Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

The samples made come. But I shouldn't have tried. It was awful.

The worlbuilding is all over the place.
The characters are few and unpleasant.
The plot is incomprehensible.
The art is uneven.

Following the Carter family could have been nice but no, it quickly deviates to the family of the ugly bully. There was nothing to do outside 2 stupid options near the end. And no character has grown on me (the teacher, who could have been one, becomes a robot and the little brother, who is trying to protect his family, is too silly), particularly all those shitty male ones.

Good continuation.