VN Ren'Py Abandoned Little Stories Chapter 2 [v0.2] [3DSM]

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JFC I've never been more confused over a games synopsis. I don't like some of the tags so I'll pass for now.
 
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Opinions...

  • Images are really grainy. Looks cheap.
  • Most of the characters look off.
  • Rape of the male player character. WOW wasn't expecting that.
  • Really bad 3 frame animations.
  • Plot ?????
  • Engrish....
I normally try to stay positive and give constructive criticism to the author but I am going to be blunt. This is bad in pretty much every way. Sorry =( but that's my opinion.
 
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Valmora

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Sorry but this creation is absolute garbage... forced gay oral rape shit ? wtf ?
Grammar is totally fucked...
 
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XJ347 said:
Opinions...

  • Images are really grainy. Looks cheap.
  • Most of the characters look off.
  • Rape of the male player character. WOW wasn't expecting that.
  • Really bad 3 frame animations.
  • Plot ?????
  • Engrish....
I normally try to stay positive and give constructive criticism to the author but I am going to be blunt. This is bad in pretty much every way. Sorry =( but that's my opinion.
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Exactly, not worth seeing how this train-wreck will turn out...
 
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Just made an Unofficial Android Port

UPDATED: 01 Mar, 2020
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This release support my gestures:
- Swipe up to open the game menu
- Swipe down to hide the interface
- Swipe left to roll back
- Swipe right to skip

Made with Custom scripts based on RpaKit (Madeddy@F95Zone), UnRen (Sam@F95Zone) and Cruncher (bas@F95Zone)

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Enjoy ! ;)
 
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Zoro45

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gay writing in capital letters I think overlooked accidentally downloaded the game was disgusting
 
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Valmora said:
forced gay oral rape shit ? wtf ?
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Well, you know, human sexuality is very extensive... So I think you should just close your mouth and go somewhere else.

Psss....dude....maybe you need just to succumb to temptation...maybe you have your own darkest desires...don't hate yourself for it.
 
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Zoro45 said:
gay writing in capital letters I think overlooked accidentally downloaded the game was disgusting
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Thank you for informing us about your discust to gay, this is very important for us. But I think there is no difference between gay or any other content, so there is no need of capitalizing it.
 
Canto Forte

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Unfortunatelly .. the bully trope goes on far outperforming the action.
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All dev had to say this March was ... Don't touch me !!! on March 4th at 9:36pm

So, there we have it ... story is all over the place.
 
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Wow, the story and the engrish are almost physically painful. I could get over the horse faced wife and even the gay shit, but man, oh, man, this is cringe.

"It's a knife of war". Bet Google translate wouldn't have said this in a million years.
 
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