HTML The Queen of Phalli [Development Thread]

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I'm opening this thread in view of the full release of Act I of my Paulum Opus: The Queen of Phalli.

I do not belong to those fine folk that are (the people that code), nor do I belong to those yet finer folk (the people that can draw). I am one of the many sinners that are wholly committed to the inescapable vice of writing. On top of that, I especially enjoy writing pornography. On top of all that, my writing tends to be rather filthy, with a lot of futanari, tentacles, monsters, bestiality and romance.
To make it all worse, I also happen to be an insecure egomaniac and therefore decided to open this thread to gather positive feedback and constructive criticism (remember people: words hurt).

In all seriousness: I am always trying to improve my writing and I found out that exposing my work to others is the best way to do so. I, therefore, thank anyone who offers me their time by reading my stuff and even more those who give me pointers, criticism or even just a thumb up.

 

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Poll: Favourite character



Nefail comes out on top, by a landslide, to no one's surprise really. I am kinda biased toward Nefail, not because she is my favourite, but because she is my wife's favourite. In her own words: "Even I would do her."

To my pleasure, Elifael comes in second. I'm very happy that so many people consider her to be a good MC.

I am kinda surprised that every other girl got at least a couple of votes, even Synafae and Matron Sipriina. I really expected them to get maybe one. I admit that they have not been fleshed out as much as the others, so it makes me very happy to know to they still managed to win over a few hearts.

 

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Poll: Hottest Sex Scene


Again, Nefail reigns supreme. Every scene where she is on stage is considered to be by many (a solid 50%) the hottest of all. I am pleased to see that the other sex scenes were more or less equally appreciated. The one exception among these is the fisting scene with Synafae, which appearently nobody saw .

I am inclined to see that as a good thing. When I started this project I wanted to make sure that the game was worth going through more than once and to offer a very different read for every path.

Disclaimer: those votes you see on the graph, Onsen Party and Roleplay, those are not from me but from my wife

Next poll will probably be the most important for me. Looking forward to see you there

 

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All right, the results are in, it is time to check them out.



Well, I could not be happier about the results. With an average score of 8,12 (yes, even counting the attention-starved trolls) it seems the game is pretty appreciated as fapping material, something I really strive for. I'm glad all the quoteunquote betatesting paid off.

I believe I am stating the obvious when saying that plot and characters are not simply accessories, they are indespensable for enjoying the lovemaking. If you care about the characters, you will care when one will enter the other.

I will do my best to turn that 8,12 into a perfect ten.

 

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Still very few readers have checked the Synafae path. I am not surprised, she is meant to be the most difficult to unlock.