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I think the hair (in 2) is too fluffy. The shorter hair from before (punk rocker) worked. Other alternatives (IMO) would be a ponytail that's easy to
The multicolors doesn't really work because that's something that sends the message of free spirit, not dominating spirit.
When I think of Neela/Nessa, I'm thinking of a girl that's going to use sex to her advantage. With multicolored hair, I don't get that message. She's got the tits and ass to prove it. So her hair would distract from the assets she already has.
That's how I see it.
Blouse vs skirt, both look viable for a school setting. Maybe one's for the weekday and the other's for the weekend?
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in general.The multicolors doesn't really work because that's something that sends the message of free spirit, not dominating spirit.
When I think of Neela/Nessa, I'm thinking of a girl that's going to use sex to her advantage. With multicolored hair, I don't get that message. She's got the tits and ass to prove it. So her hair would distract from the assets she already has.
That's how I see it.
Blouse vs skirt, both look viable for a school setting. Maybe one's for the weekday and the other's for the weekend?
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Now here some options, the first, ugly hair, the second same hair but no shaved, and the third with ponytail.
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For the first two, try a black base with the mohawk having a red tip. She turns into a rooster. Out of the shaved ones, I like the non-bald one (2)
I like the ponytail the most myself. Makes her just innocent enough to be manipulative. Or maybe later in the game, she can change to the shorter haircut. *shrugs*
I like the ponytail the most myself. Makes her just innocent enough to be manipulative. Or maybe later in the game, she can change to the shorter haircut. *shrugs*
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I let you the hairs with the black base, but almost can be see it and a shorter ponytail.
Almost forgot, new mom model. I have two styles of clothes, lets see what we can do with her. The hair color is a little weird because i have to put the color manually, in other moment i will changed.
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For Nessa/Neela, that last crop doesn't look good for her IMO. The mohawk makes her too butch.
The ponytail is good, but with the bow, it's like she's an innocent little flower. Unless she's going to manipulate someone by making them think she really is (try buttoning up the shirt) the ones on page 4 are better. The freckles are okay, but I'd probably see about moving them over her face instead of bunched up in the middle.
I have to replay both UxL and UD to think about the personality of the Mom, but just from the view, those look alright.
The ponytail is good, but with the bow, it's like she's an innocent little flower. Unless she's going to manipulate someone by making them think she really is (try buttoning up the shirt) the ones on page 4 are better. The freckles are okay, but I'd probably see about moving them over her face instead of bunched up in the middle.
I have to replay both UxL and UD to think about the personality of the Mom, but just from the view, those look alright.
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About the ponytail i take off the bow and now have more freckles in almos all her face, and the mohawk i really don't understand what you tried to say, sorry, english is not my first lenguage, i get lost in some parts.
I changed the eyes color too.
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You know how you have lesbian couples? What I called Neela was butch. Meaning she's the "male" in a female only relationship. If you call someone a "fem" they're the female of the relationship who wear the girly stuffs.
There's a bunch of ways to do the mohawk but how it's rendered, it doesn't look good. It's as if she has a receding hairline and detracts from her. But if you want to see the mohawk, here's what I looked
With that freckle adjustment, and the ponytail, I believe you have "innocent" Neela/Nessa.
There's a bunch of ways to do the mohawk but how it's rendered, it doesn't look good. It's as if she has a receding hairline and detracts from her. But if you want to see the mohawk, here's what I looked
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which is the hair on it. I don't know what would be good for her at just this stage, but that's two for the hawk whenever you decide on a story for her.With that freckle adjustment, and the ponytail, I believe you have "innocent" Neela/Nessa.
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Yes, i removed because the hair was in bad possition, i was rendering that again, but i see you liked more the others hair styles so i stoped and do others. Actually i will not understand you so much, hahah, i think all of you want characters with the original personality and who looks like the 2d versions. What will be? original characters o modified?
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I will not lie you, i don't know if thats possible, i will look but i think i don't see it something like that.I would love to see pokies on the characters
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Luckzor, I think its great you take our suggestions, but its you that need to decide in the end.
we have told what we like, now, you pick the one that you like. i think it will be good no matter what you choose.
we have told what we like, now, you pick the one that you like.
i think it will be good no matter what you choose.
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Yeah, I'm just a guy that'll say "okay, I'll fap to this" and give you guidance on the story, but besides that, I'm just here to help. I don't have the capability to really do much besides show you why I like things a certain way. You're the director of this project, so take the feedback as ways to look into different aspects. As I said, you can have an "innocent" Neesa before you have the Neesa as a character change, but how the story goes in this format is up to you.
Well, if nothing else you have the maps to build from and if you get consent from the prior dev's maybe they can send the code you can work from. It could save time getting up to speed and give more energy to the rendering process and animations.
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That's impossible. Nergal has disappeared and Wootch is a piece of crap no one wants to work with.
Anything you want out of the code, you're going to have to scrounge up and figure out for yourself.
There is always a way, it was discussed when another Dev said they lost their code, you can extract from game. Even using dialog as a skeleton to work from can get the first version up faster and bigger than most. It is the notion of where the story lines were going to end, a natural arcing, that is the difficult part.
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I know, and i'm really grateful for you kidness, support and advices, the thing was, much ideas and really differents in some point. Like lost the track. But is okay, the suggestions can go on, i will see it and if fits with the game there will be.
Nergal dessappear really quick, how knows what happened to him/her, i don't know if s/he would give me the code, was much work and maybe he don't want make the things easy for other.
Wootch is like a ghost, you never know where come from but you know he is there in the darkness and he looks really greedy, don't mine in ask even if i knowed how find him.
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