VN Others Abandoned Factotum Adventures [Ch. 1-2] [LazySlob]

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factotumadventures

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Mangas have different demographics though. So blood like shounen or like a seinen manga. lol
Ideas come to mind working on it so anything can change though I think if there will be more goreish stuff it won't be more extreme then stuff seen in hokuto no ken or b-movies, I mean stuff that in the end make you laugh and don't leave with a sense of unease. :)
 

morpheusahrms

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Sep 11, 2017
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Fun and over the top, refreshing change of pace. Nicely done!

@factotumadventures A couple of little nitpicks though:

The time to react in fights to be able to Dodge is awfully short if you are not a young twitch gamer. These days a neural command needs a second back and forth at least in my case and then it's already too late in 9 of 10 cases. I managed by button munching and pure luck after half a dozen tries but it still was not much fun this way.

Personally I am not a huge fan of point-and-click adventures simply because I like only so much thinking in my porny games. It is a legit choice for you as Dev though and I have no gripe with it. A hint system would be nice for people like me though. Right now I am stuck at not finding a passcard and left the game after 6 or so minutes walking and talking with everyone I found several times. I am sure I just overlooked something but again, not the best player experience when you aim for a broader target audience.

PS: Consider the poor MC to get a little more fun with the Spider Lady maybe? Victory should taste sweet after all ;-)
 

factotumadventures

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Sep 13, 2018
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Fun and over the top, refreshing change of pace. Nicely done!

@factotumadventures A couple of little nitpicks though:

The time to react in fights to be able to Dodge is awfully short if you are not a young twitch gamer. These days a neural command needs a second back and forth at least in my case and then it's already too late in 9 of 10 cases. I managed by button munching and pure luck after half a dozen tries but it still was not much fun this way.

Personally I am not a huge fan of point-and-click adventures simply because I like only so much thinking in my porny games. It is a legit choice for you as Dev though and I have no gripe with it. A hint system would be nice for people like me though. Right now I am stuck at not finding a passcard and left the game after 6 or so minutes walking and talking with everyone I found several times. I am sure I just overlooked something but again, not the best player experience when you aim for a broader target audience.

PS: Consider the poor MC to get a little more fun with the Spider Lady maybe? Victory should taste sweet after all ;-)
Talk with Zorka after you beat Lady Spider and use her room key :)
 

Calavera-109

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Nov 12, 2018
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soooo maybe i am mistaken, I've talked with zorka, took her card but whenever i try to talk with the receptionists i can't move forward, is it my bad or simply there's no additional content beyond that point?
 

factotumadventures

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oh I thought that was a game over screen but it says work in progress. Damn not much to do yet still then.
I know the development has been more time consuming then I thought, I just hope that now that I got the combat system, save/load system, journal, inventory ect done all the rest will be faster to add to the game, now it should be only charcters, story ect.
 

factotumadventures

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Sep 13, 2018
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Fun and over the top, refreshing change of pace. Nicely done!

@factotumadventures A couple of little nitpicks though:

The time to react in fights to be able to Dodge is awfully short if you are not a young twitch gamer. These days a neural command needs a second back and forth at least in my case and then it's already too late in 9 of 10 cases. I managed by button munching and pure luck after half a dozen tries but it still was not much fun this way.

Personally I am not a huge fan of point-and-click adventures simply because I like only so much thinking in my porny games. It is a legit choice for you as Dev though and I have no gripe with it. A hint system would be nice for people like me though. Right now I am stuck at not finding a passcard and left the game after 6 or so minutes walking and talking with everyone I found several times. I am sure I just overlooked something but again, not the best player experience when you aim for a broader target audience.

PS: Consider the poor MC to get a little more fun with the Spider Lady maybe? Victory should taste sweet after all ;-)
The spider fights where too fast or were ok? The two sexy attacks of spider lady are faster but they do little damage.
I was wondering if adding an option to choose between slower and faster counter.
 

morpheusahrms

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Sep 11, 2017
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The spider fights where too fast or were ok? The two sexy attacks of spider lady are faster but they do little damage.
I was wondering if adding an option to choose between slower and faster counter.
SLIGHTLY too fast. Just half a second more before her attack to be able to dodge more often would be appreciated since successful dodges are also the only way to power up the "special attacks".
 

zoneitorboneit

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Apr 30, 2018
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Keep up the great work, I love your sense of humour that you put into the game. I don't think there was one that had me laughing as much as yours.
 
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