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bobdango

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I can't say I like when I see things from a third parties perspective when a mystery is trying to be set up. It makes me feel disconnected from the protagonist that I am supposed to be.
 

zARRR

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I can't say I like when I see things from a third parties perspective when a mystery is trying to be set up. It makes me feel disconnected from the protagonist that I am supposed to be.
It’s just a different way of narration that was invented and still exist in current medias.
From Agatha Christie’s books to nowadays thrillers.
If you don’t like it, it’s fine, but it’s still a good way to narrate a story.
 

anne O'nymous

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Oh god... The CGs are good, and the story potentially interesting, but haven't seen so heavy writing since a long time.

Having a strong lore is never a bad thing, but drowning the player with it before he even know what the story is, or even what this lore mean or imply, it's such a big "no". The lore is supposed to serve as background, not to be the sole purpose of the first 20 minutes (perhaps even a bit more) of the story.
It's not even a question of "show Vs tell", but of pure relevancy. 80% of what we learn about the lore is purely useless the moment it's told to us, and will be totally forgot when it will become relevant, if it ever become relevant.


It’s just a different way of narration that was invented and still exist in current medias.
From Agatha Christie’s books to nowadays thrillers.
I don't remember that Agatha Christie wrote stories where a third of the content where the main character's inner thoughts. I don't even remember her having wrote a single inner thought ; precisely because she mostly wrote from a third person point of view, while inner thoughts only apply to a first person POV writing.

And it's the second issue I have with this game. It's wrote from a first person POV, while too often jumping from a first person view, to a second third person view centered on the MC. A third person view isn't an issue by itself, but in such case the player expect the CGs to show what is relevant, not to focus on the MC as if he was the main LI in the game.

Personally I'll wait to see a "restarted" in the title before coming back to that game.
The story feel interesting, and there's a clear attempt to build something coherent, but there's a real issue with the realization.
 
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Tyrranus

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the youtube videos on his patreon are gone(removed by user it says) and this isnt listed on his itch page so.... doesnt look good

then again nothing on his patreon page at all since sept 2023 so REALLY not lookin good
 

Bse

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strange what happens ? no update of any of your story? Hope you are ok? Was waiting and looking for your update....
 

Mystic

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strange what happens ? no update of any of your story? Hope you are ok? Was waiting and looking for your update....
There are though? I've updated Elleria what? Five days ago?

Eden Prime nothing on it though, There is Terra Prime which is made in DAZ and reboot of this in a way. You can even find few previews on my discord server.

I also don't use Patreon nor Subscribestar so... I'd not use those as information. I'm only active on my discord, nowhere else really.
 
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Bse

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sorry but discord .... 1 let tell me a story we moder had an idea an in tes5 children grow and so other add bang them into it so discord use nope 1 year and. i was like fuck you and give me a live time ban there... After i take a look How is suporting them... ohh Amazon ; Microsoft... and other nice so in <Rl sell child is ok But not in VR or or Game??? come again!
 

Bse

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ahhh i forget to tell some this is the resion i lost a lot. Telegram works better and NO Tracing Cookies and trash cap ask .... with trak cooking. I give a shit about sell your self with trakig cooking or what make money for other without my knowing. So stick to dis. and be loney.
 
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Lucid Lancer

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sorry but discord .... 1 let tell me a story we moder had an idea an in tes5 children grow and so other add bang them into it so discord use nope 1 year and. i was like fuck you and give me a live time ban there... After i take a look How is suporting them... ohh Amazon ; Microsoft... and other nice so in <Rl sell child is ok But not in VR or or Game??? come again!
ahhh i forget to tell some this is the resion i lost a lot. Telegram works better and NO Tracing Cookies and trash cap ask .... with trak cooking. I give a shit about sell your self with trakig cooking or what make money for other without my knowing. So stick to dis. and be loney.

have a fucking stroke.jpeg
 
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