HTML Sugar Spice: A Femdom Story [v1.0a] [Gummy_Rubric]

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88Michele88

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Finally a game I can recommend my girlfriend to play (something I hope I won't regret, I'd better try it myself first because the tags are tricky:oops:)
I think your girlfriend gonna think you like to be threated like that. Just be man and don't put her strng and weird thought i her mind.
 
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Gummy_Rubric

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Female femdom protag is a good idea and certainly much more interesting than yet another sissification html game but theres nothing really here at the moment. You read through like 6 pages and thats it.
Thank you, I wanted to take a different approach. this is my first game and so I'm trying to learn by doing and trying my best not to escalate the story too quickly, and keep a good mix between porn and story
 
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Nutluck

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There is very little there so far, I would like to see more choices that have meaning. Also more control over what exactly you do and how you dominate the guy. The only choice you have is dominate or let him leave. With no real control over how.
 
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Gummy_Rubric

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There is very little there so far, I would like to see the see more choices that have meaning. Also more control over what exactly you do and how you dominate the guy. The only choice you have is dominate or let him leave. With no real control over how.
thank you will work on implementing that, I want to add more control by including variables, but im thinking this will be later in the game, once I get most of the writing I have on file into the game and branch it out with diffrent routes I am plannign on going back and adding variables to make some choices "locked" per say depending on how you shape emilys character
 

Larsung

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Well thats to little even for a Demo, so no Rating, cause it would be a disaster....
What i still want to comment are the pics and Videos... they are soooo random used and lack any fine selection.. just some which somehow but mostly not fit in.. even a woman spitting in the mouth of a woman... well not even similiar looking emelys and the skin of Michael changing in seconds....
Long story short: good luck dev with your project but what i saw till now is dilettantish and you should rework EVERYTHING! every Vid, every PIC and bring them in same size! too and and and and!

When i reat it i thought i found myself on a spaming Discord Server with tryhard Mims...
 

Gummy_Rubric

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Well thats to little even for a Demo, so no Rating, cause it would be a disaster....
What i still want to comment are the pics and Videos... they are soooo random used and lack any fine selection.. just some which somehow but mostly not fit in.. even a woman spitting in the mouth of a woman... well not even similiar looking emelys and the skin of Michael changing in seconds....
Long story short: good luck dev with your project but what i saw till now is dilettantish and you should rework EVERYTHING! every Vid, every PIC and bring them in same size! too and and and and!

When i reat it i thought i found myself on a spaming Discord Server with tryhard Mims...
Okay, finding the right videos would be ideal, but I have chosen to add rough pics and videos of where I would want them in the story, and also because I know some ppl would be turned off with a bunch of text. I just wanted to get something together to get a sense of the feelings towards the story, don’t have 20/hrs a week to put towards video selection, scene writing, and story branches. So the little time I have I would think it’s better to focus towards the story and the branches, the videos could be tailored later on. But then it’s just comes down to a question, is it better to have it all the videos linear and consistent with less story development contact X time, or more story content with visuals not tailored and forces you to use your imagination to understand them? I want to tailor this game to the community honestly, but I’m not sure. Also it’s my first game I’m still learning but I think your absolutely right, just don’t know if that should be done through out the story or maybe go back after the first chapter and “re vamp the ui” thoughts? And thank you for your input truly
 

Nutluck

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Okay, finding the right videos would be ideal, but I have chosen to add rough pics and videos of where I would want them in the story, and also because I know some ppl would be turned off with a bunch of text. I just wanted to get something together to get a sense of the feelings towards the story, don’t have 20/hrs a week to put towards video selection, scene writing, and story branches. So the little time I have I would think it’s better to focus towards the story and the branches, the videos could be tailored later on. But then it’s just comes down to a question, is it better to have it all the videos linear and consistent with less story development contact X time, or more story content with visuals not tailored and forces you to use your imagination to understand them? I want to tailor this game to the community honestly, but I’m not sure. Also it’s my first game I’m still learning but I think your absolutely right, just don’t know if that should be done through out the story or maybe go back after the first chapter and “re vamp the ui” thoughts? And thank you for your input truly
As someone that works on a game that uses real porn. This is some advice that might help you. What I do is come up with a rough outline for a scene. Then I go looking for a image set or movie I can chop up to use for the scene. Once I find this, I then write the scene to match the image/video I found. That way the text and images/video match much better and if it is a scene that goes several steps you use the same image/video sets so they match. Obviously long term you can't make them all match but you can make self contained scenes match, which helps a lot for immersion and players seem to appreciate the effort.
 

