Maverk

New Member
Jun 1, 2022
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A small note, only just beginning really. but you are using abbreviations too much, specifically ofc. It would read better fully written as "of course", and it could serve to change the word to others like "obviously" depending on the context. Comes off as more condescending than of "course".

And I like the art style, it looks just different enough from the original source that you probably won't get flagged.
 

Cavpal

Member
May 24, 2017
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Wait, what? Raven is a guy now?!
I don't know why, but I think this is all Dylan Mulvaney's fault, somehow.
 
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Togliti

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Jul 7, 2017
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Again those kind of distortion, what the straquack those days. I'm sure that is there someone that wank on those bodies if were to meet an abomination like that he will puke not get a boner. Shtap please