Story doesnt seem to be going anywhere. And no this is not a reflection of the short time since its start or the small size of updates that im speaking of. So far the only thing we have learned is that lola has attitude, mc was in prison but isnt anymore, they have a special relationship which is constantly glossed over, and oh cops dont just harass people they give em blue balls now too. Suddenly im all for defunding the police. 4 months, ish, and I have no clue what the fuck this vn is about or any idea where it is going. I assume someone will have an orgasm at some point. I mean itll be the gas station employees most likely, we sure learned alot about them, and the other girl at the gas station, learned all about her.
On first release I thought this vn might be decent, now im starting to think someone had a really good idea for a vn, and the tools to make it, but forgot about the most important part of story telling, writing an actual story.