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______________________________________++++++++++++++++______________________________________First, it would further develop who Anna is and what Mr. Palmer is trying to portray Anna as. It'll make more sense how Grant and Anna's relationship was and why Grant coming into the picture again in her life has meaning and importance. It would help explain how Marvin can do what he has been able to get away with... or why Kendra has such an impact on Anna.
I think he spent 2 years on developing who ana is and how Mr. Palmer trying to portrat Anna as....I don't think he should waste more and more time on portraying Anna's nature else it will become boring. And about Grant, kendra, Chris and Marvin etc...be it anyone.... those are characters. Just take an example, you meet different people in your life right? You get hit by all kind of girls, few directly few indirectly..and it's on you on how much you wanna give in while they make a move on you right? If your character will be like I wanna know more about him/her then dont give in to the corruption..or if you dont wanna know more and enjoy being in the moment then you will enjoy..I don't think there is any need to deep dive on each and every characters of the story....there is already 2 MC in the story and that's enough ...we did spent 2 years knowing david and ana's thought process on how they will react. We don't need to know why chris/marvin/grant doing that or acting that way else it will become boring plus alot of time will be waste on rendering. If they appear in the story, I am sure Mr. Palmer will explain the objective of their appearance without deep diving into their nature.
You got fat Hank--why would Anna subject herself to that and how might she truly surrender herself to him if at all. There is creepy Marvin, so what is the secret sauce that will allow him to get x, y, and z from Anna. Grant--somehow there has to be a back story that allows for reconciliation of their relationship and expand on it. Robinson, Jake and Chris are all understandable built in because of plausibility-- there doesn't need to be a back story for those three for Anna to cheat. Some back story is most definitely needed if you are going to have a Marcel route. All these combos will be that much better for the player to experience when the moments come up. What would be disappointing is all of a sudden Anna and Grant do the deed without understanding how the frak did that happen and why.
Let the story progress..As of now your choices decide after Ana got promotion, how she is gonna get involved with Hank on part 1..If your choices is not based on submission of what Hank asked for then Ana will not surrender to him.
There is another condition depending on David financial condition...There was a phone call where Hank wanted Ana and he knows David financial condition and wanted Ana to beg him for money so that he could take advantage of her...We will see along with the story of what gonna happen before surrendering to Hank. Obviously, before approaching to any character we will know the objective of why those character make a move to ana for sex...it will not be like Ana go to them and she open her clothes directly lol...But those are story part, That thing does not require to deep dive on individual nature of different characters. And the developer has already explained the nature of Ana and David for 2 years and we selected by our choices on how they will react on certain situation. So, I think that is good enough. The only option till now that I find missing is the option to submit to her uncle and neighbour. We were not given any option to control Anna with her uncle/neighbour and she submitted to their groping because of the situation. Rest with everyone until now, I think there were options given to us.
But the thing is These stuffs has nothing to do with the spoilers ....one teasing pic of what will be next in the update will not tell us the whole story about it...but it will keep us guessing depending on if there will be some good punch line too. The main objoective of spoilers is to tease the audience of what's coming next so that they can't wait for the next update plus making sure that the scene will be much hotter than the tease that has been provided in the spoiler.
Like if in the next update if he show a spoiler as Hank groping ana's ass and telling her he knows about David's financial situation. That will make everyone think of how story will proceed and how we played as Ana(where she will submit to Hank/not) and David (if he told about financial situation to Ana or hid it) ...so that kind of spoiler is required...Simple plain spoiler of Ana sitting in the office/ Jake standing in the office is boring. It doesn't mean anything.
I just wanna say one thing..yea make all the story as you want but just give proper scene from now onwards and dont left it with just a tease because it's a slow corruption. If there is some scene that is supposed to happen, then let it be within the same update from the start to the end rather then leaving the scene in the middle for the next update. and offcourse story wise keep going forward.
I think he spent 2 years on developing who ana is and how Mr. Palmer trying to portrat Anna as....I don't think he should waste more and more time on portraying Anna's nature else it will become boring. And about Grant, kendra, Chris and Marvin etc...be it anyone.... those are characters. Just take an example, you meet different people in your life right? You get hit by all kind of girls, few directly few indirectly..and it's on you on how much you wanna give in while they make a move on you right? If your character will be like I wanna know more about him/her then dont give in to the corruption..or if you dont wanna know more and enjoy being in the moment then you will enjoy..I don't think there is any need to deep dive on each and every characters of the story....there is already 2 MC in the story and that's enough ...we did spent 2 years knowing david and ana's thought process on how they will react. We don't need to know why chris/marvin/grant doing that or acting that way else it will become boring plus alot of time will be waste on rendering. If they appear in the story, I am sure Mr. Palmer will explain the objective of their appearance without deep diving into their nature.
