So far...the Tyrant is the kind of VN I was looking for, the story is a little out there, but since we haven't gotten it all yet, I can only say I like what we have so far.
I kinda noticed that many of the tags are still not used, like the pregnancy one, I just hope we get it embedded into the story, and not only like one of the posible endings (that includes NTR path), I think that would add much more flavor to the story, like trying to hide sisters pregnancies from the parents or any of the ladies trying to deal with pregnancies from the bad guys, I would suggest to add a corruption cap where u can force them to stop taking the pill at a certain corruption level, or the reverse, force them to take it to prevent one from rivals.
Violence tag is an interesting one, that would add so much depth to the game, like what would happen if Davide died, or what perhaps even considering whacking the dad to finish breaking Nicole, that would be nice.
My guess is that the lady from the massage parlor (Susan I think, will turn out to be the wife of the old guy that Nicole meets at the bar, I would suggest making her a) more desirable, let's face it, she looks too granny like b) make her the money behind the operation, that way when MC gets to her, he can also mess with the funding of everything.
Prostitution tag is even more interesting, the idea seems to be that the ladies will provide the Mc with cash, but that doesn't neccnecessarily mean that it has to be cash, maybe when (or if) rival gang and Authorities are introduced, Mc can use them as a bargaining chip.
I would also suggest that at some point, you are allowed to modify the girls, and by that I mean to change wardrobe or even add tatoos, like to mark them as your own or somebody else's, so far we get that they are getting more corrupted, but not a single noticeable change in overall attitude can be perceived, it would be nice to change the younger sisters good girl attire into something more slutty once she ceases to be a good girl, I would suggest after barn scene.
My last suggestion is to make it like some of the locations, like the sleazy weazel or the massage parlor, or even the gym, become gang controlled locations, that way the can serve not only as event locations but also as part of the game mechanics, if you had a rival gang, as suggested by Nicole's date scene, fighting over locations would give the game a more in depth feeling of a lowlife set up (where in the world exists a gang with no rivals?), To that end you can make it so that both gangs are working for the same tyrant and the one who gets the best income gets the best benefits (spots, women, access to better weaponry)
So far the only noticeable gang trait is the basement drug selling, and that is so low level that you don't need a basement, you can do that in a corner (and maybe reserve the basement for a huge deal , can even work as an orgy even or something like that)
This game, I like a lot so far what saddog has done, and probably I'm asking for too much on many of my suggestions, but that goes to show how much potential I see in this project.
On the Cgs I can only say that they are superb, I like the models very much, and specially the ahegao faces they make, I hope once photos are implemented, they not only serve to show creampied pics, but also to be used as humiliation tools for both the girls and your rivals, or maybe even against you.
I hope you get to read this saddog brother, and get some inspiration out of it.
And if you ever need ideas, I have those by the buckets
Keep up the amazing job!.
P.d. please, please, please, just try to make the best this game can be, even if you don't use any suggestions, I'm confident you will make a real classic out of this one
