HTML - Abandoned - Apotheosis [v0.14] [Anonymous and JuliaGumshoe]

Dunno why but doin the dominant lust devil path really resonated with me.
It was on my first playthrough and I would've gone towards the light on that one dream choice but "The Maker" basically made anything other then straight relationships a sin, so I said fuck that and went down that path.
I'm done my rant now and although it isn't complete thanks for tryin to pick this up. Wouldn't have been able to experience that short but interesting route without you know......finding the game.

Damn, I played this a few years ago and was really sad to see such an interesting and unique premise end as an abandoned project. I'm extremely glad that the flame has been rekindled by someone as talented as the thread's OP.

Godspeed to you my friend. I hope you'll bring this story to great heights.

This is for the author: please keep up the good work and keep adding content, don't sleep on this. Game has great potential but at the moment some paths end abruptly. Add more content to the "resist" routes, because its always more fun to be rebellious than obey.

This is for you fellow players: Play it and go down the trailer trash route. It is freaking hilarious; I haven't had such a good laugh in a long time.

A good game; has a lot more potential than many "choose your adventure" type RPGs. The fact that the premise revolves around a dead protagonist means that the potential of the game is very large as a lot of options and stories can be added with updates, which is what I'm looking forward to.

Great writing and a fun story make this an excellent text based game. Some routes are much more fleshed out than others, but there is a lot of good stuff here already, and you won't be disappointed for giving this a try.

One of the very, very few well-written text-based games out there, with a hell of a lot of (interesting!) choices, many of which being not dependent on sexual content alone. The 40k references are also on point.

Honestly I liked CoC2 and TiTs and decided to give this a go while there are no images (you'll have to use your imagination) the writing is really on point. Also what sets it apart for others is that the writer isn't afraid to get gory or religious which is nice as it really gives the game it's own feel and makes it unique.

Not gonna lie the story is super intriguing. And I love the little side content and references if you *spoiler warning* choose to wander within the void. All in all this narrative has SUPER high potential and I can't wait for more updates.

This is a choose your own adventure with a focus on the afterlife. There are a ton of different options available and paths to go on. Keep in mind this is text based so don't be expecting a bunch of renders and porn scenes! I'm looking forward to seeing more paths completed and followed up on!

v0.13

It was mostly enjoyable reading through this. Completed two routes and encountered multiple WIP dead ends.

Some sections of the game felt waaay too rushed. For example...

Elysium intro. You get there, interact a bit, then BAM it's done after a whole one day of being there. So much missed potential.

None of the characters encountered stuck around long enough to leave much of an impression. After your encounter with them is complete; they go MIA and are never seen or mentioned again.

Closing thoughts... This felt more like reading a bunch of separate short stories than playing a single game/visual novel. It's more wide than it is deep or long.. if that makes sense? xD