- Jan 14, 2024
- 151
- 618
From what I have gathered the bug is to do with having more options to not go as far as it does. The BJ commercial scene is still there if you choose the previous slutty options. Dev has said a few times that he will fix it in the upcoming update. Maybe it will be a significant change to the scene? Like you said the writing is very good and the commercial scene is well done. The pacing compared to previous chapters was the problem. It does feel like it should have been one or two updates later. Even if she knows her face is going to be replaced with AI, like Nate said. Would think that she would do something in private first, before doing BJs in front of others. For me its a bit out of place but I can see past it.Exactly my thoughts. Even if you did choose some or all lewd options before this porn-shooting still comes a little out of nowhere. It had to be much more subtle. Maybe her seeming to be decent but secretly allowing them some lewd angles. Maybe blowing them after(!) the shoot or in a pause in order to get more money or... but not this "oh yeah, I come for you AND the internet AND TV without thinking twice. But I am decent, please don't fuckl me yet!"
At least it is not a problem with writing - the scene was not that badly written. The problem was more with the pacing. It was way too early and destroyed all the former good pacing.
But let's hope this was a one time fluke or he might even deliver a corrected update. At least, this could have been her fantasizing or so afterwards.
My issue with the last update is more that the fun was taken out of it. Everything became quite serious and sinister with Santini having control and Kath now working for him, Clem with the drugs, Claire basically getting raped, The dreaded basement and Rebecca being attacked. Seems like its going more towards the blackmail/coersion route. Not to say you can't have sexy situations with those paths but every character looks to have evil intentions now. His writing is a high point but the direction it's going could be less endearing to current and new followers. I'm hoping in Chapter 4 we can go back to them exploring their fetishes on their own, before anything like that happens.