VN Ren'Py My Dorm [v0.17.0 P2 Ch.5.0] [Tropecita Games]

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TigerWolfe said:
I enjoyed, it felt more substantial as well, maybe due to all the scene changes, not sure. I'm definitely jonesing to get the rest of the women preggers, as well as looking forward to spending time with our nurse and swimmer.

Basically I'm just bummed that you didn't start this like 5 years ago, so I could just play through that much content.
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Thanks, Tiger!
I didn't even know AVNs existed 5 years ago. My stepson showed me this world in 2021. I can't imagine doing this during the COVID lockdown. My wife would have killed me because she wouldn't see me even spending 24h in the same apartment :D

S1nsational said:
That was a fantastic and surprisingly huge update. Lots of progress and sexy times.

All of Amanda's scenes were great. She's really coming into her own as a character, Eva too though we didn't see as much of her this update.

Megan seems to be overlooking Kate for her beauty pageant, because Megan and Kate have incredibly similar figures and builds. Kate's boobs are bigger, but not massively bigger. Also, I would kill for a threesome with Megan and Kate. The two curvy girls together would be amazing.

Also also, if Megan thinks things are complicated with what little she knows, I can't wait to see her mind actually explode when she knows everything.

I do like how the living situation was raised, time to start looking at harem mansions. But that'll probably be a good while off, after the last students get moved in and absorbed into the family/harem.

Betty seems to be caring less and less about all the incest and dating multiple women the more she gets to play detective. Gods have mercy on us all when there's nothing more for her to discover and she starts getting bored.

I loved Eileen's speech to her mother. Brilliantly multilayered.

Very much looking forward to the next update
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Thanks, S1nsational!

I needed to start differentiating Amanda from Eva on one hand and from Erika/Daphne on the other. Until now we saw her as a pack with Eva, but they are as different as the girls at home and that should show up.

Megan's sentence about the pageant shows her intelligence. She knows Kate and she, even Betty, play in the same league, the THICC league (no witty meaning comes to mind). But she won't say anything bad about the other girls (and she thinks being thicc is bad). She's the newcomer and she still doesn't know that she can banter with Kate about weight, or if Kate and Betty are in the harem and the MC can feel offended. So better focus on the girls she thinks are in a different league with their sculptural bodies.

The day everything goes public, there will be some unhinged jaws hitting the ground, not only Megan's. This update the only reveal was Debbie's to Lisa. How will Lisa act on that information?

The living situation will be an issue when the new students arrive. Meemaw, Betty, and Eileen/Kiara are using their rooms. Obviously some temporary arrangements will be made until a definitive solution can be reached, like Erika moving to Emma's room and leaving hers to Meemaw/Betty, and Eileen/Kiara moving to MC's room (who will be in Aruba then). But a definitive solution should be in progress by then.

Betty's at a crossroads but she hasn't realized until the after-Kiara conversation. She's very intuitive when it comes to others, but not so much for her own feelings since she has restrained them for years. Meemaw's conversation in the bathroom (and what we didn't see after they kicked the MC out) opened her eyes to that even Meemaw is having incestuous dreams. The "That strong, handsome, sexy, and adorable guy... Considering that Kiara has never said any of that... Is that how you see me?" took her by surprise. How will she react once she has time to think?

Eileen doesn't want to leave. And, especially, doesn't want her mother to leave. Kiara is as stubborn as anyone can be (remember the "And you know the best way to cram 300 Irishmen into a car is to tell them they can't fit." sentence), but Eileen knows how to touch the correct buttons for her (she has been trying different combinations in the days since the swing).

But Kiara is at the same crossroads as Betty (the "dragon scene" shows how she sees the MC) but she knows she is there and that's why she has been avoiding the MC since the visit to her house. Eileen doesn't know that, but the MC is starting to get it into his thick skull. It's a difficult situation for her. And remember her now-pregnant daughter teased her and she thought "(No! Eile is right! These thoughts are dangerous and I shouldn't have them... and I'm a married woman.)". A difficult place to be.
 
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TropecitaGames said:
I would like, for those of you willing and with time to do it, if you could give some feedback on the update. Which scenes did you like or dislike? Did you try more than one of Maddie's scenes? Did you like the differences between them? How you compare Eva family meeting from the previous update with Amanda 's in this one? And any other feedback you can provide. Remember that, without knowing what works and what doesn't, I can't improve.

Thanks!
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Thor had, rather obviously, disgracefully not enough screen time for a character of such importance in the game.

MC's face/head had rather too much screen time in my opinion. Not that he's ugly. Just seeing his, as you already know and informed everyone about it, face just... feels weird. As it's hard to immerse myself into MC if I see his face too often, when it's supposed to be me. I'm just not that handsome.

Eva's hairstyle (bun was it called?) feels weird and in my opinion doesn't feel like her style, but might be just my personal preference though, as I am used to girls not having hairs shorter than Martha's.

Both family meetings were equally cheesy and corny. Wouldn't change a damn thing about them. Well, maybe for the fact it should be just one family reunion dinner with both girls.

I heard girls moaning in my headphones. Were those sounds addded in the current update or I just never noticed them before? If the first one, then it's nice. Sound can be huge part of the experience. Listening only music can be... boring.

After reading the conversation with Betty I feel MC shouldn't be that dumb, for the lack of better word. An I'm writting this as full blown and known retard of 1d4chan and f95zone. It's impossible to be more retarded, because If I do, I'll just turn like India in Civilization. Just instead of throwing nukes I'll become a mastermind or something.

I know those last updates were about clones, but I find the lack of Martha... disturbing.

divingmedic said:
Sex with Nana?
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Which one. Betty or Meemaw?
 
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I have to say, people are being way too harsh on MC about not getting what's going on with Kiara.

You have to remember, nearly every other girl and woman in the game have practically thrown themselves at him once they realized they like him. Like even among the family members, there was remarkably little resistance, and at least with them MC had a very obvious reason to understand their reluctance. Olivia, and to a lesser extent Betty are two outliers of the family.

Like after establishing 14 romantic relationships pretty easily, i think getting confused at the first relationship of any dynamic not going smoothly is understandable.
 
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iamthejuggler said:
I am trying to imagine how on earth that conversation came up/progressed! Good on your stepson!
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TropecitaGames: What's that?

Stepson: Adult Visual Novels...

TropecitaGames: ....okay?

Stepson: I fap to NTR AVNs every day... God, I love it so much.

TropecitaGames: WTF is going on?

Stepson. You know how to code, right?

TropecitaGames: ...yeah?

Stepson: Can you make me an AVN with GILF and NTR?

TropecitaGames: ...eeeeeeeeh.... maybe...

:KEK:
 
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