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VN Ren'Py Completed Make Me Happy [v1.0] [Dimajio333]

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Oliz82

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Hello.

The samples made me come. But I don't know what to think.

The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is simple but done with some variations.
The artistic side is well done.

Reading the summary, I thought I could enjoy the game but, after trying every choice, I have mixed feelings.
Everything was consensual but what happened left me perplexed.

It was fast paced (so much that it seemed rushed for me).
The vision when entering the room (Dylan's posture as the male alpha who did his duty, almost arrogant and Sarah completely passed out, like a corpse) was unpleasant.
The two endings already existing were strange (Sarah's complete change of mind in the good ending and Ron's train of thoughts and attitude in the bad ending). The inner dialogs in the ongoing path can be annoying from time to time too.

It was nice it was consensual. All the characters had a good personality. The sex scenes were well made, a little too crude sometimes. Thanks for using an attractive model for Dylan (the couple too is very nice) and not the usual ugly bastard or BBC.

Good continuation.
 
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Pr0GamerJohnny

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Manuya said:
thank you dev and great job downloading now, i played your other VN 'permission' it was short but it's ok, please continue working on VNs in the netorare genre which is sorely lacking here and ignore the kink shaming crybabies and whiners!
like seriously it stated in the front page that it's an NTR VN so no one cares about you coming here whining about it, stay mad
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seconded, and I think this is one of his better ones; I realize its just a side game for him which is unfortunate because I like the setup and character models in this better than Lost in paradise.
 
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Dear Friends,
I finished my short novel "Make Me Happy".
I put a lot of effort and emotion into this game. It is not perfect, but everything that I have in mind, I was able to implement in the course of this game.
This is a visual novel, but it still has several choices. Each of them leads the player to a different ending.
I really hope you enjoy this part of my NTR collection.

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Nurikabe

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juanides said:
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Dear Friends,
I finished my short novel "Make Me Happy".
I put a lot of effort and emotion into this game. It is not perfect, but everything that I have in mind, I was able to implement in the course of this game.
This is a visual novel, but it still has several choices. Each of them leads the player to a different ending.
I really hope you enjoy this part of my NTR collection.

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mac
android
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Hey, I wanted to say that I enjoy these stories. They are short and there are times I would like to know more. But they also provide a satisfying amount that does make the viewer want to come back for more. The cheating wife/cuckold path certainly got my blood boiling. And I was happy that I had both the options to end the relationship and/or have a happy ending.

I hope you continue making many more short stories and even delve into an in-depth visual novel or two (or more!).

(BTW, I think you can send the mods a message and take ownership of the thread and post that it is updated. Assuming that you are the author?)
 
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Nurikabe said:
Hey, I wanted to say that I enjoy these stories. They are short and there are times I would like to know more. But they also provide a satisfying amount that does make the viewer want to come back for more. The cheating wife/cuckold path certainly got my blood boiling. And I was happy that I had both the options to end the relationship and/or have a happy ending.

I hope you continue making many more short stories and even delve into an in-depth visual novel or two (or more!).

(BTW, I think you can send the mods a message and take ownership of the thread and post that it is updated. Assuming that you are the author?)
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Thanks for the review, this is very interesting to know the players' opinion. I really appreciate this) Most likely this is my last story is such format, as this kind of short games are usually less interesting to players, unlike large projects. At least that's my observation. Although I did enjoy making this small game :)
 
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This was a really good short story
I just wished the wife didn't lie why couldn't she just be honest.
My mc liked that she was banging Dylan.

Anyway Goodluck with whatever you make next dev :)
 
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