VN - Ren'Py - Fate and Life: The Mystery of Vaulinhorn [Ch.10 Deluxe] [Celestial Novel]

Always floating in this mediocre space of average adult games.
Sex scenes are frequently but poorly represented, very shorts, no sexual tension, nothing, barely fappable.

Graphic is likable, even though, there is a weird alien girl with blue hair (always the case in mediocre's game, some odd girl with blue, pink , green, purple hair).

Plot is... mhhh.. try to show different "kinks" but still not supported by properly designed sex scenes... almost like checkbox exercise.

My advice is try this game, might be your type, but do not expect and big excitement

Every single aspect of this game except for the models is a big flop. It's poorly written, hard to read, and takes itself too seriously without proving itself first. Also, did they hire a VA at the beginning or is that an AI? Cuz the voice is good but what he's reading is dreadful. He literally has to say "It was a dark and stormy night." And why is there a male narrator if the protag is a woman? Speaking of, the author clearly should have had a male protagonist, as his ability to write from the perspective of a woman could charitably described as laughable.

The only reason this gets more than 1 star from me is the Mama / Qualley model. She's so great that if she had a few scenes I could even see myself giving this 3+ stars and skipping all the dialogue, because wowee is she drop dead gorgeous.

This is a very promising start for a female protag game! A very sexy milf gets into hot scenarios with the young men around her...sign me up. And the dialogue was very detailed and contributed to the sexiness of the scenes. And there's quite a bit of content for a first release. Hope this one keeps updating!

Version Played: Ch. 1
Time played: 30 minutes, Completed content

An intriguing synopsis and some hot ladies drew my interest to this one. I always like when a game attempts to have a compelling narrative in addition to hardcore pornography, but sadly, the weird tonal shifts coupled with the poor english writing really ended up turning me off. For example, the game starts with some exposition and our MC's parents lying dead Dr. Thomas and Martha Wayne style. OK, gonna be dark. Cool. Yet, a scant few scenes later, we have our MC walking through the halls of the school she is teaching at with the camera zooming in on her T&A and we get to hear the pervy monologs of her students. We then have some additional exposition and get a pool scene with a strip poker scene after that. This tonal whiplash does the game no favors and is confusing and immersion breaking.

Positives
+ Sexy ladies. (On the thicc side, so ymmv)
+ Potentially intriguing story
+ While extremely cliche, the sexual scenes are titillating and corruption is always fun

Negatives
- The tone is all over the place
- Aside from the women, the facial renders for the other characters range from goofy to ugly
- Poor english writing and grammar

The dev really needs to adjust the tone and decide if this is a story first game then pr0n or vice versa. You can absolutely do both, but the sexual situations our protag has found herself in so far are extremely run of the mill and are incongruous to the dark mystery the game purports to be telling. It feels like they're there because they have to be and are not implemented organically. I'm not ready to write this off fully, but it needs a lot of work.

Note to Devs: Work on the tone of the game and see if you can find a native speaker for help.

My Rating for (Ch. 1) is:

Pros:
+ Great Graphics
+ Fun Playing
+ Easy Playing
+ No Grinding
+ Great Story
Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:
Great Game with super Graphics that makes me love every minute of it, also the story is told very good with lots of room for your imagination.
Love it.

Last Words:
Worth The Download

Really good start, It seems that the story will move much faster than most of the other games on this site. It has already some really hot teasing moments for chapter one.

Renders are good. There is few instances of weird lighting and screen effects that make some scenes look worse. But overall nice work on visuals.

There are choices to make, so i guess We can expect some character builing for main character in the future.

Annnd ... Including that hot girl from Death stranding was amazing choice