VN Ren'Py The Magical Girl presents: Project Moon

Did you like my prologue?


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Asia Argento

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DanThaMan, considering I respect your opinion... What didnt you like about this??

I dont want sunshine up my ass 24/7 (though that would be kinda nice) so I definitely would enjoy some tactful critique.

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Asia Argento

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Dev update #4.


Oh boy. What a week. So I believe I am about 50-66% done??? with the prologue and ch 1 to say that things are going super smoothly for someone who has never coded a day in his life a month ago.
Yeah, that serious.

Some people on the internet are super helpful. Some people on the internet are not. End that thought. This is my dev blog.
I asked for art help on a certain site and it didnt go well. I am broke, I have NO MONEY to put into this. Everything I do is ingenuity, elbow grease and smarts. I was even hoping to trade art for my writing, etc. Unfortunately, I am really green at this whole thing. Made some errors and took the L. But, it showed me I really am alone for this, though I have had some vocal support from friends thats been a shot in the arm.

Technical time: Yeah the art side of this. It's gonna be brutal, friends. I am putting all the lipstick I can on the pigs, but in the end, they are still gonna be pigs. Koitatsu really can only do so much, especially if its unanimated BUT effort was made and is being made. I am not putting out a fuckin' stinker but I am also not gonna have half the debut of Hero's Harem Guild, that's for sure.

Coding is going smooth as you saw above. First choice of what I hope is many was added today. No spoilers. Debating whether I can add name customization this time before my goal of early April. Canon name is LUNA. So when you hear "Luna" I am talking the MC.

I already have a plethora of open source music and sound effects to use. I have music set in my game already. If you read my rough draft, the taser makes a sound in game.

Background art, however, I am not ashamed of. I have touched everything up with Gimp and it looks pretty good, especially my opening background pic. Which, I mildly edited but left it mostly intact. It was too pretty to mess with extensively. I have scoured everywhere for anything not nailed down by a license. A little dirty perhaps, but I am making do on my own trying my best. I want to make something nice.

Final thing to mention, I am in need of playtesters. Yes. I am so far along that I think planning that and asking is a good idea just so I can have that ready. Friends go to the front of the line. All testers will get an exclusive list on Patreon thats the same as my $10 dollar patrons for life. "Azazel" tier.

Anyway, thanks for reading. Hope you have a pleasant day.
- The Magical Gurl.
 

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Brainfart and I am not gonna edit it again, I am just gonna double post because I think people missed the end.

I am kicking tires for playtesters. If interested, please DM this profile. Not Asia. Benefits are what I list above. Also, you will get a fancy special tier on Discord to put you above commoners on my Discord, which is here.

You can consider the general parts another shithole lol unless its marked to not be for shitposting.

Take care.

 

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So which one of these do y'all like the most? First, a more split variant of Luna: 50/50 of Zentreya and Melody. The other is far more Melody, with some hints of inspiration from Zen.
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I like the version on the left. She has horns like a succubus and I am into that :love:
 
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So which one of these do y'all like the most? First, a more split variant of Luna: 50/50 of Zentreya and Melody. The other is far more Melody, with some hints of inspiration from Zen.
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..horns......more to grab......
 

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So which one of these do y'all like the most? First, a more split variant of Luna: 50/50 of Zentreya and Melody. The other is far more Melody, with some hints of inspiration from Zen.
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Horns but with the top clothing of the not horned and maybe change the style of the horns? IDK my tastes are not typical...

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I changed my mind after further thought I prefer the pic with out horns , the horns and ears look a bit too busy up there if it was just part of a transformation and the horns stock out and not up it could work for me...
 
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Asia Argento

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The latter for me.
That might be lesbian variant Luna because voting is skewing against you, sorry... Looks like people are really into 50/50 Luna, but I like the other design too. Doing it that way might work out for the best. So those that like the second design arent completely screwed.

Horns but with the top clothing of the not horned and maybe change the style of the horns? IDK my tastes are not typical...
Reverting back to the other shirt might make it look more of an OC that a clone, you make a valid point.

At this point, I think I have enough takes to consider this a closed matter. 20 days comes and goes. Time to close it all out.

Still look for beta testers btw..... Any takers??

 
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That might be lesbian variant Luna because voting is skewing against you, sorry... Looks like people are really into 50/50 Luna, but I like the other design too. Doing it that way might work out for the best. So those that like the second design arent completely screwed.



Reverting back to the other shirt might make it look more of an OC that a clone, you make a valid point.

At this point, I think I have enough takes to consider this a closed matter. 20 days comes and goes. Time to close it all out.

Still look for beta testers btw..... Any takers??

Not a deal breaker for me, it'll be good regardless
 
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Speaking of bull, its no bull to say that my writing for chapter 1 is now done. Two endings completed.

Now I can totally focus on improving/stylizing the UI more and completing and inserting the art into various parts of the game.

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For the future, updates will happen on my discord. Been taking it easy these past few days but thats mostly due to being hungry and a lack of food options at home, so... this next week, ill clamp down.
 
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Also, file has been dropped for Azazel-tier. That's a mostly to end file. Yep. Very text heavy, have some things to fix in regards to images and potatoes stuff but the meat is well done... and ready for playtesting.