- Jun 5, 2017
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Here I was excited thinking that this might be some competition for Auril, and it turns out its another Ren'py game. Feelsbad.
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Are all games on this site made in Russia? I clicked a total of 5 times in this game, menu included, and the grammar already hits you in the face. I like Warcraft stuff, so thanks for making it but its really hard to enjoy when every sentence is a riddle. I mean even google translate does a better job than what you get in most porn games.
Edit: Also, not to sound ungrateful but already your second dialog is "Hey, I made some device that can mind control people". Not only is this very unoriginal, pretty blunt but pretty lazy too. If you want to make a "Dating Sim", make it about dating, not mind control.
Right now most dialog sounds like Russian robots talking. Get some finesse, if you don't have any, maybe a story driven game just isn't for you.
Edit: Also, not to sound ungrateful but already your second dialog is "Hey, I made some device that can mind control people". Not only is this very unoriginal, pretty blunt but pretty lazy too. If you want to make a "Dating Sim", make it about dating, not mind control.
Right now most dialog sounds like Russian robots talking. Get some finesse, if you don't have any, maybe a story driven game just isn't for you.
- Jul 25, 2017
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- Sep 29, 2017
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Yes, I completely agree with you. Dialogues should be much better..
At the moment I'm working on editing the dialogues and editing the current content in general. I think gradually I will be able to up the project to a decent level.
Thank you for feedback
Okay, just a quick run-through. It somehow crashed, after I talked to the draenei and then went to the deck on the next day, so I didn't even get to the doggy scene.
From what I saw until now:
-The story needs some more background, rather dull in my opinion.
-It is rather a click-fest (going to the goblin every fucking day, then to the sister to see if I can interact with her and then back to goblin, back to sister.... you get what I mean)
-The animation(s) need more perspectives or just make different ones, because it is kinda over too fast
-WIP WIP WIP (that's to be expected from 0.2...or?)
-Grammar, please
-It gets to blowing rather quick, maybe start with something more innocent? (just my opinion)
This list is just a quick run through it, it's 2:24am atm. and Im tired, please bare with me.
Edit: Currently it is not worth the time, sry.
Edit2: Just played it through this morning and yes, the sex screnes are way too quick, please flesh them out. I'd rather have decent, multi perspective scenes than a dozen animations which go by in the blink of an eye.
And I still think that you get to the fucking way too fast, you gotta corrupt them, don't whore them.
From what I saw until now:
-The story needs some more background, rather dull in my opinion.
-It is rather a click-fest (going to the goblin every fucking day, then to the sister to see if I can interact with her and then back to goblin, back to sister.... you get what I mean)
-The animation(s) need more perspectives or just make different ones, because it is kinda over too fast
-WIP WIP WIP (that's to be expected from 0.2...or?)
-Grammar, please
-It gets to blowing rather quick, maybe start with something more innocent? (just my opinion)
This list is just a quick run through it, it's 2:24am atm. and Im tired, please bare with me.
Edit: Currently it is not worth the time, sry.
Edit2: Just played it through this morning and yes, the sex screnes are way too quick, please flesh them out. I'd rather have decent, multi perspective scenes than a dozen animations which go by in the blink of an eye.
And I still think that you get to the fucking way too fast, you gotta corrupt them, don't whore them.
- May 16, 2017
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- Aug 15, 2017
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Game consistently stops working and crashes halfway through the goblin blowjob scene, right after clicking to advance after *slurp* *slurp *slurp*. Can't continue further =/
- Sep 29, 2017
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- Sep 29, 2017
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damn never knew this game got abandon that sucks was pretty decent