This is good. Went through making all bimbo choices, thoroughly enjoyed it - a good amount of content for a first release, this actually gives you an idea of how it will feel to play for an extended period of time. I'm genuinely excited for more! Gonna experiment with other routes now, but I suspect I'll end up going for bimbo/love more than corruption just based on the first branch in the road.
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- Dec 13, 2022
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I liked it all, I'm not going to rant or I don't know how many words it's going to take, but I'm curious about one thing so far, will there be more MC to woman transformations or not?
- Oct 18, 2020
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Cool idea, pretty straight forward, VERY high text amount. IF I were you, I would focus on building the game with your mechanics further - but increase the amount of visual feedback GREATLY, and keep your nice writing style =)
I'm saying there are surprisingly few images and scenes here. Which is entirely understandable, but thats also the main weakness. I like the game, its a nice lil twine aventure so far, with a lot of soul, despite appearances.
So more pics and visual elements, keep the super cool text effects (I love twine text effects) and good luck fleshing out this story more - hehehe
I'm saying there are surprisingly few images and scenes here. Which is entirely understandable, but thats also the main weakness. I like the game, its a nice lil twine aventure so far, with a lot of soul, despite appearances.
So more pics and visual elements, keep the super cool text effects (I love twine text effects) and good luck fleshing out this story more - hehehe
- Oct 19, 2019
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Netori is the only kind of NTR I care for, so that's primo to hear.
It feels like a cross between the typical HTML porn games where you bang the whole town starting with your immediate family, and stuff like Superhuman and Parasyte but more comical instead of being dark.
I like it so far and hope it gets more soon.
I like it so far and hope it gets more soon.
- Dec 4, 2023
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There's a bit of that in the park scene between Kate and Alan. But yeah, it's my favorite part to write so I definitely want to involve the characters with each other more in the future.
Yes, but it's not the focus of the game. I do plan to have it affect the MC more over time as you make those kind of decisions.
Maybe, but it's not on the agenda as of right now at least.
More pictures has been the most common thing I've heard, so for the next release I plan to add more to not just the new content, but also the 0.1 content.
Can't deny that I got inspiration from both of them!
I'm going to come out and say that I absolutely loved this. This is probably the first new ("adult/erotic") title I've thoroughly enjoyed in a long time, despite Bimbos really not being my thing. That's not to say it's perfect (it's a 0.1 after all) but it's a great start. While the game itself throws shade at the "love" path, I found those routes to consistently be the most engaging despite the lack of immediate full-on sex outside of dreams. It's true that it's not as much of a slow burn as the intro for it suggests - in particular with the first pair - but the writing is consistently the strongest on those routes otherwise, with the crown jewel being Mark's route where EVEN LILY is on board with it despite it being generally her least enjoyed power. I will continue to explore the other routes in future versions, even though bimbos bore me, because I like what you've made enough that I feel you've earned it. The corruption routes are a bit more to my taste due to the "random" factor spicing things up a bit. (for anyone reading this who hasn't played yet, there is no randomness but "Corruption" comes with a quirk being assigned to the character that you don't know until you discover it)
Tips? Mostly the same as others. Writing is good, but should have a bit more visual accompaniment and perhaps be broken into smaller pages if feasible.
To address criticisms I found in the thread, I believe one or more didn't understand your wording in the intro about the routes (love in particular) but it was clear as day to me and delivered as promised aside from being a bit quicker than implied (which isn't a bad thing necessarily!). Assertions that you promised the women would be taking the lead are false. The note on that reads: "Additionally, the MC tends to be kinder and more willing to let the women take the lead. Not like anything approaching femdom, but more of a balance."
More willing to LET them take the lead does not in any way imply that they will be doing so often, let alone a majority of the time. Lily even says MC will have to do MORE work/"heavy lifting" on this route.
Thanks for submitting your work. I look forward to future releases.
Tips? Mostly the same as others. Writing is good, but should have a bit more visual accompaniment and perhaps be broken into smaller pages if feasible.
