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Is the MC eventually going to turn into a woman as well? Since the alien is female, it would only seem to make sense.
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Dava Foxx is a boner killer (If you wanna make money off this I suggest a recast, less people than you think are into horses) never understood how people like that even get in the business. As for the "game" more sexual less textual (most aren't here to read) aside from that I really liked it looking forward to updates. P.S. making more pages is a pain but would also help (less scrolling the better, helps with immersion)
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- Aug 24, 2017
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Since it's become quite popular recently with HTML games, do you have enough "material" too show off the girls through the various stages of bimbo/transformation, or this gonna become half AI-CG?
- Mar 6, 2019
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The in game description of the love path is a slow burning path where the girls take the initiative instead of the mc, but the first scene on the love path with all of the girls I've seen so far have been the mc altering their emotions, pushing them down and fingerblasting the fuck out of them until they pass out. This does not seem like the mc being passive and letting the girls take initiative like the description says, (not that I'm complaining, I hate passive mcs, and that part of the description almost put me off the path) doesn't seem very slow burning, and doesn't seem like a logical first step on a love path at all, especially considering these are "notfamilymembers". Did you mix up the love and corruption first scenes? I won't rate the game yet cause it seems wrong to just blast the pacing of a game on the first release. I wish you luck on the game, if I had a suggestion, it would definitely be to fix the pacing in the love path, and maybe change the plans a bit from a passive mc to having both characters initiate sex and romance at the same rate like a romance would actually be like, instead of just having the mc be passive and the girls doing everything in the relationship like the description seems to be going for. As for the amount of text to images, I don't really mind much, more images are always nice, but I would rather have a well put together plot over a picturebook.
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Yeah, I was unsure of whether or not I should add more of it, but seems like that's what people want.
The routes are pretty much set in stone, there might (no promises!) be trans for a future route with someone else, but no trap content.
Completely optional, and it's more planned as a an endgame kind of thing. This game is more about transforming others.
I think I might have worded it badly, and it's more that the love path doesn't immediately mean sex on a first encounter, unless it's a dream. I do admit that it maybe was a bit too fast, probably as a consequence of them being the first ones I wrote the love path for. Kate's love path is more what I had in mind, but that one is free of any powers, so it's a unique case. Anyway, really appreciate the feedback!
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I love it, any bimbofication content is a welcome addition in my book.
That being said, the transformation image-wise doesn't take them into the realms of bimbos in my opinion i.e. features aren't exaggerated enough.
Additionally, the memory loss afterwards communicates a low-stakes narrative and I'm not keen on this.
Finally the MtF stuff - it's too rapid, in my opinion the chars should retain certain parts of their anatomy to remind them of what they have lost and only after they 'break' should they lost everything; otherwise the stakes are not high enough.
The quality of the writing though is top notch - the above is just my personal taste
That being said, the transformation image-wise doesn't take them into the realms of bimbos in my opinion i.e. features aren't exaggerated enough.
Additionally, the memory loss afterwards communicates a low-stakes narrative and I'm not keen on this.
Finally the MtF stuff - it's too rapid, in my opinion the chars should retain certain parts of their anatomy to remind them of what they have lost and only after they 'break' should they lost everything; otherwise the stakes are not high enough.
The quality of the writing though is top notch - the above is just my personal taste
Great release, I would recommend more pictures / videos in relation to the text (because we're all lazy motherlovers)
Also more (more or less irrelevant) choices like "cum inside" and "cum in face" are great
Nice project, the story is simple but funny and works
Also more (more or less irrelevant) choices like "cum inside" and "cum in face" are great
Nice project, the story is simple but funny and works
- Jan 16, 2022
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Great writing, though I agree the text could be split into more pages as someone suggested. I enjoy good grammar and some effort put into the text, something that seems to be missing these days.
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I was gutted when i got to the end of this first release, that tells me i absolutely loved this! great start and open to so many possibilities going forward. looking forward to the next release.
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I dunno, I dont mind her at all. I enjoy a bit of her content.
Lamebrained
>corruption
>transformations
>classic html style
I only played the love routes, as that's the only route I have any interest in. I like the direction, I am especially fond of playing a game with genderbending that is about the player genderbending others and not the MC getting bent, it's a good change of pace.
I don't personally have an issue with how much dialogue there is, though I can see why folks might as the implied purpose of the game is considered to be instant gratification which is the usual, if not the purpose, of pornographic material in general. Though, that aside, the largest critique at the moment I would have is what someone else pointed out earlier, the love routes for the "landlady" and "roommate" progress too quickly. It's a pacing sort of issue. A good solution for that might be going the route you do with the characters intended for genderbending, having the initial scenes being dream sequences. Rather than the MC exerting his influence over them and the immediately kissing, and fingering them, I believe a better approach would be that he does some other light affection gesture, a hug, a kiss on the cheek, or even slightly more bold an "accidental" brush across an erogenous zone such as their breast or ass. With the contact perhaps implanting the psychic inclination to slowly start opening them up to the idea of being physically intimate. Have them start to fantasize a bit about taboo and risque encounters with the MC, which would allow you to add images to maintain the player's interest in your story as you build to the culmination. With the "landlady" and "roommate" especially, their love route should be a much slower roll to have them eventually overcome or even be enticed by the taboo.
With the other characters introduced, I largely think you've got right pacing for. The friend, Kate, jumping quick to intimacy wouldn't necessarily be too out of place if it was a situation where both her and the MC had feelings for one another. And the dream sequences for Alan and Mark are the right course. Pacing still may be an issue in these cases, but to a far less degree than with the initial duo.
The initial premise has piqued my interest, so I will be watching to see how far your story goes, as well as the content.
I don't personally have an issue with how much dialogue there is, though I can see why folks might as the implied purpose of the game is considered to be instant gratification which is the usual, if not the purpose, of pornographic material in general. Though, that aside, the largest critique at the moment I would have is what someone else pointed out earlier, the love routes for the "landlady" and "roommate" progress too quickly. It's a pacing sort of issue. A good solution for that might be going the route you do with the characters intended for genderbending, having the initial scenes being dream sequences. Rather than the MC exerting his influence over them and the immediately kissing, and fingering them, I believe a better approach would be that he does some other light affection gesture, a hug, a kiss on the cheek, or even slightly more bold an "accidental" brush across an erogenous zone such as their breast or ass. With the contact perhaps implanting the psychic inclination to slowly start opening them up to the idea of being physically intimate. Have them start to fantasize a bit about taboo and risque encounters with the MC, which would allow you to add images to maintain the player's interest in your story as you build to the culmination. With the "landlady" and "roommate" especially, their love route should be a much slower roll to have them eventually overcome or even be enticed by the taboo.
With the other characters introduced, I largely think you've got right pacing for. The friend, Kate, jumping quick to intimacy wouldn't necessarily be too out of place if it was a situation where both her and the MC had feelings for one another. And the dream sequences for Alan and Mark are the right course. Pacing still may be an issue in these cases, but to a far less degree than with the initial duo.
The initial premise has piqued my interest, so I will be watching to see how far your story goes, as well as the content.
Corruption! Bimbofication! I'm so interest in bimbo routes, But I think here need a mindcontrol tag. Very good game, I like it! It would be better if it was a sandbox. waiting for more character and more bimbo.
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