Mod Ren'Py Bad Bobby Saga Dark Path [1.2a & 0.15.30 Test Release] [ZipTieFun]

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chain33

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So after several weeks of slow progress, delays and a missed release date, it now looks like the patreon page is gone.
Anyone know what happened? Was ZipTieFun just scamming us by the end?
 
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So after several weeks of slow progress, delays and a missed release date, it now looks like the patreon page is gone.
Anyone know what happened? Was ZipTieFun just scamming us by the end?
V<- Answer ->V
https://f95zone.to/threads/bad-bobby-saga-dark-path-v0-15-4889-ziptiefun.130448/post-12902016

V<- few post after above ->V

https://f95zone.to/threads/bad-bobby-saga-dark-path-v0-15-4889-ziptiefun.130448/post-12902016

Maybe if we all use...
Up, Up, Down, Down, Left, Right, Left, Right, B, A, Select, Start
there will be an update?
 

JasperWhite

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Public service announcement: Please read if you enjoy Bad Boy Bobby/and still want to fuck Lusy, Liza, Anna and Jenny as much as I do.

So after hunting down all three versions of the game, (the Taboo version, early version and 1.1), I felt HARD CUCKED after playing through all three released versions of the game only to find Bobby never takes advantage of Lisa by cumming on her during their studies, doesn't fuck any of the girls in their rooms whilst they're sleeping, doesn't end up dominating Anna until she's his corrupted slut-mother; he doesn't even get Liza to strip naked during photography so he can unload on her feet!

Ziptie/Raines, I love you guys. This game is entertaining as hell and the girls are hot and authentic as fuck. But what the hell? In four years and over 3000+ renders you couldn't finish a basic arc/conclusion to the plot? Why are there over 100+ stills of us getting Liza to do maid service when you could've done one straight line of giving Bobby a blackmailed blowjob? Why is there so much focus on a swimming pool when you didn't even finish Lisa's study arc? Why can't we walk right on in on Jenny, get off to her feet during all those stiff gift conversations, and leave before she notices? There's so much potential for QUICK, EASY, SATISFYING PAY-OFFS to the story you built, but for some reason you're procrastinating on stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the premise?! ....

Here's my solution, guys.

I'm an erotica writer over on Smashwords, Amazon and D2D. Share this post around the internet on the places you know people are still talking about Bobby. Reply to this comment telling me which scene you want to see the most, and I will write it, FREE OF CHARGE, with Bobby taking advantage of one of the girls as a CONCLUSION TO AN ARC (which obviously, I also want to see.)

If you can't tell, this post has a: ''and I took that personally'' vibe. Not having Lusy strip and cry during a study session after failing her final test so Bobby can ''reap the reward'' of tutoring her by jizzing on her whilst she's forced to pose is a CRIME. I am too fucking blue-balled by this game, it is not even funny. (Yes, you can laugh, this is hilarious, but seriously. COME ON!) Where are the penetrative scenes? As erotica artists we know candidness/voyeur/creep means nothing. You MUST make the scenes PAY OFF! I'm aware we must preserve the lewdness to make it feel good, to make us want to churn and empty our balls. But by the end of this plot, there should've at least been a big pay-off scene for each character.

Lusy attends a study session looking like a slut. Liza sits on the couch in nothing but a leather dog collar. The game is missing punch. It needs a scene where Anna comes out looking like a total whore in heavy make-up, with a repeat option for Bobby to use ''mommy'' however he wants after all those grabbing/groping scenes in bed. If you put that icing on the cake on an otherwise blue-baller of a game, you've made gold.

Here are my suggestions for Chapter 1:
  1. Bobby returns to Lusy's room. She's crying. She has failed her final test.
  2. He consoles her, but tells her she has to pay him back now as he's wasted a lot of money and time on her education.
  3. Bobby forces her to strip and spanks her whilst she's naked with his dick out, then climaxes on her feet.
  4. After, he says he wants to fuck her. She says, ''no way!'' and goes to tell Mom. He bullies her to stay quiet for now.
  5. That night, he ties her up and puts tape over her mouth, chaining her to the bed. He then fucks her hot, sweet ass as Liza watches from the door, too dominated/corrupt to say anything.
If you like the idea of reading this PORN STORY, drop a like. If this post gets significant attention (5-10 likes), I will post the link to the dropfile here for free. Maybe if I write a series of these you guys can buy me a coffee or something via Wishtender. But frankly, I need to alleviate my own blue balls. This shit is insane.

