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Version 0.70 has already been released on Patreon and SubscribeStar.
- Apr 22, 2017
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You must be a newbie... most dev's don't share their own stuff at F95!!
The new version will get here when a Patreon or SubscribeStar member shares it dude! You could always stump up some $$$ and get the latest version yourself of course.
My man... I need to make money. I make my living through this game.
- Aug 13, 2020
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You are right, it after all your time spend on making it, so they should be patient and support you either mentally and if can't wait then they should support your financialy, you make a great game that is worth its money.
- Jan 4, 2019
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You know, it's bad enough when NTR games boil down to "Do you also want to cheat or just get cucked?", but in this case, you don't even control who MC ends up sleeping with half the time
Now, I don't feel like leaving a negative review, but I'll say this: had this game offered the option to get rewarded for resisting temptation (on both sides) instead of merely the illusion of choice, it would most likely have gotten a much better reception.
Now, I don't feel like leaving a negative review, but I'll say this: had this game offered the option to get rewarded for resisting temptation (on both sides) instead of merely the illusion of choice, it would most likely have gotten a much better reception.
- Oct 20, 2019
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Visuals aren't everything, you should not take Stoper as an example, his numbers aren't even that impressive. Innocence or money has worse visuals by far and has 1000 patrons more than Stoper, starting later. How that dev did it? He launched the first versions of his game in Steam for free (that way he got a lot of players) and got the patrons from there, if they want to play the new versions, they must support him. Here the most of the people are pirates, they will not support you, in Steam happens the opposite.
I haven't played your game, but I already saw some flaws:
- The banner of your page here it's not favorable, despite of the good quality, the most of the people don't want to see the desire fruit (the girl) hugged by a man. It's better to show her alone in a sexy pose.
- Your Steam page can be improved:
The trailer looks pretty amateurish. The title logo isn't bad but you shouldn't show it more than 5 seconds (you are showing it 15 seconds at the beginning, too long). Put the clips in full frame, don't crop them as you did. You just put random clips in the trailer, you should tell the players in few sentences what they are going to play too. Freshwomen is the most successful adult VN in steam, you should watch their trailer
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Regarding a female protagonist game, Steps Debauchery is doing it very professional too
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Take them as examples.The banners and previews are better with a background and not with an empty black or gray space as you have them.
This is a lot better
than this
- It seems like you didn't do a good launching in Steam, you should tell your patrons and fans to write reviews of your game in steam since the first day, that's very important to get more visibility. You only have 5 reviews so far.
- An important way to succeed in steam is to put your game available in several languages. Freshwomen is available in 15 languages, SOD in 10 and Innocence or Money in 30. The dev asked their patrons to make the translations. You could reward the translators with free copies of your game and bonus renders, for example, as if they were top tiers.
- I also read some reviews here talking about the engrish in your game. You should have a proofreader then.
- The beginning of the game is hugely important, if the story isn't clear and not enganging since the start, the people who already played it and don't like it aren't going to play it again, it doesn't matter that much that you release frequent updates of the game. If you have flaws there, you should correct them. Stoper doesn't have support just because of his beautiful renders, he works with an experienced erotic writer to help him.
- Regarding the banners, if you aren't very good with them you could ask for help here in f95zone https://f95zone.to/threads/gfx-request-thread.57341/ You should ask for permission to use them in steam.
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yo,
just bought ur game. I said earlier that it wasnt exactly my kind of game (mainly because the main girl is getting too slutty for my taste (i prefer when male are "in control" if u know what i mean) and the main male caracter has no logic (why is it that everygirl are into him???) BUT, you keep giving nice and regular update.
So congratz
just bought ur game. I said earlier that it wasnt exactly my kind of game (mainly because the main girl is getting too slutty for my taste (i prefer when male are "in control" if u know what i mean) and the main male caracter has no logic (why is it that everygirl are into him???) BUT, you keep giving nice and regular update.
So congratz
Thank you very much for taking such an interest.Visuals aren't everything, you should not take Stoper as an example, his numbers aren't even that impressive. Innocence or money has worse visuals by far and has 1000 patrons more than Stoper, starting later. How that dev did it? He launched the first versions of his game in Steam for free (that way he got a lot of players) and got the patrons from there, if they want to play the new versions, they must support him. Here the most of the people are pirates, they will not support you, in Steam happens the opposite.
I haven't played your game, but I already saw some flaws:
- The banner of your page here it's not favorable, despite of the good quality, the most of the people don't want to see the desire fruit (the girl) hugged by a man. It's better to show her alone in a sexy pose.
- Your Steam page can be improved:
The trailer looks pretty amateurish. The title logo isn't bad but you shouldn't show it more than 5 seconds (you are showing it 15 seconds at the beginning, too long). Put the clips in full frame, don't crop them as you did. You just put random clips in the trailer, you should tell the players in few sentences what they are going to play too. Freshwomen is the most successful adult VN in steam, you should watch their trailerYou must be registered to see the linksRegarding a female protagonist game, Steps Debauchery is doing it very professional tooYou must be registered to see the linksTake them as examples.
The banners and previews are better with a background and not with an empty black or gray space as you have them.
This is a lot better
than this
- It seems like you didn't do a good launching in Steam, you should tell your patrons and fans to write reviews of your game in steam since the first day, that's very important to get more visibility. You only have 5 reviews so far.
- An important way to succeed in steam is to put your game available in several languages. Freshwomen is available in 15 languages, SOD in 10 and Innocence or Money in 30. The dev asked their patrons to make the translations. You could reward the translators with free copies of your game and bonus renders, for example, as if they were top tiers.
- I also read some reviews here talking about the engrish in your game. You should have a proofreader then.
- The beginning of the game is hugely important, if the story isn't clear and not enganging since the start, the people who already played it and don't like it aren't going to play it again, it doesn't matter that much that you release frequent updates of the game. If you have flaws there, you should correct them. Stoper doesn't have support just because of his beautiful renders, he works with an experienced erotic writer to help him.
- Regarding the banners, if you aren't very good with them you could ask for help here in f95zone https://f95zone.to/threads/gfx-request-thread.57341/ You should ask for permission to use them in steam.
Everything you wrote is true.
Yeah, I didn't get off to a good start on Steam. The visuals in the store... all the content in the store was done in a hurry. I used the material I had available. It will all be updated in the future.
Every day I'm improving, learning something new. My priority right now is grammar. I'm updating most of the dialog in the game.
A friend of mine corrected almost all of the dialog. But it takes time to transfer it to the game. In the next update "Engrish" will be fixed for the most part. I am also thinking of adding other languages.
- Mar 16, 2018
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Hey, Use
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. It's great and I've been using it for years.Back story, I had a massive stroke, and it wiped out the
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region of my brain. Slowly I'm getting better but I still have a lot of problems writing. Finding Grammarly was a life changer for me. And best of all... It's FREE!
Oh dude! Get well soon!
If I remember correctly, you recommended grammarly before. Don't worry, that problem is almost solved. My friend fixed most of the dialogs. It will be added to the game in the next version. But there are 25,000 lines of dialog and I have to check them and import them into the game. So I have a lot of work.
- Mar 16, 2018
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