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slowburngames

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Very similar to 12 Days of Christmas in terms of story and game mechanics. Which isn't bad as I enjoyed it.
Pretty girl (although seems derived from Amy) and I love the very short haircut and the newer one too. But whose hair grows that much in two months? Not mine. :-D
Also a very slow progression, which works in this case.
Biggest issue is with sex scenes so far. We still haven't seen any pussy and it seems the dev shies away from it as there has been opportunities already, there's even offscreen creampies. Previous games suffered similar problem but when it's your first you are more lenient. If it remains like that, whether is a dev's preference or technical limitation, it's going to lose some audience.
Good luck though.
I get the frustration that pussy is not shown yet, but that is deliberate. I know it can be frustrating when each episode is seen in isolation but I have to look at things more holistically; think of the whole story beginning to end. It is a literary technique to introduce things gradually, building up expectations, teasing, and matching the pace of "reveals" with the increasing corruption of the MC. For instance, you may have noticed in the first two chapters that MC never showed boobs (lots of back shots. or covered with arms etc). Gradually they are revealed. Same will happen with genitalia. Like I said, I know it can be frustrating because we are seeing only the first few chapters, but I'm trying to craft the whole, finished product. If you were to play the finished game from beginning to end it would make more sense.
 

R1k0

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Absolutely love Jen's model.
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But the developer is doing everything he can to ruin her. Stupid hairstyles, glasses, something wrong with her eyes, with her lips. They said it was a wig, but she sleeps in a wig? That's really weird. The animation, it would be better if it wasn't there at all than the way it is in the game.
 

Alexxx888

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Absolutely love Jen's model.
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But the developer is doing everything he can to ruin her. Stupid hairstyles, glasses, something wrong with her eyes, with her lips. They said it was a wig, but she sleeps in a wig? That's really weird. The animation, it would be better if it wasn't there at all than the way it is in the game.
She colored her hair brunette for the last mission, she didn't wear a wig. It's a game about undercover missions, there should be things like glasses, wigs, hair coloring, etc.
 

R1k0

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She colored her hair brunette for the last mission, she didn't wear a wig. It's a game about undercover missions, there should be things like glasses, wigs, hair coloring, etc.
Yeah, I get it now, although nowhere does it say she dyes her hair. But I don't think it was necessary or she could have just put on a wig like before and gone back to her natural hair. She ends up looking like a gray mouse.
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Well, it's his game and he can do what he wants with it. About the glasses, she was without glasses, but then she's lying on the couch talking to her husband with glasses on, what's the point?

I also want to say about the sex scenes. It's his third game and why the hell do they look so lame?
 
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Alexxx888

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Yeah, I get it now, although nowhere does it say she dyes her hair. But I don't think it was necessary or she could have just put on a wig like before and gone back to her natural hair. She ends up looking like a gray mouse.
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Well, it's his game and he can do what he wants with it. About the glasses, she was without glasses, but then she's lying on the couch talking to her husband with glasses on, what's the point?

I also want to say about the sex scenes. It's his third game and why the hell do they look so lame?
I also more like Jen as a blonde, but I totally disagree that she looks like a gray mouse as a brunette. The wig was suited for her first mission when she was working as a cheap whore on the street. It was a short mission. The mission at the brothel is longterm and the brothel is not the same place as the motel in first mission it's a luxury place. Therefore hair coloring is more appropriate.
The hair color change was quietly unexpected as there is no detailed dressing scene but it made sense to me.

As for glasses I didn't notice it but it's look like a bloop.

About the sex scene animations yes I agree, it's definitely not the best side of the game but chapter 4 has a couple of good ones for me.
 
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R1k0

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I also more like Jen as a blonde, but I totally disagree that she looks like a gray mouse as a brunette. The wig was suited for her first mission when she was working as a cheap whore on the street. It was a short mission. The mission at the brothel is longterm and the brothel is not the same place as the motel in first mission it's a luxury place. Therefore hair coloring is more appropriate.
The hair color change was quietly unexpected as there is no detailed dressing scene but it made sense to me.

As for glasses I didn't notice it but it's look like a bloop.

About the sex scene animations yes I agree, it's definitely not the best side of the game but chapter 4 has a couple of good ones for me.
I think he's also changes Jen's skintone when she works in the brothel, it's not just the hair, otherwise I can't understand why she looks so bad.

And it's not just the animations, but the sex scenes in general, they are short and unexciting. It's a porn game, sex scenes are the main element, so do them well. I saw the chapter 4, and yes there are scenes in the brothel but they are not impressive, and the scene with Sal totally sucks. So for me the hottest scene is this one, and it's not even sex.
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If you can't make good animations, RenPy has transitions that look like animations and are easier to make. Watched a game "Summer heat" recently, and transitios very well done there.
 
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Police plot, undercover work, prostitutes, female protagonist, I really like the concept, I hope the execution is also up to par.
 

SpyderArachnid

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Pretty decent update, but man do I hate blackmail storylines. Such a cheap way to force the MC into things. Plus, it removes any player initiative and forces us to do it. I really hope we can stop it before it goes any further.

Besides all that, was good. Finally resolved the current case and now we get to look forward to what comes next.
 
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