he could definately achieve a shorter dev cycle if he would get rid of those pointless annoying minigames. especially the math thing in ep10. god that was annoying. the brawler got a bit tougher, especially the fight against the black guy, but definately enjoy knocking Alex out regularly. i did fight him about 5 times per run since he wasn't hard to beat almost flawlessly and the crowd reactions and look on his face were priceless.
cutting those renders back a bit would be good too. personally not a fan of hunting for renders, usually takes a few LI runs to get em all. but since there are 6 paths to play through it gets done. and for fuck sakes get this loan crap finished for fuck sakes. better stories need more attention. and more mc fucking with Tyballs is a must. i absolutely love fucking him over at any opportunity. think the first time i got to the punch Tybalt scene, i pounded that punch him button at least 100 times before i stopped laughing...