Gilbertfred - I agree with your review. Erotically, I was very pigeonholed by the pictures on this one. And, even though for me the sex is an after thought rather than the main focus, I also felt the same way. I wanted more of ME in it as well and took those photos of me and manipped them, but could not really find sexual pictures with the models and I am not one for just slapping a lot of random internet pictures together.
As mentioned before to you, I think this was great for what I had to work with, but when I come back and rework this with all of the Daz models, we are going to see tons of Bad Ends, much more sexual content, and the story will grow even more detailed and intricate since I'll be able to do what I envision without constraints. Mayhap at that time you can revisit it and see if my work is worth another star or two. Thanks for the review!