I have to agree with people who pointed out that the English translation is worse than what you get from machine translation. It's mystifying when there's free machine translation available. The dev would do well to learn from the design of other games -- for instance, the description of the specific LI's could have functionality to move from one person's details to the next person's details without going back to the overall listing. It's difficult enough to follow the story that I don't have an opinion of that at this point.