- Feb 2, 2018
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Hi mate,Really, the entire script/dialogue needs to be read through by a 'decent' proof-reader. I'll give you a few examples of mistakes/errors at the start of the game as I've had to start it again.
So the above errors were all between the time the MC got dropped off by the bus and picked up in the car at the start of the game. There are numerous similar errors throughout the rest of the game like this, not to mention the strange phrasing of some of the dialogue, although I'm assuming the writer is a not a native English speaker so it's forgivable, but could be corrected.
- I had before packing > I had it before packing
- I can
resistwait for a few minutes- I thought you were sent out to scout
ingfor places to rob- prolong
ue- But no
remore.- waist > waste
- I
forcertainly won't
Thanks for the feedback! I will correct these mistakes with the next release.