VN - Ren'Py - Spider Gwen [v0.0.1 NSFW] [AdultVNComix]

More of a proof of concept than a first chapter, but it shows some promise.

I like that it provides a fresh origin story for the character - this is not the same Gwen Stacy known as Ghost Spider in published comics. The nod to The Fly - and by extension to Spidey 2099 - is clever, too.

I get that the goal was to stand out from the pack visually, and evoke a drawn-art look as well, but I can't say I'm fond of the "posterized" style applied to the frames - maybe tone down that effect some?

As it stands the game has less than 5 minutes of content(and that's stretching it). Pretty much the whole thing can be experienced by clicking through the pictures below the download links. There's no story when meeting any characters and you're just thrust in immediatly with no clue about who knows who. I don't wanna discourage the dev cause I think he has a decent idea here but damn this first release is terrible.