After trying this, must say this definitely has some definite potential and I definitely agree with some points WendyTheRed made such as the "Mak[ing] it clear that Frank in the pawnshop is actually your foster father" and "more guidance in some stuff." When just thrown in, it just makes the game feel empty.
I'd definitely recommend more in-depth sex scenes describing stuff as well. Most of the scenes that I saw were just one-line describing something and then moving on. Or for the actual scenes, it was just; Your character says something, other character says something, one sentence describing what he/she does, then move on to next part. I feel if you actually describe the scenes a bit more, it makes it a lot more erotic and enjoyable.
Also, of course, there is the few bugs. Absolutely nothing game breaking at least but I did see the above "unexpected string" error and as well inside of the therapy building there was a tiny lost bit of code just sitting there.
Overall though, definitely enjoyed what it currently there and looking forward to future updates. Actually seems semi-promising compared to *most* HTML games that are made.