Ziptie/Raines, if you're reading, I'm not trying to step in on your adventure. You put a lot of work into this and I have mad respect for you and your project. But seriously guys, in three games you made me feel cucked as fuck. Good job. But also, Christ why. Why make the Dark version when it's literally the same game all over again with the same unsatisfying holes in it? There's a scene at night in 1.0.0. where one of you hinted at Anna being so drunk, she gets down on her knees for Bobby and looks like she's about to suck his dick. Her soles are out. The tension is already at max. Then you write ''TBC'' for the next four years and started more strip club arcs instead? ARE YOU MAD. Like you must be on crack cocaine, brothers! You are so close to the end of the rainbow on that one you don't even know it. I guess you don't need me to tell you that if you finished the base game with more penetration scenes in it, you'd make a shit load more money than Patreon by re-releasing it as a finished product on all the official sites? And I'm not even talking about the new ''Dark'' version. The old one would still sell like crack cocaine if you finished those early arcs and tied them up with multiple steamy sex renders.

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Fuck.

Peace,

Ghostwriter/Jasper

(p.s: If a finished version of the game exists where Bobby's arc with Anna/Lusy does exist and I'm just being a blind asshole, feel free to send me a link. If not, let's get this renovation/rescue project on the road.)

(p.p.s: I'm more than aware reading written works isn't the same as interactive media. But this is what I'm good at. I've been writing pure steam for the last 4 years. With enough time and effort, it will be just as good; if not better. Especially because you can read this shit after playing the game.)
 
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jasonx4453

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Public service announcement: Please read if you enjoy Bad Boy Bobby/and still want to fuck Lusy, Liza, Anna and Jenny as much as I do.

So after hunting down all three versions of the game, (the Taboo version, early version and 1.1), I felt HARD CUCKED after playing through all three released versions of the game only to find Bobby never takes advantage of Lisa by cumming on her during their studies, doesn't fuck any of the girls in their rooms whilst they're sleeping, doesn't end up dominating Anna until she's his corrupted slut-mother; he doesn't even get Liza to strip naked during photography so he can unload on her feet!

Ziptie/Raines, I love you guys. This game is entertaining as hell and the girls are hot and authentic as fuck. But what the hell? In four years and over 3000+ renders you couldn't finish a basic arc/conclusion to the plot? Why are there over 100+ stills of us getting Liza to do maid service when you could've done one straight line of giving Bobby a blackmailed blowjob? Why is there so much focus on a swimming pool when you didn't even finish Lisa's study arc? Why can't we walk right on in on Jenny, get off to her feet during all those stiff gift conversations, and leave before she notices? There's so much potential for QUICK, EASY, SATISFYING PAY-OFFS to the story you built, but for some reason you're procrastinating on stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the premise?! ....

Here's my solution, guys.

I'm an erotica writer over on Smashwords, Amazon and D2D. Share this post around the internet on the places you know people are still talking about Bobby. Reply to this comment telling me which scene you want to see the most, and I will write it, FREE OF CHARGE, with Bobby taking advantage of one of the girls as a CONCLUSION TO AN ARC (which obviously, I also want to see.)

If you can't tell, this post has a: ''and I took that personally'' vibe. Not having Lusy strip and cry during a study session after failing her final test so Bobby can ''reap the reward'' of tutoring her by jizzing on her whilst she's forced to pose is a CRIME. I am too fucking blue-balled by this game, it is not even funny. (Yes, you can laugh, this is hilarious, but seriously. COME ON!) Where are the penetrative scenes? As erotica artists we know candidness/voyeur/creep means nothing. You MUST make the scenes PAY OFF! I'm aware we must preserve the lewdness to make it feel good, to make us want to churn and empty our balls. But by the end of this plot, there should've at least been a big pay-off scene for each character.

Lusy attends a study session looking like a slut. Liza sits on the couch in nothing but a leather dog collar. The game is missing punch. It needs a scene where Anna comes out looking like a total whore in heavy make-up, with a repeat option for Bobby to use ''mommy'' however he wants after all those grabbing/groping scenes in bed. If you put that icing on the cake on an otherwise blue-baller of a game, you've made gold.

