VN HTML Abandoned Pirate King [Ch 2 0.1] [critical_gaming]

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Autark

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Dam i remeber this Cover on Kinox from a Ooooold Porn Movie in my Teen Days... xD

Btw, Cover Pic is from the Movie Pirates Stagnettis Revenge...^^
 
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Alfre4u

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Old Great Movie series I watched some of as a kid, if it is that series otherwise idk what this game really has to do with it by looks of pic but umm gl or w/e thanks for the memory of the movie series.
 

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Not sure about the game but I'd be Really Careful if I was this Dev... Jamie Hawke The Author of the book this game is basically ripped out of word for word (Literally the intro is word for word with only the name Frank (The MC of the series) removed from the books blurb) is likely to be pretty unhappy with his book being ripped off word for word to make a porn game. (Should he find out) Just sayin be careful... and maybe a lil more creative?
Then Jamie Hawke would get Digital Playground in front of the court as well then, as this game is ripped 1 on 1 from the Pirates movies from DP, which are porn movies.
 

critical_gaming

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0.1 is coming along nicely.

Now I'm a bit more confident with html I totally re did the story which I think fits in better with the videos (if you've seen the films you'll understand the going for comedy story)
 

critical_gaming

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updated from demo to 0.1
still not a great deal of content, 1 sex scene. is more story
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

The summary and samples made me come. I was skeptical before trying because I was afraid it would be too much on the parody side but the game wasn't that bad.

The worldbuilding is limited but enough for a start.
The characters are few and different.
The plot seems interesting.
The photos and gifs chosen are correct.

The game is more like a story we go through. There's only one real choice so far. The overall result is well made.

I don't know how was the initial release but the summary and the samples don't fit what's in the game anymore.

What's the difference between each role apart from how the characters call us? And the personalities?
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There's a duplicate of lines just before the end :
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Some spelling errors too.

I'll post status updates on here from now on since its banned on itch io
Isn't it possible to do it on Subscribestar? I saw other devs doing it there but do it where you feel like it.

Good continuation.
 
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critical_gaming

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Oliz82

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Hello.

I tried the new update and it was a good continuation.

Having the choice of how we want to solve the situation is exactly what I was hoping (plus, having the possibility to access some content even though we don't have enough of the right stat is well thought). We're also starting to grow our role.
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A remark about the videos : you made it so they don't start, which is a good thing, but, once they are activated, they are on autoloop, which I think is useless.

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I think this sentence should be in red since it's Juur who is talking. Maybe there are others but it's the only one that I caught.

Good continuation.
 

critical_gaming

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yes it should be juur. thanks for letting me know

if you think having loop off would be better then I'll change ty
 
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critical_gaming

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for stats I'm hoping now you've got a skill point in your chosen class, choices will only be open for that class, with the others unavailable
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

Thanks for the answers.

if you think having loop off would be better then I'll change ty
Story wise and game wise, I don't think it's necessary. If we only want to fap, we can replay the video again (or search on a porn site...). Be careful, some videos are used like gifs (like when we see the Sea Stallion).

for stats I'm hoping now you've got a skill point in your chosen class, choices will only be open for that class, with the others unavailable
In terms of gameplay, what does that mean? It clearly won't change the direction of the story but what can be expected (without spoiling too much)? Will it improve replayability? Is it better to have a save for each of them? There's already lover and rascal to take into account so would that mean 8 saves?

i wondering if this would be easier for telling which charcter is talking.

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Yeah, it's clearly easier. The colors were already helpful.

Those are just my thoughts. Others may think differently. I'm just hoping to help you even a little.

Good continuation.
 

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Then Jamie Hawke would get Digital Playground in front of the court as well then, as this game is ripped 1 on 1 from the Pirates movies from DP, which are porn movies.
If Digital Playground paid for their story rights (which happens more than people think) then this author would be against JH *and* DP in court.
e-d
 

H_NGM_N666

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I still got the movie on my hard disk in the parody folder :)

In my opinion:
- Videos with sounds, start automatic and in loop when you scroll down
- Don´t play with too many colours, just make it in such 1 color so you can read it good
 

critical_gaming

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changed classes to 3 for now

can't think of a nice fourth one, pirate didn't really fit, tried assassin but it doesn't fit too well. both didn't sound right in story.

scrapped the personality aswell, trying to tie it in to the story wasn't working. instead I've made a weapon choice, so you can choose a weapon, like sword, axe or dagger, so far seems to work ok
 
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