VN - Ren'Py - A Perfect Marriage [v0.7b] [Mr Palmer]

so let's go for it it's still at the beginning it's a new game as EVERYONE already knows it has a lot of potential ahead of it..... it's a typical relationship couple game with important choices and also not to mention that you can make choices on both sides in the game. part of David who is the main mc and also part of Anna who is his wife and the second main character of the game and for me this is very good because you can make decisions for both sides and this for me is something important in a game you have full control of the characters and so far for me it has great writing the graphics of the game are excellent it has soundtracks sometimes especially in Anna's parts it makes the game more spicy the animations I don't know yet there was nothing important so far just a sex scene between the couple but I didn't see much movement in the animations maybe in the future the updates but I don't care much about it I like the game the way it is already and the developer is doing a great t I work on this game I just hope everything goes well and he keeps sending us updates that's what I recommend it's an excellent game that can please everyone

The rating is more for the potential than anything else but its a very good start. Not much choices or options and the ones that are there don't seem to make a difference but we will see. Its a very slow burn and more story than anything else. The gradual corruption and the slow pace of the game makes it more realistic and this i like a lot (borrowed comment but applicable nevertheless).

The wife is very hot and a bit naive but it works. The MC is either going to be clueless or a tool but i can live with that.

The slow corruption story is the key to this story and look forward for more updates and i will gladly support the dev.

good luck.

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Diego

Alright listen, I'm not one for hammering down on games this early in development, but man is this poorly written. Or rather, isn't what it's advertised to be? Let me explain.

First off, there is no choices in the game yet. Basically giving you no control in making the story what you want it to be. And I understand the fact that you can't please everyone and make 5+ outcomes from the jump, but atleast make it so there isn't anything significant happening which you have no control over. For example, This brings me to my next point.

Way too many important events are "spoiled", so to speak. Chapter 1 is supposed to be mainly from David's perspective, where you can shape his personality (sort of). Surely we shouldn't be seeing what Anna is doing when David isn't around? Since that's supposed to be reserved for Chapter 2?

I know asking for decent writing is hopeless for Adult VN's, but man... And I want it to do good because I like the concept, It isn't just what it could be. A story where you get decide HOW it unfolds. Scrap that, the developer fully intended it to be like this without doing the courtesy to explicitly state what type of game this is. Just goes to show the incompetence of the developer. In the thread it was explained better than I can but it's a kinetic novel, end of. (kinetic during the first two chapters where supposedly you're in control. Nope you're in control for the shitstorm that's going to be chapter 3.)

I'll swing by when it's all said and done to see if anything's changed, but I doubt it so I think this review will stand as it is.

And no, potential doesn't warrant a high rating.

EDIT: started reading the thread, made some adjustments to the review.

Very very promising game with nice graphics and good characters. The story and the dialogs are well written.

FMC is very beautiful and feels like real person with believable qualities and flaws. She's headstrong, smart, but also playful and prone to make mistakes like any other person.

The gradual corruption and the slow pace of the game makes it more realistic and this i like a lot.

I have high hopes for this game. Can’t wait to play the next updates and i will gladly support the dev.

Many thanks!

I need to change my rating. Unfortunately, the animator has changed and the new renders look worse. Old renders were natural atmospheric. New renders I don't like the new ones. They look artificially plastic and shine too much. The characters look like toys from the well-known company Matell, which produces barbie dolls.

The assessment has been changed, we have finished Ch1 from David's perspective, now it's time for Ch2 from Anna's perspective
The game might be interesting, but it is made in a strange way, it is divided into three chapters in which we will play: Ch1- husband David Ch2's-wife Anna Ch3's - consequences of decisions Ch1 and Ch2

Anna attractiveness 9/10 - Old looking renders
Anna's new look 4/10

Choices in the game 3/10 Dev said the first two chapters will be kinetic I didn't understand, why would a wife send pictures of both men in nightgowns? Will we get the option of not sending photos in chapter Ch2?

In my opinion, we should not. See what Anna Ch1 is doing. It will be presented in Chapter Two.

6+/10 dialogues
Chris was unnecessarily introduced twice


At the moment, history is building. I wonder if Ch1 Anna will cheat on her husband when Chris comes to her tonight? And in Ch2 we will get the choice not to send him photos, or should Anna cheat on her husband, see what the future holds?

There is no better way to start a corruption game. The story and dialogue are extremely well written. I already know that the slow pace story and development will torture me and it's too early to get hyped like that, but this game could kick my favorites like GGG and ORS off the throne. Thanks for that Mr. Palmer!

