulfuric acid in the eyes.

 

[ZioBenito]

why?!?!??! Oo

 

[thecardinal]

I hear what you saying, just... i feel with anything in life, moderation. Too much and it becomes saturated.
Look at mainstream porn, the same moans that all the girls make, same shitty poses and those fucking weird mouth poses whilst being fucked.. just disgusting. Amateur porn and incest is now the fan favorite it seems.
So i hope that too many devs do not spoil Indy game development in the future with too many badly made games.

Yeah, good thing mainstream porn doesn't have incest, can you imagine if they did?

It already seems that every video is a Sister/Aunt/Mom video. I'm in my 20s and I have seen people younger than I am play milfs. But maybe we watch different porn.

 

[Deleted member 635942]

Either I don't follow what you are trying to tell me or you did not understand what i meant..
"Amateur porn AND incest" I think is where the confusion came in.

Yeah, good thing mainstream porn doesn't have incest, can you imagine if they did?

It already seems that every video is a Sister/Aunt/Mom video. I'm in my 20s and I have seen people younger than I am play milfs. But maybe we watch different porn.

 

[UpSized]

1/10 art you need to get better at drawing or get a real artist

 

[meiameiameia]

Esse é o Brasil que eu quero

 

[jesusjackct]

i'll put up a mod link for this game, it deserves more attention

 

[UNNI_FIED]

The game stays dead