VN Ren'Py Abandoned Camille : The Countdown [v0.2] [Part]

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Salut , tu as une version fr ? Car moi es l anglais çà fais 2 sans google trad ^^
Vraiment désolé, mais non. Je travaille directement en anglais, c’est plus simple pour moi. Peut être que je ferai une traduction plus tard si la demande est pressante !
 

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News of next version :

I think people wan't interactive novel, so there will be choices and variables.

I don't wan't to do something too complicated that need a big walkthrough to play with, but there will be several secondary ways arround the main way.

I'm working on variables, I'm very excited to understand all that different codes.

Choices will be available on day one and two, so there will be new scenes available.

Sans titre-1.jpg

I've done preparatory work and I've done 15 renders of a new scene.

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Gamle

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Thank you for the encouraging answer, as long as I know work is progressing, I'm happy.. :) Nice pictures btw.
 
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HolyMolly

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Hmm This is actually a very good start imo, way more promising than many others VN.

The setting of the story is not necessaly original but everything comes to what situations and scenes Camille will go trough during the game, there is already some good erotic scenes. You absolutely don't have to makes the most original or crazy story to makes exciting and good erotic scenes, actually one of the most aclaimed VN on this webstise "GGGB"started with the same mindset as this game.
Even if it's only the start I like the way the story/scenes goes on: there is not a shit ton of useless speach that I end up skiping like others VN, in this one the dialogue makes the story progress quickly in a good way but it's not "on your face" str8 to the porn either. It's just the perfect pace the genre imo, I hope the rest continues like that while you focus on making good erotic situations.

I like both of the main characters, even if some people are going to say that having an older dude kinda black-mailing a hot girl is a bit cliché in the genre, not only the landlord looks way more realistic than your typical Weinstein fat guy model but it also makes sense for him to be older than the MC, and it also adds to the perversion than an older man makes a younger does nasty stuff, it makes the story more erotic/perverted but like everyting it's a matter of taste.

Camille also have a lot of charm, she does not look like just another perfect VN model and that's the best thing about her.

+ The renders are also very good

Really looking forward to more content, this is promising and worth a look already.

If I have 1 advice it would be to makes choices matters and no too obvious. Not the typical "yes i want to fuck and go full slut" or "no im a shy virgine" and if you choose "no" you basically skip the sex scene and have nothing. I rather have no choice than that personnaly.
 
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Sabot

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Looking forward for choices.
Also, as I read up on the comments, I hope that if later you can make her shave, that it will be optional, so far I think it has a lot of potential
I have also seen a lot of comments on the pubic hair and I think that maybe a nicely shaved bush should be the option. If not then shave it all but there is no need for the hair to be all over the place. Otherwise I love the game and I am very impressed with the progress.
 
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Hairylover

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On the other hand if someone don't want to shave her I think there should be the choice to leave her bush alone, letting the player decide based on the preference
 
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Asuya

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Very good work really want to see more.
If I want to support you financially, how can I do?
 

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Overview:
You will follow the life of a young student : "Camille". Camille is three months late on her rent and she must find $1800 for Paul, his owner. Several choices will be available in future updates.​
:D Hey, Part - there's a confusing typo in your description. Did you mean: 'for Paul, her owner'? Is Paul her owner, or is he her Boss or Landlord?

I hope you don't think I'm being a grammar Nazi - I can't imagine how hard it must be to make a game in a second language.
 
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Part

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:D Hey, Part - there's a confusing typo in your description. Did you mean: 'for Paul, her owner'? Is Paul her owner, or is he her Boss or Landlord?

I hope you don't think I'm being a grammar Nazi - I can't imagine how hard it must be to make a game in a second language.
Hey ! Thanks for this. I wan't to say that Paul is the flat's owner, so I don't know how to say that in correct English. I must say "her owner" ?

Thanks.

For version v0.3 : I've done a lot of work. I don't wan't to tell when it will be ready, but I hope you will like it.

I've done a big work on Daz3d to improve (again) my level.

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