Here are my suggestions for Chapter 1:
  1. Bobby returns to Lusy's room. She's crying. She has failed her final test.
  2. He consoles her, but tells her she has to pay him back now as he's wasted a lot of money and time on her education.
  3. Bobby forces her to strip and spanks her whilst she's naked with his dick out, then climaxes on her feet.
  4. After, he says he wants to fuck her. She says, ''no way!'' and goes to tell Mom. He bullies her to stay quiet for now.
  5. That night, he ties her up and puts tape over her mouth, chaining her to the bed. He then fucks her hot, sweet ass as Liza watches from the door, too dominated/corrupt to say anything.
If you like the idea of reading this PORN STORY, drop a like. If this post gets significant attention (5-10 likes), I will post the link to the dropfile here for free. Maybe if I write a series of these you guys can buy me a coffee or something via Wishtender. But frankly, I need to alleviate my own blue balls. This shit is insane.

Ziptie/Raines, if you're reading, I'm not trying to step in on your adventure. You put a lot of work into this and I have mad respect for you and your project. But seriously guys, in three games you made me feel cucked as fuck. Good job. But also, Christ why. Why make the Dark version when it's literally the same game all over again with the same unsatisfying holes in it? There's a scene at night in 1.0.0. where one of you hinted at Anna being so drunk, she gets down on her knees for Bobby and looks like she's about to suck his dick. Her soles are out. The tension is already at max. Then you write ''TBC'' for the next four years and started more strip club arcs instead? ARE YOU MAD. Like you must be on crack cocaine, brothers! You are so close to the end of the rainbow on that one you don't even know it. I guess you don't need me to tell you that if you finished the base game with more penetration scenes in it, you'd make a shit load more money than Patreon by re-releasing it as a finished product on all the official sites? And I'm not even talking about the new ''Dark'' version. The old one would still sell like crack cocaine if you finished those early arcs and tied them up with multiple steamy sex renders.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Fuck.

Peace,

Ghostwriter/Jasper

(p.s: If a finished version of the game exists where Bobby's arc with Anna/Lusy does exist and I'm just being a blind asshole, feel free to send me a link. If not, let's get this renovation/rescue project on the road.)

(p.p.s: I'm more than aware reading written works isn't the same as interactive media. But this is what I'm good at. I've been writing pure steam for the last 4 years. With enough time and effort, it will be just as good; if not better. Especially because you can read this shit after playing the game.)
Damn hands down to you my boy for a passionate love for the game
 
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JasperWhite

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Damn hands down to you my boy for a passionate love for the game
Low-key feel like the biggest nerd in the room, but it's a very well-written game with some very frustrating highlights. I also love to write, so likely my energy in the post is a bit manufactured, in a sense, as I write for the purposes of entertainment.
 
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JayMI

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Public service announcement: Please read if you enjoy Bad Boy Bobby/and still want to fuck Lusy, Liza, Anna and Jenny as much as I do.

So after hunting down all three versions of the game, (the Taboo version, early version and 1.1), I felt HARD CUCKED after playing through all three released versions of the game only to find Bobby never takes advantage of Lisa by cumming on her during their studies, doesn't fuck any of the girls in their rooms whilst they're sleeping, doesn't end up dominating Anna until she's his corrupted slut-mother; he doesn't even get Liza to strip naked during photography so he can unload on her feet!

Ziptie/Raines, I love you guys. This game is entertaining as hell and the girls are hot and authentic as fuck. But what the hell? In four years and over 3000+ renders you couldn't finish a basic arc/conclusion to the plot? Why are there over 100+ stills of us getting Liza to do maid service when you could've done one straight line of giving Bobby a blackmailed blowjob? Why is there so much focus on a swimming pool when you didn't even finish Lisa's study arc? Why can't we walk right on in on Jenny, get off to her feet during all those stiff gift conversations, and leave before she notices? There's so much potential for QUICK, EASY, SATISFYING PAY-OFFS to the story you built, but for some reason you're procrastinating on stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the premise?! ....

Here's my solution, guys.

I'm an erotica writer over on Smashwords, Amazon and D2D. Share this post around the internet on the places you know people are still talking about Bobby. Reply to this comment telling me which scene you want to see the most, and I will write it, FREE OF CHARGE, with Bobby taking advantage of one of the girls as a CONCLUSION TO AN ARC (which obviously, I also want to see.)

