VN HTML Love, Corruption, & Bimbos [v0.5] [Lamebrain]

[Lamebrained]

What's the difference? I don't even want to google this stuff...

In very simple terms:
Netori: MC steals someone elses girlfriend/wife (which is what this game will have.)
Netorare: Someone else stealing MC's girlfriend/wife.
Netorase: Basically cuckolding where the MC wants other men fuck his wife/girlfriend.

This is just a very rough and simple explanation without mentioning stuff like NTR A,B,C and BSS for example.

I know some threads devolve into discussions on what NTR means and it how people define it, so let's not go there and know that netori is the only thing that's going to be in this.

 

[HeavyMetalSuizid]

In very simple terms:
Netori: MC steals someone elses girlfriend/wife (which is what this game will have.)
Netorare: Someone else stealing MC's girlfriend/wife.
Netorase: Basically cuckolding where the MC wants other men fuck his wife/girlfriend.

This is just a very rough and simple explanation without mentioning stuff like NTR A,B,C and BSS for example.

I know some threads devolve into discussions on what NTR means and it how people define it, so let's not go there and know that netori is the only thing that's going to be in this.

If you mention it, I have to ask what A, B, C and BSS are. If only Japan could spare this effort for its birth rates, though.

 

[Lamebrained]

If you mention it, I have to ask what A, B, C and BSS are. If only Japan could spare this effort for its birth rates, though.

Sent you a pm

 

[Repreive]

If you mention it, I have to ask what A, B, C and BSS are. If only Japan could spare this effort for its birth rates, though.

It's akin to the difference between sadism and masochism; in the case of NeToRi, it's closer to sadism...
As you derive enjoyment in seeing the theft of another's lover from the perspective of the thief.

In the case of NTR as most know it, NeToRare... You get off on seeing the perspective of the one whom has had their lover stolen; a perspective which only masochists that can get off to, as it's derived from the shame of being aroused by another person plapping your lover better than you.

Game Dev' seems to have some of these mixed up.

Know your NTR folks, someday this knowledge may save your life.
...Probably not, but meh.

 

[Lamebrained]

0.2 has been released for the $4 and up tiers on Patreon. If you subscribe, make sure you've got your Discord account linked to your Patreon account.

Public release is in 7 days!

 

[lordfridge9]

NGL, the "bimbo" versions of "sis" and "mom" are kinda ugly imo. I don't know what I was expecting but certainly not that

Love route is quite simple but will require dev to flex some writing muscles so that's gonna be interesting.
Corruption is pretty cool, especially with girls getting "extra" special fetishes

 

[honeybadger6969]

NGL, the "bimbo" versions of "sis" and "mom" are kinda ugly imo. I don't know what I was expecting but certainly not that

Love route is quite simple but will require dev to flex some writing muscles so that's gonna be interesting.
Corruption is pretty cool, especially with girls getting "extra" special fetishes

The mom is definitely ugly - far worse than the untransformed model; she looks older. The sister looks ok, but neither look particularly like bimbos.

Was kind of disappointed that there wasn't much progression of existing characters in 0.2 - only new characters...

 

[lordfridge9]

The mom is definitely ugly - far worse than the untransformed model; she looks older. The sister looks ok, but neither look particularly like bimbos.

Was kind of disappointed that there wasn't much progression of existing characters in 0.2 - only new characters...

0.2 far smaller than 0.1 then?

 

[honeybadger6969]

0.2 far smaller than 0.1 then?

Yeah, it was quite a small update

 

[Lamebrained]

Was kind of disappointed that there wasn't much progression of existing characters in 0.2 - only new characters...

Not quite true as Mark was an existing character with scenes in 0.1.

Yeah, it was quite a small update

Sorry to hear you felt that way. I hope I can do better in the next update.

I do think that's the nature of how the the game is structured as you can get through it super quickly. Like, there is nothing padding out the runtime such as grinding, puzzles, or stuff along those lines. But if we look at word count (not a great way to measure length, I admit,) then 0.2 is slightly above 1/4 of 0.1 and considering that it took me about 4 months to get 0.1 together and 0.2 took roughly 21 days then it's about on par.

