HTML The Portal [v0.1] [BLUR_BOY]

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Overview:
You grew up in a wealthy family but last year your dad died.
Leaving you with your Mom and two sisters
A week ago a mysterious portal opened in your bedroom.

not a lot of story so far, will be added later
BTW this is my first project ever so constructive criticism is appreciated ​

Thread Updated: 2023-10-22
Release Date: 2023-10-19
Developer: BLUR_BOY
Censored: No
Version: 0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Bob69]

BLUR_BOY Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!

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[GamerQueen]

Wow, That is one real fine Ass...
Gonna look for this one on google for sure!

 

[Lerd0]

your dad died.

..YaY...

..thx for the share...good luck...

 

[KaltesHerz]

holy shnikeys the bounce

 

[baggiearc001]

Good luck!!

 

[cainnn]

211 kb? HUHH?

 

[Loktahar]

Offline version would be very much welcomed for people like us who can download 5gb stuff. Or well have stuff load faster, my net can kinda handle that. Other than that I like games like these especially if the gifs and imgs are put up in a website that. You might want to look at a HTML GOT game that does the same but the images in that load faster though that is a straight up VN like game.

 

[Loktahar]

Also some img links are already broken like Susan Kitchen stuff. Some aunt stuff is also broken. I really cannot stress that enough, download your own game and play it all once to check for broken stuff.

 

[Rancid Dragon Productions]

Quick observations: You begin with a portal in your room and then you can walk around and gain all the sex scenes without spending anytime other than talking to each person. Your Aunts house and Neighbors house both have no image for the living room. When you encounter your cousin in the kitchen it's the same image as Kim in the kitchen. I didn't get any pictures of sex with the personal trainer, yet I got to the have sex option and still nothing.

Seems like you have a very, very basic starting point and haven't taken enough time to flesh it out before you put it up. Keep working on it, you'll get there. For right now, it's just a skeleton with an idea and no real story and some technical issues.

Keep trying, you have a good base.

 

[Loktahar]

Your school section is not even linked; if I did not run your game on Twine just to see the missing code, I would not realise that a whole section of stuff was missing because it was not linked.

 

[darius25]

it seems like the kinda game that would have ntr yet i do not see it

 

[Loktahar]

Too much stuff for the first release results in half of the stuff not being coded properly, img src links not being written, and School and Disney stuff not being linked. Either the source was not procured or that whole part was forgotten. I have just linked the school and Disney main hubs. Other than that, the actual linking and filling of the image should be done by the developer, not me.

 

[Chimba]

You grew up in a wealthy family but last year your dad died.
Leaving you with your Mom and two sisters

That 2 gif looks pretty interesting .

So, is this a mix between realporn and comic/hentai/aicg?

Thanka, good luck.

 

[TFurguson69]

meh

 

[Ex78]

211kb is too small of a sample to rate anything if you are trying to get click though to people supporting you can try moving to this as your job you got to have more in the opening release say 500mb or hell just go to 211mb instead of kb.
Next don't release as a 1.0. A 0.1 or 0.01 would be better to let people know you plan to update. A Date like 10-2023 would also be better.
Pick a style, Real Porn or 2dcgi or 3dcgi mixing them leads to pain for you and the users.

 

[trackjack]

Thanks!

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Sergellato]

Online version please

 

[Rev]

unplayable due to broken links, badly coded links and images removed from the various linked sites.
if this is something your serious about, then download the images and include them in the game download and code your game links to softlink to the image folder NOT to various online sites.