If you can't tell, this post has a: ''and I took that personally'' vibe. Not having Lusy strip and cry during a study session after failing her final test so Bobby can ''reap the reward'' of tutoring her by jizzing on her whilst she's forced to pose is a CRIME. I am too fucking blue-balled by this game, it is not even funny. (Yes, you can laugh, this is hilarious, but seriously. COME ON!) Where are the penetrative scenes? As erotica artists we know candidness/voyeur/creep means nothing. You MUST make the scenes PAY OFF! I'm aware we must preserve the lewdness to make it feel good, to make us want to churn and empty our balls. But by the end of this plot, there should've at least been a big pay-off scene for each character.

Lusy attends a study session looking like a slut. Liza sits on the couch in nothing but a leather dog collar. The game is missing punch. It needs a scene where Anna comes out looking like a total whore in heavy make-up, with a repeat option for Bobby to use ''mommy'' however he wants after all those grabbing/groping scenes in bed. If you put that icing on the cake on an otherwise blue-baller of a game, you've made gold.

Here are my suggestions for Chapter 1:
  1. Bobby returns to Lusy's room. She's crying. She has failed her final test.
  2. He consoles her, but tells her she has to pay him back now as he's wasted a lot of money and time on her education.
  3. Bobby forces her to strip and spanks her whilst she's naked with his dick out, then climaxes on her feet.
  4. After, he says he wants to fuck her. She says, ''no way!'' and goes to tell Mom. He bullies her to stay quiet for now.
  5. That night, he ties her up and puts tape over her mouth, chaining her to the bed. He then fucks her hot, sweet ass as Liza watches from the door, too dominated/corrupt to say anything.
If you like the idea of reading this PORN STORY, drop a like. If this post gets significant attention (5-10 likes), I will post the link to the dropfile here for free. Maybe if I write a series of these you guys can buy me a coffee or something via Wishtender. But frankly, I need to alleviate my own blue balls. This shit is insane.

Ziptie/Raines, if you're reading, I'm not trying to step in on your adventure. You put a lot of work into this and I have mad respect for you and your project. But seriously guys, in three games you made me feel cucked as fuck. Good job. But also, Christ why. Why make the Dark version when it's literally the same game all over again with the same unsatisfying holes in it? There's a scene at night in 1.0.0. where one of you hinted at Anna being so drunk, she gets down on her knees for Bobby and looks like she's about to suck his dick. Her soles are out. The tension is already at max. Then you write ''TBC'' for the next four years and started more strip club arcs instead? ARE YOU MAD. Like you must be on crack cocaine, brothers! You are so close to the end of the rainbow on that one you don't even know it. I guess you don't need me to tell you that if you finished the base game with more penetration scenes in it, you'd make a shit load more money than Patreon by re-releasing it as a finished product on all the official sites? And I'm not even talking about the new ''Dark'' version. The old one would still sell like crack cocaine if you finished those early arcs and tied them up with multiple steamy sex renders.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Fuck.

Peace,

Ghostwriter/Jasper

(p.s: If a finished version of the game exists where Bobby's arc with Anna/Lusy does exist and I'm just being a blind asshole, feel free to send me a link. If not, let's get this renovation/rescue project on the road.)

(p.p.s: I'm more than aware reading written works isn't the same as interactive media. But this is what I'm good at. I've been writing pure steam for the last 4 years. With enough time and effort, it will be just as good; if not better. Especially because you can read this shit after playing the game.)

Go ahead king, would love to read this new write-up.

Also, mind sharing your portfolio as well so we could read up your previous work?

Appreciate the passion!
 

JasperWhite

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Go ahead king, would love to read this new write-up.

Also, mind sharing your portfolio as well so we could read up your previous work?

Appreciate the passion!
Maybe in a few days I'll have something to share with you guys. I have been thinking about doing a trial run to see how I imagine Bobby's voice. So maybe a scene of him perving on Lusy during study. Or talking to Jenny in her room. Or giving his mom a foot massage on the couch; a ''reimagining'' of the scenes we've already gotten, only this time with more lucid, sweaty detail about the girls, their bodies, what Bobby's thinking and how good his dick feels around them; not to mention how it makes him feel like a total pervert for getting so horny around his sisters, and how he secretly hates himself for it.

But then, of course, they present him an opportunity he just can't resist; and it's all downhill from there....

If you guys have a short scene in mind you'd like to see first, feel free to share.
 
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Badbobbytheviolater

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Public service announcement: Please read if you enjoy Bad Boy Bobby/and still want to fuck Lusy, Liza, Anna and Jenny as much as I do.