 

[honeybadger6969]

Not quite true as Mark was an existing character with scenes in 0.1.



Sorry to hear you felt that way. I hope I can do better in the next update.

I do think that's the nature of how the the game is structured as you can get through it super quickly. Like, there is nothing padding out the runtime such as grinding, puzzles, or stuff along those lines. But if we look at word count (not a great way to measure length, I admit,) then 0.2 is slightly above 1/4 of 0.1 and considering that it took me about 4 months to get 0.1 together and 0.2 took roughly 21 days then it's about on par.

Fair, I'm definitely not advocating for mini-games/grinding or otherwise. But I think the reason it felt short to me was because there were not that many 'scenes', arguably of the scenes that were there, they may or may not have been more descriptive/longer than those in 0.1.

 

[Lamebrained]

Fair, I'm definitely not advocating for mini-games/grinding or otherwise. But I think the reason it felt short to me was because there were not that many 'scenes', arguably of the scenes that were there, they may or may not have been more descriptive/longer than those in 0.1.

Totally understand that. The word count got quite inflated due to some of the "interactions" between characters. There are usually some minor changes in some of the interactions depending on what route you are, but there is one in particular in 0.2 where there are major dialogue changes if one of the characters is on the corruption route than on love/bimbo. More of a test to see if people like it and if it's worth doing going forward.

I do have some plans to ease the absence of scenes going forward as well, and hopefully make updates feel more 'full.' I can't promise that'll be in 0.3, but definitely in 0.4

 

[Lamebrained]

OP has been updated with 0.2 links.

 

[akinit]

Discord link doesn't work btw.

 

[oh45]

Minor typo. HTML file line 7274 (5thdayabigailhelp, $abilove case) "pretty that it" likely was intended to be "pretty sure that it".

EDIT - the Discord link on the OP is no longer valid.

 

[Gizmoman]

Sorry to hear you felt that way. I hope I can do better in the next update.

I do think that's the nature of how the the game is structured as you can get through it super quickly. Like, there is nothing padding out the runtime such as grinding, puzzles, or stuff along those lines. But if we look at word count (not a great way to measure length, I admit,) then 0.2 is slightly above 1/4 of 0.1 and considering that it took me about 4 months to get 0.1 together and 0.2 took roughly 21 days then it's about on par.

Don't take it to heart, small updates are also updates, it might just mean that people don't feel the need to check back in every new update and instead maybe just once in a 3 or so.

Haven't tried 0.2, but I did really enjoy 0.1. One issue is that by the nature of the theme, everything is always going to feel shorter because you have to add at least different scenes for every encounter.

 

[Lamebrained]

Minor typo. HTML file line 7274 (5thdayabigailhelp, $abilove case) "pretty that it" likely was intended to be "pretty sure that it".

EDIT - the Discord link on the OP is no longer valid.

Fixed, very helpful, thank you! Discord link has also been fixed, no idea why it expired.

Don't take it to heart, small updates are also updates, it might just mean that people don't feel the need to check back in every new update and instead maybe just once in a 3 or so.

Haven't tried 0.2, but I did really enjoy 0.1. One issue is that by the nature of the theme, everything is always going to feel shorter because you have to add at least different scenes for every encounter.

Yeah, I know. I'm not overly worried about it, just felt the need to clarify. Glad to hear you enjoyed 0.1!

 

[Landladies & Tenants]

Thanks for this, excellent writing.

Will there be any inclusion of pregnancy? Realporn makes that hard, but even just talking about it in the Sarah corruption route was really hot. Hope you'll consider doing more impregnation talk at the very least.

 

[The Nut1138]

I actually quite enjoyed this. I hope to see regular updates.

 

[Lamebrained]

Thanks for this, excellent writing.

Will there be any inclusion of pregnancy? Realporn makes that hard, but even just talking about it in the Sarah corruption route was really hot. Hope you'll consider doing more impregnation talk at the very least.

I do hope to implement it somehow near the end. How I'd do that is still up in the air however. I will definitely be adding more talk about it like I did with Sarah, but again, still unsure on which routes I'll be doing that on beyond Sarah's corruption route.