VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Dirty Pool [v1.1] [Pirot King]

had fun playing. The stories fine, its nothing too in depth, it has funny parts but stays true to an h game, plenty of scenes and omg emily. So much fun. I only did the blackmail part of her but it is so much fun she is so sexy. I play this mostly for her.

There are some Jokes in the game, some of them are good, but they just killing the mood. Jokes can be added but not anywhere and not anything.

I really like that there are some bad choice, which will not lead to end
immediately, but will lead to end after a sometime.

Important choices are showed well, and they really have impact on gameplay.

Story is garbage, boring.
Pictures are average.

ok - i played this game in version 0.9 and i wasted my time at all.
The story is not even close to be good. The Developer wants to make jokes, but to be honest its more than a childish unrealistic kind of style. Mostly are not funny at all - more they are kind of destroying the game feeling at all. I dont want to insult, but for me the game feels like a childish 12 year old does his first steps doing VN.
what i also should mention that i nearly had stopped the game right before starting it, was the description "BEST GAME EVER" in the OP - sorry, but on first place this is not true at all - its not even close to be an AVERAGE GAME, and second i normally dont play games made by conceited arrogant people who always think that they are the only ones who can do something, or always think they can do better than others although they cant do even more than average
So why did i give 2* and not just 1*? Its just because i know even more aweful games, but its hard to find some

While this game isn't the best game in the world, it's pretty legit. The choices are a bit interesting (but most of the time predictable). However, I do have to say that the dev is creative in a very unique way. The choices sometimes are meant to make fun of the people who click thru the choices really quickly (this is not a bad thing, in fact its hilarious).

The story (concept, not the writing) is a bit on the low side. Everything else is pretty good.

TL;DR: Play the game.

If you want a good, deep, realistic story, this game isn't for you.
If you want a good amount of content, with some cheeky (absurd, sometime fun) lines, and different paths (at this point, v0.8, mostly regarding Emily), give this one a run.
It plays a bit like some of the old days parody porn movies, in a sense: the plot doesn't really make too much sense, it's there just to give an excuse to watch sex scenes or to be slightly amusing. The devs make crystal clear from the start that this is a choice and the overall mood of the game.
Overall, keeping these things in mind from the start, the game proves to be quite enjoyable.

Great game with great jokes. Nice renders, nice story even tho it's a cliche incest story. Developers make it clear that we shouldn't take this story seriously and with that in mind, the game is just top notch.

im not gonna be a negativist cause i like game devs in general :

fully deserved half stars. although its bad to do pot and work. or at least i hope u get some good stuff of the "high" variation.
great choice web maybe when the next fly drops in the spider will be home to eat it

Its one of the better games to play, Renders are Pretty enough and the Story is Okay. There are some funny Easter Eggs to be found and it was enjoyable from Start to End (V.0.8). Give it a Go , you may like this one!

i really enjoy this game its funny the choices are a lot and good plus the girls are super sexy and the devs are just funny esp whit the freedom they give you in the choices very fun and sexy game love it

This game is super funny and awesome, it has multiple choices making it non-linear. I highly recommend this to anyone that wants a funny hot experience. By day three you are already having some crazy action (could have it before if you choose the red pill) That has to be about 250 characters now.

This is not bad. Can't say it is super good or anything, just that it is not bad, hell, it is pretty good in some parts.
Like the models used and renders are good and decent. The humor is ok for the most part, (except the times when it goes to far and gives you game over's)
The writing in general is...eehhhh, it shows that the characters are really there for your amusement and that is fine (it is porn after all). Translation is also a bit spotty but getting better from earlier versions going by other users comments.
The pretty good part is in where you make your choices in game: you can push to fast and get a game over screen, or you can push to slow and miss out on naughty content/options. And there are quite a few options and choices to make.
I recommend checking this out and have good hope for future versions raising the score more.

A really great game for example someone that doesent want to waste extra time into a game and just wants to see the secenes and all. Also the game has alot of choices that u can make during the gameplay and that really surprised me when i was playing this through.

The game has good character models, CG and animations. The game has personality that makes the game unique with its humor and references. The plot is pretty simple, and the story is fair. This game gives you different branches to choose from, which gives the player replayability.

