- Oct 17, 2017
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Just beat the 3 chapter
Pal you are genius!
Your incredible skill at writing story and dialog is as good as your skill at drawing water splashes in 3d is terrible : D
I mean what the hell was that somewhat white scuffed explosion or something in the water xD
but really, you hit the right road at everything
I don't know why people talking so much about 3-rd chapter being too much about Jake
I mean I WAS worried when you told us that next chapters will involve Jake in sex acts too cause it's ntr game (in your opinion) after all
but c'moooon, Jake was milked dry by a big-breasted goth girl next door!
Also he stays in character, he is a humble caring guy and a loving husband
I see zero problem at all with it
I say otherwise, it's just what this story need!
It's what I want to see and read!
Every character involved and noone act as just an ugly mthrfcer because he or she can
You're showing us a dream, buddy
not an ntr nightmare
but I have to point out that people on this site can be too much corrupted with this sh*t and everything involved
So be prepared for your view to be misunderstood
Do not lose your way, dev
And be on your guard
Pal you are genius!
Your incredible skill at writing story and dialog is as good as your skill at drawing water splashes in 3d is terrible : D
I mean what the hell was that somewhat white scuffed explosion or something in the water xD
but really, you hit the right road at everything
I don't know why people talking so much about 3-rd chapter being too much about Jake
I mean I WAS worried when you told us that next chapters will involve Jake in sex acts too cause it's ntr game (in your opinion) after all
but c'moooon, Jake was milked dry by a big-breasted goth girl next door!
Also he stays in character, he is a humble caring guy and a loving husband
I see zero problem at all with it
I say otherwise, it's just what this story need!
It's what I want to see and read!
Every character involved and noone act as just an ugly mthrfcer because he or she can
You're showing us a dream, buddy
not an ntr nightmare
but I have to point out that people on this site can be too much corrupted with this sh*t and everything involved
So be prepared for your view to be misunderstood
Do not lose your way, dev
And be on your guard