So after hunting down all three versions of the game, (the Taboo version, early version and 1.1), I felt HARD CUCKED after playing through all three released versions of the game only to find Bobby never takes advantage of Lisa by cumming on her during their studies, doesn't fuck any of the girls in their rooms whilst they're sleeping, doesn't end up dominating Anna until she's his corrupted slut-mother; he doesn't even get Liza to strip naked during photography so he can unload on her feet!

Ziptie/Raines, I love you guys. This game is entertaining as hell and the girls are hot and authentic as fuck. But what the hell? In four years and over 3000+ renders you couldn't finish a basic arc/conclusion to the plot? Why are there over 100+ stills of us getting Liza to do maid service when you could've done one straight line of giving Bobby a blackmailed blowjob? Why is there so much focus on a swimming pool when you didn't even finish Lisa's study arc? Why can't we walk right on in on Jenny, get off to her feet during all those stiff gift conversations, and leave before she notices? There's so much potential for QUICK, EASY, SATISFYING PAY-OFFS to the story you built, but for some reason you're procrastinating on stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the premise?! ....

Here's my solution, guys.

I'm an erotica writer over on Smashwords, Amazon and D2D. Share this post around the internet on the places you know people are still talking about Bobby. Reply to this comment telling me which scene you want to see the most, and I will write it, FREE OF CHARGE, with Bobby taking advantage of one of the girls as a CONCLUSION TO AN ARC (which obviously, I also want to see.)

If you can't tell, this post has a: ''and I took that personally'' vibe. Not having Lusy strip and cry during a study session after failing her final test so Bobby can ''reap the reward'' of tutoring her by jizzing on her whilst she's forced to pose is a CRIME. I am too fucking blue-balled by this game, it is not even funny. (Yes, you can laugh, this is hilarious, but seriously. COME ON!) Where are the penetrative scenes? As erotica artists we know candidness/voyeur/creep means nothing. You MUST make the scenes PAY OFF! I'm aware we must preserve the lewdness to make it feel good, to make us want to churn and empty our balls. But by the end of this plot, there should've at least been a big pay-off scene for each character.

Lusy attends a study session looking like a slut. Liza sits on the couch in nothing but a leather dog collar. The game is missing punch. It needs a scene where Anna comes out looking like a total whore in heavy make-up, with a repeat option for Bobby to use ''mommy'' however he wants after all those grabbing/groping scenes in bed. If you put that icing on the cake on an otherwise blue-baller of a game, you've made gold.

Here are my suggestions for Chapter 1:
  1. Bobby returns to Lusy's room. She's crying. She has failed her final test.
  2. He consoles her, but tells her she has to pay him back now as he's wasted a lot of money and time on her education.
  3. Bobby forces her to strip and spanks her whilst she's naked with his dick out, then climaxes on her feet.
  4. After, he says he wants to fuck her. She says, ''no way!'' and goes to tell Mom. He bullies her to stay quiet for now.
  5. That night, he ties her up and puts tape over her mouth, chaining her to the bed. He then fucks her hot, sweet ass as Liza watches from the door, too dominated/corrupt to say anything.
If you like the idea of reading this PORN STORY, drop a like. If this post gets significant attention (5-10 likes), I will post the link to the dropfile here for free. Maybe if I write a series of these you guys can buy me a coffee or something via Wishtender. But frankly, I need to alleviate my own blue balls. This shit is insane.

Ziptie/Raines, if you're reading, I'm not trying to step in on your adventure. You put a lot of work into this and I have mad respect for you and your project. But seriously guys, in three games you made me feel cucked as fuck. Good job. But also, Christ why. Why make the Dark version when it's literally the same game all over again with the same unsatisfying holes in it? There's a scene at night in 1.0.0. where one of you hinted at Anna being so drunk, she gets down on her knees for Bobby and looks like she's about to suck his dick. Her soles are out. The tension is already at max. Then you write ''TBC'' for the next four years and started more strip club arcs instead? ARE YOU MAD. Like you must be on crack cocaine, brothers! You are so close to the end of the rainbow on that one you don't even know it. I guess you don't need me to tell you that if you finished the base game with more penetration scenes in it, you'd make a shit load more money than Patreon by re-releasing it as a finished product on all the official sites? And I'm not even talking about the new ''Dark'' version. The old one would still sell like crack cocaine if you finished those early arcs and tied them up with multiple steamy sex renders.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Fuck.

