Ren'Py Abandoned Coming Back Home [v1.1.2] [Hidden Life Studios]

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bobdillan

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I don't want to be a pain in the ass, but in English, we say "back home", not "back to home"...
Both afaik are grammatically correct. Although "Back to my home." would work better, with "Back home" probably being best, but I believe there is already a game with a never very similar to that. If not exactly that.
 
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supernova874

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I will not say what happen to the father/where he is.
Is not as obvious as it might appear and is a little mistery that the story will uncover much later on.

yep. Is extremely short for two reasons:
1- This is my first time with Daz3D. I had to learn everything from zero, build me an assets library and understand how to do what I wanted.
2- This is just the intro. Is like a demo of the game, despite consisting almost totally of a flashback. I'm already on the first chapter that will be much longer.

Anyway, thank for the replay. You are the first except me to see my work, so, I'm glad you didn't say "eww" :giggle:
Good Luck Dev , waiting for this to be another Awesome game :giggle:
 
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dolfe67

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I guess the previews are from the intro, and it's a flashback? The MC will be 18, so who are the ones that warrant the loli tag? Is the father active on the (I guess) sisters? In the banner the sisters are not lolis
 
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EpicLust

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Both afaik are grammatically correct. Although "Back to my home." would work better, with "Back home" probably being best, but I believe there is already a game with a never very similar to that. If not exactly that.
"Back to home" is most definitely grammatically incorrect in my books. It would need a possessive preceding "home" to be allowed. ie: "back to my home", as you suggested.
 

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Honestly, it's too short to judge this game. In my opinion, it would be better to create the first update (chapter 1 or something) and then release the game.

The intro itself, which takes only 1/2 minutes... (and you can skip it) and that's it?

But I am waiting for future updates. I like games where MC comes back home after some time.
 

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I guess the previews are from the intro, and it's a flashback? The MC will be 18, so who are the ones that warrant the loli tag? Is the father active on the (I guess) sisters? In the banner the sisters are not lolis
What intrigued me was the lolis sad to admit but yes I'm a loli person but I keep it online hentai game or just plain loli porn games honest ik what happens when our ppl are discovered in the real world and it ain't pretty
 

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Character designs look good but you should do something about the noise in the images. Assuming that you are using a Nvidia GPU, I'd suggest using the denoiser in the render settings pane. I use a 1080ti and I have no issues whatsoever with that. The denoiser doesn't really add to render times much at all either. Nice work aside from that though.
 
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