Hey SummerP! Absolutely thrilled that someone has grabbed the ball and is running, keeping this storyline that we all enjoy running. I noticed some misspelling in the game and grammar issues. Time is everything when working a new release. I'm no english teacher but I am skilled at making at correcting communications. Something I do for a living. Feel free to email scripts moving forward. I'll try my best to make a difference:
BBeaneMajor@gmail.com
Thanks, Billy.
I might.
Here's my feedback (raw):
Negative:
- Long intro, too much explanation ( many of those details could be disclosed as the story unfolds )
- Talks with the girls are a bit long and static ( I know they're catching up but avoid making it a soap opera - I've enjoyed Lisa's interaction quite much though )
- no sounds for girls reactions
- personally I don't like a cocky Bobby. I prefer a pervy, naive version. But it suits your game perfectly.
- Jenny's haircut and hairdo ( too short... and the bangs ? no - she should look the most sophisticated of the three, being stripper/sugar baby and all... )
- A few typos and words missing (do a quick screening of the script - camon?? (c'mon), stuff like that)
Positive:
- I've told you it was a risky move but you pulled it off. It's great.
- I love your Lisa (but the original too), Lucy is great, Anna is amazing, Jenny not so much (but hoping you do something about it)
- The flirting/teasing/lewd scenes are really great. Make them subtle, at least for now... Those with Lisa are very nice, the closing of Lucy's legs was awesome, Jenny's scene idea was great but a bit too soon (still good).
- I still prefer the feeling from the original but I'll definitely play this one. I believe it will stand on it's own. So good...
Now we're talking..
Thanks PO. That's the kind of feedback I was expecting of you.
I read you, man.
Define sex.
How about Bad Robert for a title? Or Raging Robert, if you want to be alliterative?
I can't see Bobby being called Robert Ha Ha.. I just can't.
I've tried.
Soon enough we'll get into that, Tommy.. a new title.
In my opinion, that Jenny character is useless in this game. We have 2 sisters, younger and older and thats enough. (reminder IMO ). And btw, i would love to see RAinces continue his version. Bad Bobby Saga is unique game and i want as much as possible content related to this title. SummerP is doing great job.
I'm trying not to have it shorter than the original. So we're keeping her.
The reason why Jenny feels useless, as a character, is because thus far she was not used.
RAinces has promised to change that.
But I'll try my best to make her as much a part of our late night fapping as Lucy and Lisa.
I intend to make her the quiet sis, the youngest, but the only one who's actually "working". The original game had Bobby saying they used to be close. I'll try to make use of that too.
I am probably going to change her model, slightly. (and use a different hair)
A new one has been fixed already, but is yet to be tested. Once I do, we'll see.
(her overall appearance should stay the same tho)
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I'm yet to decide if I'll change Lisa's hair back.
The issue you guys noticed on her hair, the cum dots, haven't shown under a different lighting, but it might.. and a few of you pointed out that you prefered the original, so..
(but idk yet.. most of those who answered the survey didn't mind the change, or liked it better)
I'll trim all those intro scenes before version 0.0 comes out.
I too felt like they were dragging a little too much.
It won't be in october tho, let me state that clear.
And I have added a little extra Tween Ryan onto my Bobby. It doesn't change much, but it looked good. (he felt younger)
I'm gonna keep it, but I probably won't redo all his renders.
Thank you all for the support.
Thanks for answering the survey.
And I'll see you soon.