Peace,

Ghostwriter/Jasper

(p.s: If a finished version of the game exists where Bobby's arc with Anna/Lusy does exist and I'm just being a blind asshole, feel free to send me a link. If not, let's get this renovation/rescue project on the road.)

(p.p.s: I'm more than aware reading written works isn't the same as interactive media. But this is what I'm good at. I've been writing pure steam for the last 4 years. With enough time and effort, it will be just as good; if not better. Especially because you can read this shit after playing the game.)
And also the fact i love non con elements so much there was so much potential, especially the shoplifting scenes where there's good chance of having non con hardcore sex there at least. All to say will add in next game. The only satisfying scene for me is seeing that lesbian cunt Julia getting finally r#p4d and Bobby losing his virginity that way. Now thats more of those scenes i want and there's potential for that.
 

Bangingslife

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Jun 23, 2021
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Public service announcement: Please read if you enjoy Bad Boy Bobby/and still want to fuck Lusy, Liza, Anna and Jenny as much as I do.

So after hunting down all three versions of the game, (the Taboo version, early version and 1.1), I felt HARD CUCKED after playing through all three released versions of the game only to find Bobby never takes advantage of Lisa by cumming on her during their studies, doesn't fuck any of the girls in their rooms whilst they're sleeping, doesn't end up dominating Anna until she's his corrupted slut-mother; he doesn't even get Liza to strip naked during photography so he can unload on her feet!

Ziptie/Raines, I love you guys. This game is entertaining as hell and the girls are hot and authentic as fuck. But what the hell? In four years and over 3000+ renders you couldn't finish a basic arc/conclusion to the plot? Why are there over 100+ stills of us getting Liza to do maid service when you could've done one straight line of giving Bobby a blackmailed blowjob? Why is there so much focus on a swimming pool when you didn't even finish Lisa's study arc? Why can't we walk right on in on Jenny, get off to her feet during all those stiff gift conversations, and leave before she notices? There's so much potential for QUICK, EASY, SATISFYING PAY-OFFS to the story you built, but for some reason you're procrastinating on stuff that doesn't have anything to do with the premise?! ....

Here's my solution, guys.

I'm an erotica writer over on Smashwords, Amazon and D2D. Share this post around the internet on the places you know people are still talking about Bobby. Reply to this comment telling me which scene you want to see the most, and I will write it, FREE OF CHARGE, with Bobby taking advantage of one of the girls as a CONCLUSION TO AN ARC (which obviously, I also want to see.)

If you can't tell, this post has a: ''and I took that personally'' vibe. Not having Lusy strip and cry during a study session after failing her final test so Bobby can ''reap the reward'' of tutoring her by jizzing on her whilst she's forced to pose is a CRIME. I am too fucking blue-balled by this game, it is not even funny. (Yes, you can laugh, this is hilarious, but seriously. COME ON!) Where are the penetrative scenes? As erotica artists we know candidness/voyeur/creep means nothing. You MUST make the scenes PAY OFF! I'm aware we must preserve the lewdness to make it feel good, to make us want to churn and empty our balls. But by the end of this plot, there should've at least been a big pay-off scene for each character.

Lusy attends a study session looking like a slut. Liza sits on the couch in nothing but a leather dog collar. The game is missing punch. It needs a scene where Anna comes out looking like a total whore in heavy make-up, with a repeat option for Bobby to use ''mommy'' however he wants after all those grabbing/groping scenes in bed. If you put that icing on the cake on an otherwise blue-baller of a game, you've made gold.

Here are my suggestions for Chapter 1:
  1. Bobby returns to Lusy's room. She's crying. She has failed her final test.
  2. He consoles her, but tells her she has to pay him back now as he's wasted a lot of money and time on her education.
  3. Bobby forces her to strip and spanks her whilst she's naked with his dick out, then climaxes on her feet.
  4. After, he says he wants to fuck her. She says, ''no way!'' and goes to tell Mom. He bullies her to stay quiet for now.
  5. That night, he ties her up and puts tape over her mouth, chaining her to the bed. He then fucks her hot, sweet ass as Liza watches from the door, too dominated/corrupt to say anything.
If you like the idea of reading this PORN STORY, drop a like. If this post gets significant attention (5-10 likes), I will post the link to the dropfile here for free. Maybe if I write a series of these you guys can buy me a coffee or something via Wishtender. But frankly, I need to alleviate my own blue balls. This shit is insane.