What can I say? This game was going great for me until I fell asleep for the third time reading the neverending and totally over written backstory and extra drama added to a game that only has a single short and disappointing sex scene in it. Basically this was a no sex game since that scene you really don't see anything in it anyway. It got so ridiculous with the excessive writing that I just started skipping everything in the game just trying to advance the story to get to something better. Guess what? Game is short. It never happened. I hope this game improves but it will be several updates before I submit myself back to this boring endless drivel.

[v0.2]

+
Nice renders
Beautiful female characters
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This game is a pregnant cheating wife simulator and that's it, MC's wife is harassed by depraved people, her husband doesn't satisfy sexually and sends "intimate" messages to someone else. (Beta MC obviously) .Romance?, only if you find romantic to be cheated on. Not a good story

Great start to the game so far, the scene has been well flushed out and it's clear that some thought has gone into the story and characters. The relationships, reactions, and emotions are all believable and not over the top or unrealistic. Very excited to see how this turns out, all the best!

Absolutely incredible groundwork being laid. These are very nuanced portraits of what feel like real-ish humans with complicated emotions and motivations. The gradual corruption is fantastically done as well. The renders are pretty average, but the writing is detailed and elevates the scenario. I have high hopes for this game!

The game is very interesting and since there is mentioned NTR is avoidable i am happy to be able myself to try all out. The game is very good made and the first introduction looks very promising. I can enjoy the game until now and hope the dev sticks to it and dont give up soon.

I've always wanted a VN like this - a story with the downfall of a good marriage and a the fall of the husband and the wife. This one seems to do it perfectly. There's so many people trying to tear it down, many temptations all around and the game gives us the choice to try to keep the marriage intact.

As a massive fan of the cheating spouse category, I'm eagerly looking forward to future updates.

Pros:
+ an eye for detail (like serving food and other things to let it look more realsitic/believable - even with photos etc and that in a porn game wow!)
+ nice renders!
+ multiple mc's (i hope for anna perspective soon)
+ mc anna looks really pretty! (even tho i think she could use a bit more curves especially after mentioning it in Davids inner monologue cause i couldn't really see a difference before and after pregnancy)
+ creepy old guy option (even tho i think he is a bit too fat and tall)
+ nicely written dialogue
+ Alexia (gym girl) looks damn sexy too and that as a side character wow!
+ choices (even very minor at the moment)
+ i like how christ tries to get nudes etc from her and she resists even being a more or less naive person which fits the character, her role and the built up of corrupting really nice!

Cons:
- girl could look a bit curvier especially after mentioning it in husbands dialogue (i hope she will have big nipples )
- seems like slow pased which isn't bad at all just hope it won't be just one character per updare who will have fun
- old guy Hank should be a bit smaller and should have a bit less fat but could have an even older face currently he looks too big for (hopefully later sex scenes)
- more old guy options missing (would love to see a small old asian guy maybe as a neighbour or business partner? could recommend models, please!)
- can't see big impact on choices at the moment but maybe this comes with later updates


overall game with nice potential and a great base. dev has an eye for detail and a more or less realistic environment with believable characters and thoughts. female mc is hot even lacking a bit of curves (i mean even alexis the gym girl seem to have more if i have seen right) old boss seems way too big for sex scenes - hope he will get imrpoved or that there will be other smaller old creepy characters later on. otherwise a really solid story built up with really good english and good readable text and hopefully more impactful decissions later on.

beautiful story start up and the character work is also too good waiting for more updates and would love to play the game with more updates updated sooner...........(^) would also love to know how this intresting story goes on with all the character put to use

Love where this is going. It's far too short, but it does say it's a prologue. I just hope this doesn't get lost in the head smacking emojis. Great potential. Great start. To be honest I'm giving it five stars in part because I hate how NTR games take such a big hit. Even the ones that deserve to have five. Also, I hate when authors get discouraged because of the low votes and don't finish the VN. I'm voting on this one and following til completion. Keep it up! Can't wait til the next update!

Critique - v1.0

The story consists of a lot of backstory at the moment and one very tame sex scene between hubby and wife.

The renders are a little basic for my taste, can't really say much in terms of plot as it's not very far along yet. No serious animations and maybe one sex sound so far.

Look forward to some racy updates.

My Rating of [v1.0] is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Beautiful Women
+ Long Game play
+ Hot Story
+ Easy Game Play

Cons:
- Not much Sex (V1.0)

Conclusion:

This Game has great graphics and also the characters are is pretty good.
Hank has already caught my Eye in the Story and hope to see some Hot scenes in the Future.
The Story is clean and in depth without you getting tired of reading, just my bag of tee.
The Game just came out so there weren't many Sex Scenes yet, but I still love how the Story was told & that the first Release told you a lot of the Background of the married couple, how they met etc. so that the player is not left in the dark about how they came together.

Hope the Dev Keeps it up and brings out regular updates, because this game seems worthy of my support in the future releases.

Damn worth the Download.