VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Dirty Pool [v1.1] [Pirot King]

Quite possibly one of the most boring AVNs I've ever played. There is genuinely nothing that actually attaches to me. Nothing to interest me. The attempts at humour are limp, the corruption is akin to a mediocre porno, the story is just non-existent, the visuals are incredibly bland, the sex scenes are a joke. The only reason it gets 3/10 instead of 2/10 is because it technically has branching paths.

Damn, i really like the game.
Though the story is soo weird. A game reset? So strange.

Anyway, blackmail done right and the corruption works fine. Though the humor is just a dead end.
Renders are great and overall it is getting as mean as you would expect.
You have to say, that the mc is a prick and does not deserve love. And his niece, man i feel sorry for her.
But for a pervert game like this, is just soo great.
Really a shame that it was abandoned. Wonder why?
Anyway, i think that you still get a pretty nice VN out of it. It would have been a great story for some bondage for Emily.
Though you have to wonder if she would have killed herself if she could have.
I do like that you rarely seen the MC as he i do not even want to look at him.
Perhaps you could also play a more romantic route.
Thanks for making this game. Please continue, again?

Overall a good game. I was going to give it 4, but one thing spoiled everything for me. In the middle of the game a guy(Super Seducer) jumps in and starts teaching you how to flirt. I never asked for this shit.
Edit: Now it's abandoned

Great game. Hope it will continue to the end of the story.

I liked that each of the women has a distinct personality and you can build a relationship with each of them in a fairly logical progression. The imagery and sexual scenes are well constructed, and the backstory on the inheritance is interesting, it also has touches of humor at times. All in all a game worth playing and one that I wish the developers would take to the end.

This is my first review of a game and i decided this one deserves it the most. The game gives the player a lot of options in terms of how the mv deals with the character. You can be an absolute dick and make everyone ur slave or be a nice guy. The game is also filled with memes and references (and guest appearances) which makes the gameplay interesting and unexpected.

Looking forward to future updates!

This game follows a very common template (unseen POV guy seducing some daz-looking family members) but it is also very "niche" with the "humor" and overt coercion material.

The story is pretty terrible in terms of craft. The characters are uninteresting and interchangeable and the narrative is tedious and incoherent. I personally find the "humor", meme-callbacks, and 4th wall breaking unnecessary and distracting at best.

The renders are unremarkable other than the well crafted penetration scenes In particular, the clothing choices are weird (a cable knit sweater at the beach?), the modeler has an obvious fetish for stringy, middle-parted hair styles, and some of the visual jokes, like the cop with the afro, wear out their welcome super fast.

As others have noted, the most interesting content is the opportunity to blackmail the MC's niece into sexual servitude. This leads to some intriguing interactions and forces some sympathy for the victim, but it also seems out of character for both the MC and particularly, for the niece, who is not really setup to be naive enough to let herself be immediately ass-raped by an uncle over some fabricated evidence.

Of course, the fact that is abandoned (or "on hold") in mid-story also leaves a ton of narrative threads loose, which adds to the overall sense of meh.

Wow. I really love this game. I really loved teasing all the family members like that. (especially I loved blackmailing and corrupting Emily so much lol)
I really hope there is any other game like this to play. I am so into it!

This game has some of the best choice-interaction I have seen in a VN! (v1.1)

Well the structure of this game itself is amazing! Just look at the walkthrough! The choices are fun and have very different outcomes!

The characters are written well if though not all of them and the art style is nice and hot! The best part is the different ways to deal with them in the choices and how they change.

The worst thing is though... it is not finished! The game is on hold for the next work of the creator "My Best Deal". That game is worth a look too but it is a shame!
With a more defined end, and some polish here and there, Dirty Pool could be one of the best games out there!

Never the less, I can´t recommend this game more to all fans of "love incest", corruption and more particular fans of "dark incest"!

A wonderful game. One of the few games that does not require hints to complete, the developer has thought out the behavior of the heroes wonderfully, it is logical and understandable, plus excellent dialogues and a sense of humor complete with pleasant heroes.

