Well, for having a lesbian path, the title screen has a picture of the MC and her friend holding several used condoms full of cum and tied to her bikini. So.... yeah, should probably go with something more neutral.
Renders are... alright. On the low end, but assume that's due to your machine more than anything. Though the paper dolls pasted on a static background was a bit off-putting. You can see it is just literal copy paste. Then just black screens describing what is happening instead of showing. That's kind of lazy, sorry. Show what is happening, don't just tell us.
Pretty short overall (like 5 minutes), really no choices (none that mattered). MC feels pretty naive and clueless. Feels like it is going to go the typical slut simulator as most fem protag games do (MC masturbating in the shower thinking of her friend already and flashing on cam without any choices in the matter). So yeah, doesn't feel like it will have much of a story and be more about the porn instead. Which is fine if you want to go that way. There are some that prefer that.
So yeah, not really my cup of tea but thought I'd leave some feedback at least after trying it. Best of luck with your project still and thanks.
For the home screen, I confirm it was maybe not the best choice, I intended to show a different home screen at each update to show the different possible path in the future. This one is probably a bit too vulgar.
For the rendering indeed I don't have a war machine so for example to use the DAZ software but it's also because I am a beginner. I am well aware that it is not perfect and I hope to progress from chapter to chapter.
Indeed it's quite short, reading well,... I calculated +- 9min. (maybe I'm slow to read
), so it limits the number of choices. Only the first choice is important indeed, because it will greatly change the story.
Concerning the type of game, it is true that those who like the style of game "slut simulator" (Especially if you choose the "heterosexual" path) will have several roads of this kind, on the other hand as I indicated it on my patreon (not available for the moment because I had not paid attention that the site had to check the contents before the public could see it
) almost totality of the time they will be avoidable. For example concerning the streaming, in a next update, I will propose to people if they want to go further or not.
For the masturbation scene in the bathroom, I probably did not know how to explain the scene well... She doesn't masturbate, but when she touches her breasts she thinks about the event with her friend and therefore gets a little excited.
Concerning her stream, it's not her first stream and she wants to earn money so the fact of being drunk and earning a lot of money makes her go further than usual.
The game will have a story but it's true that it's essentially about the main character's libido, I can imagine that some people will not like it.
But thanks for you honest opinion, I hope you will find the right game for you.