However, the biggest problem the game has so far is the spelling and the grammar. In some cases, its hard to figure out what the person is saying. This might cause some people to stop playing in the future.

The game is still fairly new and it will take some time to improve in some areas.

The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs...

(03/27/2018 - Original Review - v0.1)

This is a very bizarre visual novel/game that also includes the over used Family Sex stuff...

The visuals of the characters are decent, and normally proportioned... The backdrops are a mix of unique and ones I've seen many times before in other VN/Games... I hope this developer is using images from other peoples works with some permission, otherwise I can't condone them putting them in this game, especially if this game is profiting off their glory... Who knows...

The script is not so good, being made up of hard to read broken English as well as spelling/grammar errors... This really effects the choices because it makes selecting a proper choice difficult... The plot (what little there is for the moment) revolves around a male protagonist who is temporarily moving in with his sister and her kids, because of some sort of fire or accident at his apartment... From there this VN/Game gets really weird... Initially you have several choices to either lie a lot or tell the truth about the apartment, because apparently the protagonist is purposefully trying to stay with his sister as long as he can to take advantage of them sexually and so on...

During the bathroom scene, if you try to trick your way into the bathroom while the daughter is taking a bath, some odd choices appear... You can magically spawn an axe and go all serial killer and get an end game... You can magically spawn a poisonous snake, have it bite you, she lets you in and you die, end game... Or you very easily trick her into letting you go the pee while she is in the tub, claiming not to look, which you can and she does as well... Or you can also trick her into letting you in and take pictures of her to blackmail her, which will eventually lead to a BJ scene, followed by being arrested and end game... I don't know if the developers are just trying to be funny or this game is nothing but a practical joke and not meant to make sense...

When you catch the son peeking on his mother you can select to be his friend (which I assume will make him an accomplice), trick him by manipulation (unwilling accomplice), or make him an enemy by getting him in as much trouble with the mother as possible (thereby eliminating the competition)... Also, when the protagonists sister falls asleep, going too far with messing with her, will lead to many different dead ends... There are also pictures from other VN/Games on a wall... A mysterious locked door that the protagonists sister seems unwilling to talk about... And other stuff...

Overall, with the text and choices being so hard to read due to bad English translation/interpretation, mixed with the developers weird sense of humor, I just didn't feel this story was going anywhere meaningful... It seems to be your a-typical Family Sex porn fest, with the stereotypical family personalities, and an evil protagonist with a sexual agenda... And obviously this game has player punishment choices and dead ends, which I'm never a fan of... It's as though it wants you to be bad, but not too bad... Therefore sets story traps...

Now, this is just an initial version of this game, so who knows what it's future holds or if it will get fixed... The visuals, for the moment, can not save this game... It needs some heavy re-translating and re-interpreting, as well as proofreading... The weird dead ends (snake and axe) really throw off the immersion, so I don't really understand why they exist other then the developer was probably just trying to make himself/herself laugh more then the players/readers... Will I revisit this one? Only if it gets a major text overhaul, and starts being a little bit less childish in it's story telling...

(04/09/2018 - Review Update - v0.15)

Ok, so this update was purely to fix all the text issues with all the broken English, and they did a wonderful job at fixing it all... The bathroom non-sense choices are still there, but overall a definite improvement from before... Now the story makes a lot more sense, and you can figure out the choices a lot easier... I upgraded the stars, but with those non-sense choices still being there, I just can't give it 5 stars...

With the major text overhaul I can see some potential on the story now... The uncle protagonist is definitely a perv, but I think some of the other characters might be as well... And the choice with the nephew, as to what paths to select for him, could make future story interesting... I'll check back on this one at a later date, to see how it's progressing...

Advantages of the game:
1. The character models and all CG at a fairly high level, clearly +
2. Interesting dissolution of relationships with the nephew
3. Not a bad but still too simple plot (but for v0.1 it's forgivable)

Game Cons:
1. Spelling is limp on two legs

(+ -) ~ Even for v0.1 there is little content here

In the future it can become a very good project, you need to wait a few more updates to make the decisive conclusions.
I think this game you can give a chance