To address criticisms I found in the thread, I believe one or more didn't understand your wording in the intro about the routes (love in particular) but it was clear as day to me and delivered as promised aside from being a bit quicker than implied (which isn't a bad thing necessarily!). Assertions that you promised the women would be taking the lead are false. The note on that reads: "Additionally, the MC tends to be kinder and more willing to let the women take the lead. Not like anything approaching femdom, but more of a balance."
More willing to LET them take the lead does not in any way imply that they will be doing so often, let alone a majority of the time. Lily even says MC will have to do MORE work/"heavy lifting" on this route.
Thanks for submitting your work. I look forward to future releases.
I am very excited about the game and am looking forward to further updates. I like the different paths and hope that there will be a lot more to come and that you can develop the different characters in different ways. The current focus should be maintained; it would be a shame if there were too many "dead ends" or if there was hardly any progress because the development was diluted into too many individual paths. Thank you and happy holidays.
Is this one of those genderbent protagonist games, or is the alien just hanging out in the back of your mind and giving commentary? I can never tell with descriptions like this. So many of them feel like they don't even need to specify that you get turned into a woman and just spring it on you after starting the game. Especially since there's no proper tag for it on this site.
Also, is the mind control entirely in the form of bimbofication, or is there more than that?
Well if it didn't have one, it'd look they were signing off on a letter written by Corruption & Bimbos.
She's hanging around at the back of your mind - occasionally (only once in this update) you will reach an obstacle and be offered a choice. Depending on if you resolve it yourself or let her do it you get more feminized. (She can only take control if your body is female, so if you don't want to be feminized just don't let her do things when she offers. She will make it very clear what the consequences are. There is nothing 'hidden' about the mechanic.) Also, there aren't any actual consequences beyond the one scene yet - it's a long-term thing.
The mind control works on three paths - You can 'corrupt' them, which basically means make them more horny and give them a random kink that you then have to discover. You can go the love route, which involves putting people to sleep and modifying their dreams. And yeah obvioulsy there's the bimbo route, too, which is self-descriptive. The game sort of implies that only the bimbo route involves physical transformation, but this isn't the case - all routes will turn the male characters into women, too, not just the bimbo one.
Dang, I really don't like when a game gives each character a different kink and then makes you work to discover them, because it might end up being a major turn-off for the player that they wouldn't have gotten invested in if they knew.
So there is gender-bending even if you avoid it for the protagonist. This site really needs a tag for this. Are you able to avoid their routes altogether?
Yes, you can just not interact with them (marked with the [No route] tag)
EDIT: Also, the protagonist can avoid being genderbent himself. Not sure if that's what you meant, or if you meant him doing the genderbending - but that's also avoidable as I said in this comment. You can have exactly zero genderbending if you like.
- Dec 4, 2023
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You'll know what the change is pretty much in the first scene with each character, so it's easy to back out. One exception is Kate to some degree, as the MC is also confused what's going on there. Also, the changes in the corruption routes aren't necessarily sexual, but can be a change in personality as well. Though, obviously it's still going to lead to sex as that's the nature of the game.
The gender-bending will always be optional. Each character is optional too, you don't actually have to do anything to them if that's what you want. The only thing that isn't optional is the actual main story, but like I said, you'll never have any forced gender-bending there either. Hope that clears things up!
- Aug 5, 2019
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Excellent start, really love the premise. Especially neat to have not only different paths, but the option to mix and match for different characters, which is rare.
Already played out all the routes and will likely continue to do so. Also appreciate the small surprises, like
; I'm very keen to see where that goes. Also interested in seeing what a feminized MC brings us.
Thanks, look forward to more!
Already played out all the routes and will likely continue to do so. Also appreciate the small surprises, like
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really enjoyed this - great v1
would echo what others say about breaking up the text - it's well-written but a bit daunting when you have a wall of it with no pictures in some cases
keep up the good work, and keep using POV - you've got a great eye for scenes
would echo what others say about breaking up the text - it's well-written but a bit daunting when you have a wall of it with no pictures in some cases
keep up the good work, and keep using POV - you've got a great eye for scenes
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