Textbox take more than 1/4 of the screen and has very low transparency, so i guess theres gonna be issues apreciating the quality of renders under these conditions.

Game right now is boring, and is only saved by some funny dialogs, but seems cheap. First day was promising though, but it will take a long time until this game is worth.

As many have pointed out the jokes are way over the top and kill it.

Creator also might be the cocky sort which is why he ruined it with jokes, but that barely effects grade.

Rest besides that is ok, but again unless your love is 4th wall jokes stay away, you won't find any other love here.

Overview: Dirty Pool is a visual novel where the only gameplay is making choices for direction of the story. The plot is quite basic, you moved in with your sister and her children after your house is burnt down and things start to get sexy from there.

What kind of kinks?:
+ There are basic incest/love routes with your sister and your two nieces.
+ There is a male domination route with your younger niece.
+ There is some gay content with your nephew, I skipped all of them so not sure how much content are there.

Some points about this game:
+ The Humor: This game has quite an in-your-face, fourth wall breaking sense of humor. It will be a big reason if you like this game or not. Personally I enjoy it. Sure, some of it is nonsensical, but I'm not looking for logic in a porn game.
+ Male Domination Route: The male domination route in this game is quite good and there is quite a bit of content in it. If you like Male Dom then you should play this game for that only.
~ The Plot: Porn-movie plot level. Basically the story is just there to lead you to the porn, nothing ground breaking here. Again, either you mind that or not. Personally I don't mind that.
+ Choices: Very good choices system. There are quite a lot of branching path that makes you feel like you impacted the story.

Renders are okay, story is somewhat fine (I love how you can actually feel consequences to your actions), but overall it's average at best.
But what's the worst part of the game and is always forced on you? You guessed right, it's the "humor". It's so bad, so unnatural and out of place, that a lot of times you don't even understand why are you still here. Probably just to suffer. Congratulations to the dev, he's got the whole site laughing.

Story: Decent, not very original or innovative...just plain normal.

Originality: an Uncle trying to seduce his sister and her family? Meh, feels like it's a rip-off of that Cohabitation game..

Renders: I'm happy that the dev moved to My Best Deal...the characters are better looking there.

Sound: It's standard, nothing to say, nothing to comment

Playability: It's Ren'Py...it's just clicking around,

Performance: Better than every game made with Unity or some weird version of RPGM...i've nothing to comment.

Bugs: Didn't find any.

Animations: Nothing to say.

Voice Acting: There wasn't.

Grammar: it's understandable = it's more than enough for me

Amount of content: Meh

I liked how rough you could be with the younger daughter and how broken you could make her... there also seem to be a ton of different routes and content looking at how branching that walkthrough is.

However, the other main characters suffered from the old balloon tits problem ... the tone of the game hit me totally wrong with the bad forced humour ... and I disliked how easy it was to stumble into bad ends and things ... like oh I was supposed to be making a cup of coffee but now apparently have magic potions, sigh, alright I guess I'll give her one, oh she turned into a cupcake, game over ... uuugh.

This game is really amazing, I love the story and there are many options and routes to go through.
I think that the renders are also amazing, I love the design of the characters.
I don't know why this game doesn't have 4.5 score, this game is really one of the best even though it takes a long time to get to the sex scenes which aren't many at the moment, but it's worth it because the story is great.

Ok might be a little bias since i love these games with good sense of humor,.

First the art is good.
Second the story is good enough for its job to raise a boner.
Third the jokes can hurt your boner since it makes you laugh to much.

Edit: Played more then the first hour and love it even more.

The graphics are ok, the story is fine but what really stand out ist the humor. Can't remember last time I laughed so hard at certain situations.

This dev has a rare talent and he is using it. Way to go!

Well written and funny story, more enjoyable than a lot of other games on here. The developer seems to have a good sense of humor which makes the game a lot more fun to play, the renders are also of pretty high quality which is always a plus.

Nothing special about this game. It's not bad, but just run-of-the-mill in every aspect.

Models are average.
Story is average.
Gameplay is average.
Sex scenes are average.

The multiple path implementation is good. However, it's marred by the fact that the game itself is still very average.