HTML - Timeloop [v0.15] [Zandurd]

I thought the game was pretty good so far. The main concept is a solid base to start off of and the dialogue is well thought out. The various models for one character are not really an issue and wouldn't confuse anyone who has at least an elementary school level of learning. There are a lot of ideas to work on going forward and I am looking forward to future updates.

take all the worst habits of HTML games, throw em into a blender and add some extra sloppy code and lazier than usual design and you have this...
Normally Id give extra credit for using alison tyler but even abandoning the game and just perusing the media directories was somewhat disappointing

Just a bunch of short video clips taken from a bunch of different sites with a bunch of different people in them.

Backgrounds don't match from scene to scene just like the characters don't. It's destracting when you have a bunch of different people playing the same character.

I don't believe this game will develop into anything worth the download. here is why...

Content wise there is nothing here but that is to be expected with an initial release. But some very fundamental planning stage choices and frameworks have not even been worked on. If a game using real porn video and pictures. why isn't the mother just one pornstar? I counted 4 pornstars used in pics/videos. WHY? You are making the game overly confusing by not even limiting your media choices to one person. So what happens when you have 2 more characters that use 4 to 5 pornstars for their characters? People are not going to be able to easily follow the story. Secondly you reduce the available pornstars for other characters in the future because for some reason you didn't limit the media to one pornstar for one character.

The text is all jsut plain white. Why isn't divided by colour?

Why are narrative/descriptions a separate colour and each character gets their own colour for dialogue? This foundational choice hasn't even been made. So the developer hasn't taken into consideration who they are going to present the story to players yet.

The fast travel options seem random based on what locations you would want but this might be just a case the fact there is such sparse content but in the future they will make sense. Right now when there is no clear idea where a character is at a given time, systematic approach to finding people seems the better option than using fast travel options.

This game was released not when the developer had made foundational choices and finalized how they would present the game no they are working that out still so the game still needs dozens of hours of planning before that gets finalized. I am not even convinced this developer has all their mechanics and how time travel loops will impact the game yet. So they are going to have to recode what is already coded and because they haven't even made presentation choices final you can expect that there will be more recoding going one.

In short the game was released far too early long before the developer know how they want to present data on the main screen (I mean that is given them the benefit of the doubt because if this is the final product on ascetics and organization it sucks). They don't even know what the mechanics of the game are yet fully so they can't write a story using said systems yet. I doubt all/most variables are defines either because of this. The developer hasn't narrowed down who the characters are going to be played by what pornstar yet hence why the mother has 4 at least.

Not great, not many images and very random, will review again after a few updates. i will look forward to a bit of a story in this, as at the moment, it lacks it. all in all at the moment there is literally 10 minutes of content, unless i missed something!