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HTML The Queen of WHOREs [2023-08-05] [Ana Sayfa]
- Aug 21, 2017
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There are quite a lot of broken images or gifs; I would recommend playing it once and fixing the issues. Otherwise, it is fine. I was skeptical when I saw the file size, but there is more content than I thought there would be for the first release. At least I was not teased and blue-balled like others first releases.
- Nov 11, 2017
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There it is.
Telotelo shared it before but the link has been deleted.
- Jan 10, 2018
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Even as a first game, this is... not good. MT English is sometimes necessary and so tolerable, but no language fails to distinguish between second and third person the way this game fails to. The pictures are very random and no efforts seems to have been made to make the character pictures even remotely similar, so the same character can, on successive pictures on the same or next page, change race, hair color, body type, etc.
The story is ludicrous even for porn. Some stranger shows up, tells the royal guards of a queen that has already suffered from assassination attempts to just walk away, and they do. Characters just mysteriously appear in strange places (Missandre in the army camp, for instance) just so that the player gets a boring, disjointed sex scene.
There are also mechanical problems like images not showing up, jerky two-second videos that annoyingly repeat until the player exits the page, choices that leas to blank pages, etc. These can all be fixed by a good playtest and a scrubbing of the code.
I don't want to discourage a new dev, but this game isn't close to being good. I'd recommend that the dev hold off on anything as ambitious as a GOT "parody" (this actually is not a parody at all) and start with something simpler, for which appropriate images can be found. Walk before trying to run.
The story is ludicrous even for porn. Some stranger shows up, tells the royal guards of a queen that has already suffered from assassination attempts to just walk away, and they do. Characters just mysteriously appear in strange places (Missandre in the army camp, for instance) just so that the player gets a boring, disjointed sex scene.
There are also mechanical problems like images not showing up, jerky two-second videos that annoyingly repeat until the player exits the page, choices that leas to blank pages, etc. These can all be fixed by a good playtest and a scrubbing of the code.
I don't want to discourage a new dev, but this game isn't close to being good. I'd recommend that the dev hold off on anything as ambitious as a GOT "parody" (this actually is not a parody at all) and start with something simpler, for which appropriate images can be found. Walk before trying to run.
- Nov 11, 2017
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Yes, that's exactly why I shared this game.To see where I went wrong and what I could do better.. I made this game just for fun, and then I thought to myself, why should I try to make it a real game? Thanks for your honest review. If I have time I will try to pay more attention to this in the next update.
How do you create an offline version of an online-hosted HTML game?
I like to look in the images folder for these games to see whether they have kinks I like, so I never even usually bother downloading online-hosted games
- Aug 21, 2017
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I would say learn to use a good enough image size regularly. Copy or learn code from other games and try to resize fonts as the fonts now is small and the images are huge.
As for the story, shit dawg it's a porn game and parody on top of that. I don't care much as long the game runs fine, I will overlook much of the story. The story right now is good that is straight to meat of it without Dilly dallying in a maze. Sometimes simple is better and it is not a clusterfuck mess yet.
One more thing I would recommend is if you can go offline or try to put some parts offline if you can, image link die easily and without notice.
Upload once and then download to play test again for play test. My own pet project does not run images through twine but offline it works fine for me which I still don't know why.
Really the biggest problem for me was just the grammar, it was horrible. Besides that the story quality is about average for most HTML games tbh, just wish it was more developed, as in more content and options.
- Aug 7, 2020
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Usually means hasn't been fleshed out yet, but if it's one of those 'choose A or B, with B leading to Game Over' then it's not about 'choice', it's about the illusion of choice.
- Jul 21, 2017
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