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I like the Vitorian sexual conservative setting, but are they all MILFs?
Vitorian young girl would be nice.
Vitorian young girl would be nice.
Makes no sense what you said, that female protagonist is the one with the biggest focus on the game by a landslide. everything ok at home?So no protagonist. Got it?
Makes no sense what you said, that female protagonist is the one with the biggest focus on the game by a landslide. everything ok at home?
Agreed. The visual appeal of the game is extraordinary.love the renders.
All of the chapters are in each download.interested in trying this is the game chapters all in one download or is each chapter a different download?
awesome thank you off to downloadAll of the chapters are in each download.
This one is on my "interested but not downloaded" list. I like it when a Dev includes definitive things like "days" or "episode" or, in this instance I would guess "issue" breaks - I tend to do copious screen shots to do something akin to a "scene replay" (or for meme purposes) and I generally employ a naming convention that includes the day/episode, etc. to keep things in order.All of the chapters are in each download.
Each chapter features new characters and locations, so each is quite definitive and self-contained.This one is on my "interested but not downloaded" list. I like it when a Dev includes definitive things like "days" or "episode" or, in this instance I would guess "issue" breaks - I tend to do copious screen shots to do something akin to a "scene replay" (or for meme purposes) and I generally employ a naming convention that includes the day/episode, etc. to keep things in order.
Does this Dev do anything like that, or will I need to open the script.rpy and just see what the ending dialogue/scene is as I do in some VNs when I get to them a few releases in?
the dialogues makes me wanna skip the the whole game. its so horribleThe game has a great vibe to it with the steampunk genre combined with a bit of Judge Dredd, but the story and especially dialogue are lacking.
Making the story work wouldn't require much in the way of changes. Just make the starting society one in which, 1984-style, the government has worked to make people reject emotion. It can be for utopian reasons (the author hints at it here with the references to "we are not animals" in objection to the new regime). But the sudden change with drastic new rules for society doesn't make sense in the game. There is no impetus for such a revolutionary change. Solutions to the problem described would be gradual, in order to see what works. A political revolution, though, with a revolutionary government zealously trying to reverse the policies of the old regime, makes more sense.
Dialogue has two problems: first, it embraces incredibly tired and boring cliches with the titles of people, and, second, it is horribly awkward and artificial.
"MILF and "Young Adult" are titles that drag the reader right out of the story and make them think "how could the author think that this was a good idea?" every time they are used. Instead of "I don't want my Young Adult to see my like this," just use the names of the characters. That's kind what names are for.
The poor dialogue is probably more an artifact of a bad translation than anything else. Have a native speaker help with that. If you can't fins any volunteers from your patrons, ask me. I've done this for several other games.
Fix the implausible story and awkward dialogue, though, and this will be a gem, just as Special Request is. A bunch of short stories you can crank out when tired of working on the big project is probably exactly what the doctor ordered.
The textures of the intimate parts in front and behind the girls were incredible, I saw the skin area in the game, even in certain parts that shiver of cold or pleasure was totally real, congratulations on the beautiful work.Developer: Nemiegs
Here is my weekly update from Patreon that should explain the whole purpose of this game.The textures of the intimate parts in front and behind the girls were incredible, I saw the skin area in the game, even in certain parts that shiver of cold or pleasure was totally real, congratulations on the beautiful work.
But I also have to say how horrible the textures of the male organs were, the skin looks more like yellow silicone rubber, it made everything perfect on female bodies and completely ruined the male textures.
I thought the events would continue with the same characters, there was something a bit pointless in this game.
The first phase is when the husband does everything wrong and turns his wife into an eccentric whore, he wishes he had seen more and then it ends.
If that law was adopted in all the provinces' perimeters for women to become submissive and totally whores, I don't know why there was no continuity with all the characters.
There was something a bit meaningless in the story that remained unfinished in all the editions published to date!!!
just tried this, the volume was so fing loud that i instantly hit ALT+F4 for an instant shutdown.
than shredded the folder.
it was nice trying this for a full 1.5 seconds.
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