You're missing my point... while we wait for Anna's adventures to really start, my suggestion to give people a taste of the naughty that has been missing to this point to use flash backs. Two-fold win here. You get the bump and grind NOW (of ancient history) but also you get more information about Anna that makes upcoming adventures more intense and helps the story/plots with plausibility
Let the story progress..As of now your choices decide after Ana got promotion, how she is gonna get involved with Hank on part 1..If your choices is not based on submission of what Hank asked for then Ana will not surrender to him.
There is another condition depending on David financial condition...There was a phone call where Hank wanted Ana and he knows David financial condition and wanted Ana to beg him for money so that he could take advantage of her...We will see along with the story of what gonna happen before surrendering to Hank. Obviously, before approaching to any character we will know the objective of why those character make a move to ana for sex...it will not be like Ana go to them and she open her clothes directly lol...But those are story part, That thing does not require to deep dive on individual nature of different characters. And the developer has already explained the nature of Ana and David for 2 years and we selected by our choices on how they will react on certain situation. So, I think that is good enough. The only option till now that I find missing is the option to submit to her uncle and neighbour. We were not given any option to control Anna with her uncle/neighbour and she submitted to their groping because of the situation. Rest with everyone until now, I think there were options given to us.
Case of some flawed logic here. First of all, in game choices that puts events into motion. One choice sets up the other or puts the brakes to it--the Hank Route or not. Regardless of whatever choice one makes for Anna about Hank, David is still going to have financial difficulties--I can't find any part in the game where that reality is part of the plot if Anna rejects Hank on all levels to that point. Furthermore, when or if a player chooses the Hank route, the question still remains why would Anna allow herself to be subjected to Hank? It is subjective after that point what the future would bring with a Hank and Anna route... is it constant misery for Anna to endure Hank, or does Mr. Palmer have Anna corrupt herself and become a submissive actually enjoying Hank's advances. My idea of flashbacks doesn't seem that bad as a way to enhance the plot.
But the thing is These stuffs has nothing to do with the spoilers ....one teasing pic of what will be next in the update will not tell us the whole story about it...but it will keep us guessing depending on if there will be some good punch line too. The main objoective of spoilers is to tease the audience of what's coming next so that they can't wait for the next update plus making sure that the scene will be much hotter than the tease that has been provided in the spoiler. That is the hope that the teaser is just one lick at the ice-cream cone... but if one were to think about it and ask, 'what is the point of spoilers,' eventually you will come to one of the real answers and that is to keep interest in the game and keep you and I arguing over the finer points.
Like if in the next update if he show a spoiler as Hank groping ana's ass and telling her he knows about David's financial situation. That will make everyone think of how story will proceed and how we played as Ana(where she will submit to Hank/not) and David (if he told about financial situation to Ana or hid it) ...so that kind of spoiler is required...Simple plain spoiler of Ana sitting in the office/ Jake standing in the office is boring. It doesn't mean anything. God I hope not that that is Mr_Palmer's plot for Hank and Anna "FUCK ME OR YOUR HUSBAND'S BUSINESS GOES UP IN SMOKE" blackmail route. A 7th grader could write that as a plot in their story. Or a better plot point is Anna is a closet submissive that she has repressed, and Hank brings it out of her? Would be a total WTFrak moment if suddenly Anna is willingly enjoying her own daddy/daughter fling with Hank without any setup--plenty of other H-games don't seem to have those kind of plot problems mainly because not much though was put into them
I just wanna say one thing..yea make all the story as you want but just give proper scene from now onwards and dont left it with just a tease because it's a slow corruption. If there is some scene that is supposed to happen, then let it be within the same update from the start to the end rather then leaving the scene in the middle for the next update. and offcourse story wise keep going forward. I am one of the most impatient people one would ever meet. I fly everywhere and rent a car when I reach where I want to be or need to be, even though it might be just a 16-hour drive. It really seriously has to be a special occasion to sit at a restaurant and wait for the food. If something needs to be done, It had been better done yesterday... BUT, when it comes to a good novel, glaciers move faster than my impatience gives out. It's about the only time when the adventure is better than the journey is true for me.