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Hobmat70

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While the video "Maintain Control" is quite good, the video quality is something else. The quality isn't as good as the other videos posted. If there is a higher-quality version out there, someone please share it.
 

danny1932

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Aug 20, 2023
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Well, its a short and it takes us closer to PE2. Just watched it.

Starts with both sluts already undressed, shows they are a couple already, limp cock but has brief erection scene though cock is not rock hard but "half soft" then no foreplay and they just fuck, no mini psychodrama, she is cumming outside at the 1st phase, she is wasting cum, the glass wall shows more flesh and the stance but deprives us of the "she is holding on to something tight" (in CotL 3 Ciri breaks a chair while getting fucked) so resistance is reduced, thankfully fills her with a cum bucket in the end.

Feels like a preview, skips many things, and its too light-hearted, no sexual tension or violation or mindbreak, or conquest or some taboo. Its a brief one. Too short.

If it had 5 minutes of build up then everything that happened in it would have a huge impact, for a short its good. Feels like its part a of a vaster long film or series. Helps remind of the importance of the not sexual scenes.

In the first 2 corruption of the lodge shorts 1 and 2 that were 5-6 minutes or something there is sexual tension and atmosphere so it can be done. Watch them and compare for the sake of sexual storytelling. The music, the setting and the small and other things that frame them are excellent and contribute into making the scene great.

So if you had an imaginary first part, or framing it within the alloted time like the first CotL 1 and 2, then this would have been amazing. He will gives us PE2 and since that is the main dish and is linked to PE1 i assume it will be excellent.
 
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Well, its a short and it takes us closer to PE2. Just watched it.

Starts with both sluts already undressed, shows they are a couple already, limp cock but has brief erection scene though cock is not rock hard but "half soft" then no foreplay and they just fuck, no mini psychodrama, she is cumming outside at the 1st phase, she is wasting cum, the glass wall shows more flesh and the stance but deprives us of the "she is holding on to something tight" (in CotL 3 Ciri breaks a chair while getting fucked) so resistance is reduced, thankfully fills her with a cum bucket in the end.

Feels like a preview, skips many things, and its too light-hearted, no sexual tension or violation or mindbreak, or conquest or some taboo. Its a brief one. Too short.

If it had 5 minutes of build up then everything that happened in it would have a huge impact, for a short its good. Feels like its part a of a vaster long film or series. Helps remind of the importance of the not sexual scenes.

In the first 2 corruption of the lodge shorts 1 and 2 that were 5-6 minutes or something there is sexual tension and atmosphere so it can be done. Watch them and compare for the sake of sexual storytelling. The music, the setting and the small and other things that frame them are excellent and contribute into making the scene great.

So if you had an imaginary first part, or framing it within the alloted time like the first CotL 1 and 2, then this would have been amazing. He will gives us PE2 and since that is the main dish and is linked to PE1 i assume it will be excellent.
My brother in Christ it's porn.
 

JAV4Life

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Aug 27, 2018
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dunno just expected him to show them doing something "new", i already seen femshep x miranda do normal fucking. looked more like a hype piece for whatever happens next.
 
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echo32

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Apr 18, 2018
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Well, its a short and it takes us closer to PE2. Just watched it.

Starts with both sluts already undressed, shows they are a couple already, limp cock but has brief erection scene though cock is not rock hard but "half soft" then no foreplay and they just fuck, no mini psychodrama, she is cumming outside at the 1st phase, she is wasting cum, the glass wall shows more flesh and the stance but deprives us of the "she is holding on to something tight" (in CotL 3 Ciri breaks a chair while getting fucked) so resistance is reduced, thankfully fills her with a cum bucket in the end.

Feels like a preview, skips many things, and its too light-hearted, no sexual tension or violation or mindbreak, or conquest or some taboo. Its a brief one. Too short.

If it had 5 minutes of build up then everything that happened in it would have a huge impact, for a short its good. Feels like its part a of a vaster long film or series. Helps remind of the importance of the not sexual scenes.

In the first 2 corruption of the lodge shorts 1 and 2 that were 5-6 minutes or something there is sexual tension and atmosphere so it can be done. Watch them and compare for the sake of sexual storytelling. The music, the setting and the small and other things that frame them are excellent and contribute into making the scene great.

So if you had an imaginary first part, or framing it within the alloted time like the first CotL 1 and 2, then this would have been amazing. He will gives us PE2 and since that is the main dish and is linked to PE1 i assume it will be excellent.
Dude, they're just pixels on screen going into each other. Don't think to deep into it.
 
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thedayafter

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I like when people analyze story driven work. This, I don't know if we can call it sequel, midquel, somethingquel? To Miranda in Charge works fine for a short. I'd assume a longer project would have burnt DSFM out.
 
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