Larsung

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Okay, finding the right videos would be ideal, but I have chosen to add rough pics and videos of where I would want them in the story, and also because I know some ppl would be turned off with a bunch of text. I just wanted to get something together to get a sense of the feelings towards the story, don’t have 20/hrs a week to put towards video selection, scene writing, and story branches. So the little time I have I would think it’s better to focus towards the story and the branches, the videos could be tailored later on. But then it’s just comes down to a question, is it better to have it all the videos linear and consistent with less story development contact X time, or more story content with visuals not tailored and forces you to use your imagination to understand them? I want to tailor this game to the community honestly, but I’m not sure. Also it’s my first game I’m still learning but I think your absolutely right, just don’t know if that should be done through out the story or maybe go back after the first chapter and “re vamp the ui” thoughts? And thank you for your input truly
Lets take the "spitting issue" ^^ You dont need 3Vids/pics only one is enough. The imersion comes with good writting and i agree underlayed with a good pic/vid is a good idea but you dont need an "Emily" holding a telephon.... and yes sometimes there arent the right Videos, but!! i really really strongly recommend, that you take ONE!!!! actress for your MC. It doesnt matter if you see a woman whipping a man from behind if the body is similiar to your Emily but the face the interactions must be always the same woman, else how to i itentify with her. A good story needs a protagonist, from whom i dream in the night when i get punished!? and not some random faces/women every time another!

So in my Opinion: First make a good story and dont bother with many vids/pics to much and those you chose first priority always ONE!/SAME woman.. of course if you have "one Michael" too very good.

For my arguments download "The Compan" and check it out there you see each char has his/her own Pic/Vid Data and if something "special" is needed there are closeups, where you cant see a face ;-)
 
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Lets take the "spitting issue" ^^ You dont need 3Vids/pics only one is enough. The imersion comes with good writting and i agree underlayed with a good pic/vid is a good idea but you dont need an "Emily" holding a telephon.... and yes sometimes there arent the right Videos, but!! i really really strongly recommend, that you take ONE!!!! actress for your MC. It doesnt matter if you see a woman whipping a man from behind if the body is similiar to your Emily but the face the interactions must be always the same woman, else how to i itentify with her. A good story needs a protagonist, from whom i dream in the night when i get punished!? and not some random faces/women every time another!

So in my Opinion: First make a good story and dont bother with many vids/pics to much and those you chose first priority always ONE!/SAME woman.. of course if you have "one Michael" too very good.

For my arguments download "The Compan" and check it out there you see each char has his/her own Pic/Vid Data and if something "special" is needed there are closeups, where you cant see a face ;-)
Thank you, I wrote out the story a bit but haven’t added any new pictures yet, so I think imma write till the end of the first act maybe, and then revamp the character pics and interactions. Appreciate the feedback and advice :)
 

Gummy_Rubric

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Apr 16, 2020
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As someone that works on a game that uses real porn. This is some advice that might help you. What I do is come up with a rough outline for a scene. Then I go looking for a image set or movie I can chop up to use for the scene. Once I find this, I then write the scene to match the image/video I found. That way the text and images/video match much better and if it is a scene that goes several steps you use the same image/video sets so they match. Obviously long term you can't make them all match but you can make self contained scenes match, which helps a lot for immersion and players seem to appreciate the effort.
Great advice, my issue is I write the scenes and go looking for pics and videos to match it. But that can be much more difficult cuz then I end up just scrolling through a bunch of porn trying to find one. I like the approach you gave and will most likely use it. My only concern was that less porn means less ppl who will enjoy it, but that’s kind of hypocritical because I want ppl to read the story too. Let’s see how the next updates look, I’m looking forward to your input in the future. Thank you
 
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