Ziptie/Raines, if you're reading, I'm not trying to step in on your adventure. You put a lot of work into this and I have mad respect for you and your project. But seriously guys, in three games you made me feel cucked as fuck. Good job. But also, Christ why. Why make the Dark version when it's literally the same game all over again with the same unsatisfying holes in it? There's a scene at night in 1.0.0. where one of you hinted at Anna being so drunk, she gets down on her knees for Bobby and looks like she's about to suck his dick. Her soles are out. The tension is already at max. Then you write ''TBC'' for the next four years and started more strip club arcs instead? ARE YOU MAD. Like you must be on crack cocaine, brothers! You are so close to the end of the rainbow on that one you don't even know it. I guess you don't need me to tell you that if you finished the base game with more penetration scenes in it, you'd make a shit load more money than Patreon by re-releasing it as a finished product on all the official sites? And I'm not even talking about the new ''Dark'' version. The old one would still sell like crack cocaine if you finished those early arcs and tied them up with multiple steamy sex renders.

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Fuck.

Peace,

Ghostwriter/Jasper

(p.s: If a finished version of the game exists where Bobby's arc with Anna/Lusy does exist and I'm just being a blind asshole, feel free to send me a link. If not, let's get this renovation/rescue project on the road.)

(p.p.s: I'm more than aware reading written works isn't the same as interactive media. But this is what I'm good at. I've been writing pure steam for the last 4 years. With enough time and effort, it will be just as good; if not better. Especially because you can read this shit after playing the game.)
Here goes another rainces
 
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jan^s

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This witch hunt against ZTF is going too far (I think we are collectively wasting too much energy on this) he is either going to release or not; simple as that.
We can conjointly bitch and moan about why it is not released and on the moral improprieties of his (ZTF) business practices past, present and henceforth but other than these actions, we can't do much of anything to make him release it.
He knows this, we know this and so did pateron, one of these three entities took a course of action that affected the change of the release schedule of the game. We witnessed this in real time on how he (ZTF) responded to these actions, playing it off as no big deal. This showed more of his true nature (than any action to date) on the type of person he is, if he is willing to downplay and disregard the actions from a entity that was providing him funds. Think on how he must really feel about the (this or any other) community or on the act of releasing any (of his) content to a community for free.

JM2C...

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love is not an action, its a chain, that binding noose around your heart, that drives you to do the most evil of acts...
 
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Notes:

Hey guys. I was sat here chomping down a burger and thought I'd run a brief narrative test of Bobby's voice.

My idea is to do a Light Path (Bobby responding with guilt/but overwhelming sexual perversion to his family/his own sisters, reacting to events, rather than him necessarily making the girls do what he wants, as you see here.) I will also do a Dark Path, featuring the kinds of things you see in the game currently with Liza.

The spoiler tags will let you know in the coming days which is which. If you don't like non-con, torture, and Bobby being a little psycho, probably don't read the Dark Path posts. On the other hand, if you like love, intimacy, and Bobby just being turned on for his own good around his family, read the Light Path posts. I will likely start with Bobby reacting to Lusy.

Some notes on grammar: I will always ditch some grammar when it comes to Bobby's dialogue. [e.g. ''huu?''] Because it reflects the game. And frankly, I think Bobby's voice has a lot character. [[Oh my God. It's Lucy's ass... wow, it looks so soft. I can't help it... I gotta touch myself. Damn Lusy... does she even know how she looks in that dress?]] So if you notice any grammatical imbalances, that's because I am purposefully dropping stylistics to express the fucking weed that is his character.

Today's run was a five minute shot at me getting used to the way he thinks/feels/acts in response to stimulus. Consider it me slipping on the Bobby puppet and seeing how it fits. I'm not exactly expecting anyone to have too much of a ''good time'' to this, but maybe it does flick a few switches in you guys and gets you thinking what a full piece might look like. (Imagine the same with another 2000 words and far more description of Bobby reacting to Anna as he tries to ''capitalize'' on his situation.)

That's all from me for now. Cheers guys. If you want to let me know your thoughts feel free, but keep in mind — written in five minutes. Quick dose of literature. Isn't supposed to change the world or break the paradigm. *Laughs.*
 
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Is there really the "office" scene when you catch thieves in this version, like shown in the images in the OP? thanks.
 
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